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Hello! I'm currently trying to work up the nerve to write a fic of my own, and enjoying reading the fruits of other people's labors way too much.
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Oblivious by Pallas
Rated: [Reviews - 559]

Summary: What if there were more to Remus Lupin's bite than a badly timed stroll in the woods? The arrival of a feral invokes secrets of the past and terror for the present...

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 162508 Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 08/27/05


Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 13: Family Ties Part 1

the length of your chapters is not a bad thing--it simply gives you enough room to fully develop your characters.

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 15: Into the Woods

this is terrifying.

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 6: The Werewolf Lesson

I really like the way you write lupin's voice. it seems very true to his character. I just read a fic where lupin sounded like an american teenage girl....you put just the right amount of sensitivity and wisdom and humor and sadness into him.

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 8: A Little Time to Heal

the way you write lupin and tonks, I just don't think it is right for them to end up together. I usually like that pairing, but in this story it just doesn't seem appropriate.

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 9: Marked

why can't poppy make the scars go away?

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 24: Facing the Music

oh man, i feel so sorry for lupin. idiot.

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 25: The Aconite Maelstrom

Danae Trebond---!!!!! nice one..

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 27: Too Close to Home

yeah, this is an evil cliffie.

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 09/23/07 Title: Chapter 41: A Quiet Word

I really, really like this. excellent.

 

An Unlikely Pair by Kyte
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 195]

Summary: Draco Malfoy finds something out about Hermione Granger and Harry Potter, that other people must not find out about! But in return for not telling anyone Draco is asking for something...

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15473 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/11/04 Updated: 12/01/04


Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 02/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Deal

the only thing that marrs this ridiculously funny chapter is hermione's agreement with draco at the end. she needs to put up a fight. but other than that...I love dumbledore, I love draco's proposal...this could get silly really fast. I love it.

 

Summary: Hermione describes her Ron troubles in this series of hilarious journal entries, notes passed in class, and lists. And...Mrs Norris is a duck?

NOTE: This was written quite some time ago, in my younger years. It was my first story...which should explain a lot.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5282 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/12/04 Updated: 11/25/04


Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 08/15/06 Title: Chapter 4: Detention isn't always bad

I'm mock_turtle's grand auntie. Mock (that's what I call her) is visiting for the weekend. I THOROUGHLY enjoyed reading your story. I'm NOT a H.P. "fan" nor reader but Mock took me to 2 H.P. movies. Your story reminded me how much I enjoyed the H.P. chararacters. I can't wait for more.

 

Finally by Mary
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: "You need to knock, and you need to turn and run. You need a million things, but most of all, you need him." Last in the 'Final Goodbye' Trilogy, HGSS, Post Hogwarts, COMPLETE

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1310 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/21/04 Updated: 11/21/04


Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 03/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Finally

awww...

 

Summary: After unwittingly consuming a potion, Harry and Draco switch personalities. And though he's horrified at his niceness initially, Draco's starting to have a very warm, fuzzy feeling for a certain Mudblood...

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 12149 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/24/04 Updated: 05/24/07


Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 05/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Nice? Draco Malfoy?

question--what happens to the prophecy if harry's personality changes and he no longer has "power the dark lord knows not" ie love?

 

Summary: Hermione Granger, fresh out of a Dublin Witchcraft University is owled by Professor Dumbledore to come and talk to him about a job opening. Setting all her fears aside about being face to face with the Potion Master she fell in love with in her 7th year, she goes back to Hogwarts. HG/SS

Categories: Hermione/Snape Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6831 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/25/04 Updated: 03/25/05


Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 6: Three Little Words

"white rot iron chair "
actually, I think it is "wraught-iron"

 

Lacrima Serpentis by Insecurity
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 311]

Summary: This story is set in the dystopian society of Wizarding England under the control of Voldemort. Fifteen years after leaving Hogwarts, Harry Potter is in hiding; he fears the words of the Prophecy and has lost the will to fight. This story tells the tale of an adult Hermione who sacrifices everything: her family, her moral beliefs and eventually her dignity, in order to save the Wizarding world. She becomes a Death Eater under the recommendation of someone she barely trusts. She struggles to find the courage and strength, but with every choice she makes she gets deeper and deeper into danger.




Chapter 33 is finally up. Thank you for your support and patience..

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 117014 Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/27/04 Updated: 09/08/06


Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 08/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, so I was going to bed last night and I thought of some more questions that may or may not be answered after ch 15 or so.
Were HG and SS actually married, like in a ceremony? was there any legal process?
What was the actual curse that Hermione used on Neville? was it Stupefy or Avada K?
What did hermione say to her kids before she left them? do they know she's a witch? is she planning on visiting them after her troubles are over, assuming she's still alive?
Does Malfoy Sr. know when she kills neville that she is hermione?
What was hermione's fake name that she entered azkaban under?
And finally, how did hermione meet her first husband? assuming that her first child is his child too, she would have to have met him while working in the order. This brings about the question, is her first child also the child of her first husband?
I love your writing. It makes me think ;)

Author's Response: Hiya - thank you for the interest you have taken in my story. All the reviews have made me smile! You have a lot of questions, some which I will have to think carefully about. Hermione isn\'t married to Snape, that\'s just a cover-up plan to get her into Azkaban, and I never actually thought up an alias name for her (that\'s bad, isn\'t it?) Lucius discovers Hermione\'s identity once Draco tells her - it is he who manages to recognise her, seeing as they were at school together. She met her husband in the Muggle world - she is Muggleborn, so she would have met him whilst visiting her parents. She has two children with him: George and Harriet. No, they don\'t know she\'s a witch. She left them without telling them where she is. She\'s not sure if she will return to them after all that has happened at Azkaban. Oh, and it was AK that she used but she was under the influence of Confundus and so she confused it for the Stunning Spell. I hope this answers your questions sufficiently enough. Thank you for the reviews so far. Keep them coming!

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 08/15/06 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

justso you know, the plural of millennium is millennia. I am a terrible grammar fiend, though I usually try to ignore mistakes.
nice chapter!

Author's Response: Okidoke *makes note* Glad you enjoyed the chap!

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 08/12/06 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm loving the poetry :)

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 08/12/06 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

You go to Oxford. total jealousy from the American (moi). again, I love the story, etc etc, but I still think snape is too chatty.

Author's Response: I visited Oxford for an interview last December. I didn\'t get in. It\'s a great place but I now prefer Cambridge... hehe! I might be going to Durham next year if I achieve my grades.

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 08/12/06 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Okay, so it's my own fault, but I've been watching "I Claudius" (BBC, based on book by Robert Graves, about the intrigues, excesses, and affairs of the imperial roman family) and Hermione is really starting to remind me of all the ambitious, power-hungry roman ladies, particularly Livia and Messalina. Hermione is irritating me. I don't think I like her pregnant.

Is there a spell for abortion? does hermione ever consider this?

and how is it that 12 grimmauld place was revealed by creevy? is there no secret-keeper?

 
Reviewer: mock_turtle Signed
Date: 08/26/06 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

what happens to someone who's pregnant if they drink polyjuice potion? what happens to the baby? what happens if the person who the pregnant person changes into is male? what does the polyjuice potion do to your integral anatomy?

Author's Response: Interesting question. I have a friend whose studying anatomy at the moment, I may ask her. But don\'t worry - it isn\'t Hermione who takes the Polyjuice Potion!

 
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