Summary: Harry comes back from serving detention with Ron and finds Ginny and Dean in a rather compromising position. A strange and confusing set of new feelings erupts... like wanting to punch Dean Thomas senseless. But what's confusing Harry most of all is that Ginny no longer seems to be just Ron's little sister... she's a beautiful girl, standing right under his nose-- exactly where he hadn't been looking.
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I absolutely love your story! It's ridiculous the kind of glee I get from your descriptions of Harry's thought processes. Absolutely brilliant! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: It's ridiculous the kind of glee I get from such wonderful reviews! Thanks so much!
**blushes** Yes, I loved my shootout, as it were. I felt so special! I understand how you feel about reviews ... they make you feel so darn good, don't they? Eagerly and (trying to be) patiently awaiting the next chapter. Lori :)
Author's Response: Yes, reviews are wonderful. :)
How far will a person go in the pursuit of true love, a person who is not the lucky chosen few…
Part 2 of MY GUARDIAN ANGEL series:
1.My Guardian Angel 2.When I See Only You 3.The Boy Next Door
Oh, wow! Brilliant chapter. I'm still waiting for there to be some repercussions for Aria seducing a student, but I love the drama/angst you have going on between Harry and Ginny. Brilliant!
Author's Response: I ship Harry and Ginny. I truly believe their love is pure and eternal, but I love writing them having all kinds of problems for some reason. Thanks for your encouragement. Keep your reviews coming.
Oooooh...am I supposed to hate Aria, because I really, really do. Excellent chapter. I look forward to the next.
Author's Response: Thanks. Many readers found the story not focusing on Ginny+Harry and instead emphasizing too much on Aria+Harry. I agree but I want to make a point of something becoming so much more precious after having lost it.
Summary: In this sweet one-shot, Lily receives a note from James one night, and finally admits to herself and to him her true feelings...
Even when you rumple your hair.
I hate that I’ve come to expect,
That life without you I can’t bear.
(Inspired by Kat's poem in 10 Things I Hate About You )
Very sweet! Good job!
Summary: This story follows the Trio, Bill Fleur and Ginny after Hogwarts, Engagements and Marriages... and children. Bill and Fleur's daughter Millie is haunted at Hogwarts by her younger sister. The only “abnormal” thing about this haunting? She was believed dead … but is most definitely alive.
Author's Response: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good cliffie, Steph. I look forward to seeing how the girls react to being split up... who will be kept together? Who will get sent to slytherin???? YIKES! I'm happy to see your chapters being approved without the trouble you experienced earlier. Yay Chelsea! (That's your mod's name, right?) nehoo, keep on writing. I shall try to do the same. The first to review I see. mwahaha....
Author's Response: Awww! Thanks luv. Such a kind review...pretty decent sized too...erm...what am i going to do??? HE'S DEAD!!! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO???
Yay for Lurid! The battle ensues... go Harry! I shall be awaiting ch14.
Author's Response: *dies!* What a perfect day! The end of school, lots of lovely spam, PM\'s *dies again* Could this day get better???? It\'s highly Ironic, I am listening to Daniel Powter - Bad Day ;-) ♥ Thanks so much, hun!!
Yaaaaaaay! Keep 'em coming!
Author's Response: Lori! You can do better than thats after i spend nearly a whole week with your next email in a draft coz im too lazy to send it!!!! Thats for the enthusiasm tho mate! HAHAHA so proud, my 700 word essay got an A+ coz Im just that fabulous! (fab enought hat it took me 2 days for a 100 word essay ='()
Hey, Steph! I thought I should check your story out since you're so kind in reviewing mine. Great start. I think you're an amazing writer for your age. You have a very descriptive style, and I like the Bill/Fleur storyline. Good idea with Voldemort recruiting (kidnapping) children - I wouldn't put it past him. I've added your story to my favourites, so I'll keep checking for updates. ;)
Author's Response: Hey Lori! Thanks so much for reviewing, it meach so much to me when i get reviews. You get that feeling full of warm fuzzy's! *smiles then laughs at self at lack of humor* I'm not really that funny...well maybe just a little bit so everyone gimme a break when the next chapter comes out. I tried so hard!!!
OOOH! Check out all those reviews! Well done, Stef!
Author's Response: All thanks to you, mate! Have a good holidays! ~Steph~ OMG! 26 days, 7 mins and 52 secs to HP 1/2-BP! YAYAYAYAYAY!
