I love the way you wrote this, I love that you did put a little bit of humor to the story...thanks for not letting anything else happen between them. It wouldn't have been right...just not now...OMG! But they're so perfect for each other...keep up your writing..!
its reallllllyy good and i can't wait for you to write more. im so intrigued!!! i need to kno wuts gonna happennn!! soon!!!! plz go on