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Things Change by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 78]

Summary:

James Potter has changed: no longer an arrogant, irresponsible prankster, he has matured into a responsible Head Boy with tops marks in Transfiguration. Lily Evans has changed as well: normally studious and in control, she has lost focus as she struggles with Head Girl responsibilities and N.E.W.T level studies. An unexpected encounter in the corridors one weekend leads to several startling realizations, the least of which is that things have definitely changed between James Potter and Lily Evans.

This story was nominated for a 2010 QSQ and is now complete.



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 30679 Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/07/10 Updated: 11/26/10


Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 10/21/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Found the story last night, n just cudnt stop reading it till the end! (The result being that i went to sleep around 4 a.m!!... no, i am not a slow reader, startd at 2.. a.m that is :p) n i liked it so much that here i am again hoping that u have somehow put up the next chapter overnight!! :D plz plz put it up as soon as possible.. cant wait to see what happens next! by the way, i luv ur portrayal of the marauders n their friendship. gud job! thumbs up!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. It made my day when I got it. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story that much. Hopefully the next chapter won't be too long. Thank you for the compliment on the Marauders. I've written other stories about James/Lily if you are interested. I really appreciate the review, thanks again! ~Gina :)

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 12/12/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Niiiice!! although i wish it never ended but there wasnt much left i suppose...so it was a nice, satisfying last chapter to a perfect lily/james story! like i said before, gr8 job! and i am definitely going to read more l-j by u!! keep writing! :D

 

A Different Kind of Magic by unjellify
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 108]

Summary: James Potter is Head Boy and Gryffindor Quidditch captain in his seventh year at Hogwarts. He has three best friends and his life seems perfect--except that Lily Evans, the only girl he's ever loved, can't stand him.

Lily Evans is Head Girl and top of their class. She's always been disgusted by James' arrogance, yet she can't seem to stop blushing when he's around.

As their Head Boy and Girl duties bring them together, can James find a way to win Lily's love?

A Different Kind of Magic has been nominated for the 2011 Quicksilver Quills: Best Canon Romance. Thank you!



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 39922 Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Published:
08/05/10 Updated: 08/12/13


Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 07/18/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Missing

O Sirius!!!

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 06/11/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Flying Lessons

Aww! Such a sweet chapter!! Luvd it! :)
i found this story 2-3 days ago while looking for some light reading.. I am having my finals, so didn't want to start a novel, as i wouldn't have been able to put it down! :/ so i was searching for a james/lilly fanfic (my favourite category!) n came across this one, n loved it.
N today while taking a break frm studying to refresh my saturated mind, i just checked on the off-chance that u might have updated it, n it was such a nice surprise to see that you had! Thanx for brightening my mood, this being the only highlight of my day. :)

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 06/11/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Flying Lessons

Coming back to the story, i luv ur portrayal of all the characters, they r perfect, exactly as they should be. :) i thought that Gmariam is the best james/lilly author, but i like you just as much now. Great job, thumbs up! N keep writing. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for both lovely reviews!! I love the feedback and I'm glad you like the story. Also, I've read Gmariam's work and it's awesome, so I really appreciate the comparison. Good luck on your finals!

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 06/22/11 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

:/ why didn't he just tell her that he had to go away?! :( she'll b so heartbroken!! :(
I liked the chapter, otherwise.. Loved james n remus' exchange!! :) I have heard the quote many times but never the whole thing, just the 2nd part. I like the whole quote better!! So thanx for this addition in my general knowledge! :)
O n thanx for updating the chapter so soon, it was a very pleasant surprise!.. Plz continue writing, luv it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful review! I like the whole Congreve quote better too. In answer to your question, James hasn't been telling anyone about his mum because he doesn't want to burden anyone else, and everyone would be pitying him, which he doesn't want. I think he and Harry share that trait. Then when Lily was upset already he would have only added to her misery by telling her, but he needed to be there for her anyway. Needless to say, very conflicted. And I was surprised at how fast I wrote this chapter as well; I think it's a record xD

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 06/22/11 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Black Holes and Revelations

O n plz make the next chapter a long one if possible. :)

Author's Response: I'll try!