Hey, Steph! I really liked this chapter. It made my skin crawl (that's a good thing, in this case anyway...) You're developing an interesting, intertwining story. Good job. I'm out of town for the next few days, but I'll get to your next chapter when I get back. :D
Author's Response: It's all thanks to you! ::Hands out fresh [food tech made] cookies:: I hope you update soon Lori, I've been hanging on your story for lets, count them... since may... 6 months? WOW. I'm in love ;)
;D Eeeek! I don't know where your going with this, Steph, but you've definitely got us hanging. Thanks for the LUB!
Author's Response: :D LuBhead, you have nothing to fear! Well, yes.. kinda. But do not fear TOO much! *insert evil sounding laugh here*
I really liked how you brought in some Aussie history and tied it in with the magical world. I'm also interested in seeing what role the new characters will play. Good job, Steph!
Author's Response: THANKEETHANKEETHANKEETHANKEE!
And Yes, was due time some Aussie's our fine, awesomeatic country! I'm proud of Australia!
I assume you're referring to Miles? *smirk* only time shall tell. Now, i have regional to go to, write more Malicious, and most importantly,. WeetBix to eat!
My reviews a little too brief for ya????? You know I think you're great, Stef. I'm waiting for ch7, although I guess I should get some writing done myself. Oh well, I'm going away this weekend where there will be no distractions so I should be able to spend tons of time writing. Looking forward to your next chapter. Hopefully they'll get ch6 up soon for ya! Hols have finally arrived! Yay!
Author's Response: Erm... didnt I send you chapter 7 AND 6? Meh stoopid internet...
Sorry it took so long, mate! Oooh, I knew someone would be sent to Slytherin! I liked that it was Giselle because there's definitely some history there. Well done.
Author's Response: Gee.. wonder how you knew that?!? **Feins shock** anyway, glad to know you're back, I missed you terribly!
Good cliffie, Steph! It will be interesting to see how far those Slytherins get before Harry and Dumbledore put a stop to it.
Author's Response: We have a thing in common for cliffies dont we now? Well thankyou for the review, hopefully soon you'll have cause to post another. Chapter 9 posted a few days ago!
Woohoo! I finally got to reading this chapter. Great, GREAT ideas Stef. I love the necklace idea. I look forward to finding out what role they play in future chapters. Apparently, I've got some beta-ing to do (hehe), so I'm off to do that! :)
Author's Response: I was very surprised when i got an email asking if they can be my beta. Sneaky lil thing wanted a sneak peek at the next chapters! I told them the 'position has been filled' by the 'generous of spirit, noble and selfless' Lori. (Another nerdy reference for you Lor) I guess I idolise Dobby is BIT too much....
The Potters and The Blacks, a Family Torn Apart ... by Lurid
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]
Summary: A One-Shot written based on the events that happened that fateful Halloween night. This particular Fic was written when I was in Year 7 for an English "Harry Potter Book Review" task, and is now on the screens of your computers three years later. (Pre-OotP)
Woweee... I'm the first to review! :D I can't believe you wrote this when you were so young (not that you're old now...). You did a decent job of developing the characters, creating suspense, and portraying emotion. There's a few grammatical errors and phrasing issues that my beta fingers were twitching at, but overall, a job well done. I really liked the parts with James and Lily and Sirius and Peter. As a much older and experienced writer now (hehe), I would have liked to see you expand on those areas a bit more (just because I know you can do it) ;) Good job, Steph! Oh, and I'm off to beta ch11 for ya. Thanks for being patient.
Not that you're that old, either :D I'll let your beta fingers twitch a little longer. Give you some time off, I'f you'd like it. Just lemme[ny] know.
That i can [expand, I mean] i wanted to stay true to the 11-year of me. I want people to see how much I've developed. But the more noticable issues, i will deal with.
Rofl, the original spell was "Explodinatous." IO had not yet discovered JKR's talent for creating spells. Me, i like Latin. Sounds fancy.What woud i do without you, Lori?
Summary: Hermione piles it on, encourages it all, welcomes the workload. But when she suddenly cracks in favour of things to better fulfill her life, what happens to the work?
What happens when it all falls part, and life just becomes too much to bear?
Look at me! I finally got to read this. I really enjoyed it. I must say, my friend, your grammar has come a long way. There's only a few typos that I would nitpick over, but nothing major. Yay for you and your brilliance. The 'self-analysis' of the character is great. Her musings are very believable and I think a lot of readers would be able to relate to her. I really liked her wish to be a fictional character, with no complications or heart ache. Bravo!
Author's Response: =D because she\'s such a bookworm, she wanst to be a character =) Thank you SO much for stopping by! Typos are hopefully reducing in size, and grammer? All thanks to you! ♥