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 07/19/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Missing

wth!! I wrote a long review!!! And for some obscure reason only 'O sirius" got posted out of the whole thing.. which looks kindof silly. :(
Anyway, what i said was that this was such a sweet chapter and that i loved every single moment of it! Sirius is a sweetheart! Loved his intervention! and the protectiveness of his friend's girl.

Author's Response: I didn't actually find that out of the ordinary, since I end up thinking "Oh, Sirius" quite a lot whenever I read the Harry Potter books! :) Yes, Sirius has many faults, but he's very, very loyal, which is something I wanted to bring out in this chapter. Oh and thanks for the review, especially since you had to repost it!

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 07/19/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Missing

Hmm.. again half of my review got lost while getting posted! :(
(writing this for the 3rd time n hoping this will get posted) I somehow got this idea into my head that this chapter will be a mopey one, full of misery. m so glad it wasn't!! :) Thanx for making this a good, long one. Love ur writing, eagerly waiting for more! :)
P.S: Why didn't sirius simply send james an owl? Asking him what was up, i mean.

Author's Response: Well, thank you very much for making such an effort to review! I appreciate the feedback. And, while there is a healthy dose of angst in this chapter, I didn't want to make it too mopey, because I think that Lily is ultimately a very strong character. I do remember that you reviewed asking for a long chapter, so I'm glad I could deliver! Sirius did send James an owl, but James just didn't answer. You'll find out why in Chapter 11!

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 08/25/12 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Returns and Regrets

Hey!!! When r u going to post the next chapter? Its been such a long time ive started to forget the rest of the story, which btw is great. please hurry up.

Author's Response: Chapter 15 still needs Something Else, if that makes any sense. I've got about 1500 words written, but it still needs work and with school I have very little time to work on it. I'll try & thanks for reviewing!

 

Stars Apart by Willow Rosenberg
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 431]

Summary: The sequel to “Trickster”: The Marauders return to Hogwarts for their seventh and final year. Lily and James juggle more responsibility than ever, and James learns that convincing Lily to go on an actual date with him is harder than he would have imagined. Remus frets about post-Hogwarts life while Peter drifts even further from his friends. But when Sirius discovers a group of fourth-years who are bound and determined to steal the Marauders’ title of Greatest Hogwarts Troublemakers he wages war, rallying his friends so they can maintain their legacy. Meanwhile, outside the castle grounds, Voldemort is gathering supporters in unending preparation for a much darker battle…

and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

-E. E. Cummings

September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 107059 Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/22/10 Updated: 06/22/12


Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 09/01/12 Title: Chapter 19: Fix You

Lovely ending to the chapter. Poor Lupin. Made me realize how alone he must have been after it all went down. all his friends dead or in azkaban.

Author's Response: Right?? The marauders all have pretty tragic stories, but his is usually the one that hits me the most, just because, you know, he's the only one left for so long.

 

As Luck Would Have It by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Lily Evans is having a bad day. When she decides to take a sip of Felix Felicis, things turn out quite different than she anticipates--for both her and James Potter.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6713 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/02/10 Updated: 12/02/10


Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 12/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: As Luck Would Have It

Nice one. me likey!! :) hm.. i dont think it had anything to do with the potion getting old, cuz harry takes it after almost half a year n then the others b4 the hogwarts duel which is right at the end of the year, in hbp, n it workd both times.. maybe it was bcuz lily herself wasnt clear about what she wanted... i would love to know wat u had in mind!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for reading another one of my J/L stories! I'm glad you liked this one. As for the potion...I really do leave it up to the reader. It definitely didn't work, but whether it was old, a bad batch, or just misued is up to you. ;) Thanks so much for leaving such a nice review, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)

 

Raindrops by Gmariam
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 248]

Summary:

He returned with a quiet sadness and a surprising new responsibility to keep him focused. She returned with a misplaced bitterness and the matching position that forced them to work with one another. Yet fear, resentment, and stubborn arrogance kept pushing them apart, even when they were meant to be together.
Winner, Quicksilver Quill for Best Canon Romance. Thank you!!


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 88679 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/20/11 Updated: 12/20/11


Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 12/15/11 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

hey! Ive bin following this story for a while now. Its really good. I enjoyed it alot. I especially like James. In this story he is exactly like i imagined him to me. Great job.

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 12/15/11 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

hey! Ive bin following this story for a while now. Its really good. I enjoyed it alot. I especially like James. In this story he is exactly like i imagined him to me. Great job.

 

High by Equinox Chick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 233]

Summary: Past Featured StoryScorpius Malfoy is the Seeker for Slytherin. Not only that, he's the best Seeker at Hogwarts, and it's his catches that win matches. But this year things are different; Albus Potter has switched to Chaser and the new Gryffindor Seeker is his annoying little sister.

This is the story of how one match and one missed catch can change your life.

This story was accidentally deleted, so is being resubmitted ... very very quickly.

SQUEEEEE! High won the Best Next Generation QSQ award. Thank you so much for the everyone who has helped, either by beta'ing or encouraging me.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I'm not sure who I am at the moment, but there must be some Arthur Weasley blood in me.

Thank you Natalie (hestiajones) for doing the vast majority of the beta work on this, and Apurva for work on the early chapters

Squish for Natalie, Jess, Kara and Bob for helping me sort this out.

Due to an archive hissy fit regarding any story with a rating about 3rd-5th, I have temporarily lowered the rating on this story. However, I have NOT changed the content. This story is still a 6th-7th. You click at your own risk.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 135569 Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/04/11 Updated: 01/14/12


Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 08/25/12 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 -The Same Sweet Steps

loved this story.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am planning a sequel, atm, although it will be less about Scorpius and Lily and more about Scorpius in the Auror Dept . Thanks again ~Carole~

 

Seven Simple Years by HalfASlug
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 152]

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe story of Ron and Hermione through a series of missing moments. Who said love was simple?

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Strong Profanity

Word count: 105738 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/24/12 Updated: 01/17/13


Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 11/25/12 Title: Chapter 12: Twelve Practically Fail-Safe Ways to Charm Hermione

I love this story. Its so close to the actual story. Easily one of my favourite fanfictions. And its so refreshing for me to read it in moments of respite in my really long and exhausting exams. Anxiously looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Good luck with your exams! Nice reviews are great for breaking up time spent studying as well, so thank you!

 
Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 01/22/13 Title: Chapter 18: Nineteen Minutes Later

Really really awesome story. Easily one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. Everyone ws so in character and the missing moments blended in with the actual story extremely well. It made me want to re read the entire series. I have been following this story for a while now and i do hope you write something this fabulous again because i would greatly miss following this story. Amazing work. I love it and will read the entire story atleast once more. Its in my book marks. :D well done

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Wow, thank you! Anything that makes you want to read Potter can't be a bad thing, right? I will try to write something fabulous, don't worry! It's just a question as to whether I succeed or not, haha! And thank you for bookmarking me! It means a lot when people reread so yay :)

 

Summary: Lily has always had a picture in her head of her future -- a wistful, far-too-good-to-be-true image of happiness and sunshine and flowers, of her and James walking off into the sunset, unencumbered by the darkness within the most evil of people who walked this earth.

Of course, of course she should have known that things weren’t going to be that simple.

This is babewithbrains of Ravenclaw entering the first round of Madam Alex’s Character Clinic Triathlon: Major Characters.

ZOMG. This story has been nominated for a 2012 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Canon Romance. Thank you!


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 3640 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/29/12 Updated: 07/01/12


Reviewer: heliopath Signed
Date: 08/27/12 Title: Chapter 1: Second Childishness and Mere Oblivion

That was a very good story. enjoyed it alot.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

 
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