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:Coming soon: A Ginny/Draco story. Be prepared for the best.

:Mwa: Hey-lo! Well, I am 17 years old (turning 18 on May 31!) and am a senior! Yes, I will be graduating this year, so go '06! I like to write but I can never seem to finish what I start, so sorry for that. :S
Well, lets see what there is also about me...

:Favorite Ships: 1. Harry and Hermione
2. James and Lily
3. Draco and Ginny/Hermione

:Favorite Character: Harry Potter and Sirius Black.

:Misc: Well, my favorite color is purple and green and I have four dogs, 1 cat and three birds (eew). I lurve dogs though so... yup!

:Ending: Well, that is all I can really think of myself. I am tired because I just came from school after a week of spring break so I think I am ready to.... Zzzzz...

:Just so you know: If you are going to review, I just thought you should know that I really do appreciate critism as long as it is helpful. I do not appreciate, however, when your review is disrespectful and has no point. So please, make it worthy. Thanks! :)

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Fate by Liisa
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 598]

Summary: Sirius returns miraculously from behind the veil, uncovering a secret that's remainded hidden for too long and was obviously not supposed to be found...He undertakes the task of trying to fix the mistake he made all those years ago on Halloween night

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 135024 Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes
11/11/04 Updated: 11/15/05

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 04/04/05 Title: Chapter 32: It Was All Over

Hmm.. It was a little confusing at first but I think I got it down... 'Severus' is going to switch.(?) I am kind of sure. That would stink if he didn't. I kind of can't help but wonder where Harry was when Sirius got the news. Maybe I missed a part, will re-read. Well, incase you didn't know (or forgot, that is if I had already said this) I am totally lovin' this story! And I definetly(sp? heh) can't wait for the next chapter. And sadley, this story is almost over! Oh dear... This is not good. Well, I can't for the.. Wait, already said that. :~) 10

Author's Response: tentivly at this point, Severus is seriously (no pun intended) considering spying. he's going to switch no matter what, he's just not sure about spying :p Sorry if I didn't make that clear enough. As for where Harry was, that comes up in a little bit, not very important, but it's explained soon :) I'm so glad you're still enjoying this story and sticking with me through all of my wacky twists and turns! As for this story almost being over....don't think too hard. I'm planning on about 50 chapters at the moment, so there's still a fair amount to go :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/22/05 Title: Chapter 28: You're Not My Son

Go Sirius, come on you can do it. Hope that he didn't put a death mark on him. That would be horrible. Oh man. Well, I know that Sirius will live (only because you said so. Haha) So, all I can say is that I hope that James doesn't die (I am sure that Remus is safe in your hands). Can't wait for the next chapter! *Bites nails*

Author's Response: lol, yes I've rested everyone's fears about Sirius, but what about Arianna?? ::gasp:: lol.

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 05/07/05 Title: Chapter 39: Erased All Trace

Harry is one strong human being. I am not talking about physical but mental wise. I mean, if I were to get to know my parents Ėthe ones who risked their lives to just save mine- I would have been bawling and cursing the Gods, saying itís not fairÖ Heh, thatís me. I am glad though, that he at least has Remus and Sirius. :)

I saw one mistake. where Remus saw Harry talking with lily and JamesÖ You forgot to capitalize Lily.

Ok, well, now I know that it isnít that close to October 31. Because you said that school would start in a week. Hmm, wonder why they are leaving so soon then. And Snape just left the scene. Interesting on how he came out of his child-like hate.

Oh manÖ That really stinks. Having to go through all of that trouble, telling James and Lily and now they forget that Peter was a traitor! Man, oh man, oh man! Darn. Well, cute chapter. I only wish that they didnít forget. Just have to wait and see what is different when the time travelers get back into their own time. :) Carry on! Dani

Author's Response: Yay! another long review! I love those :) I'm glad you're still enjoying (most of) it! I've submitted the next chapter so be on the look out! Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 04/04/05 Title: Chapter 1: Behind the Veil

Ok, well now I know. I am sorry for double reviewing but I was reading all the reviews (I just like to do that when there is nothing else to read) and I came upon this: Authors Review: I solumly swear that I WILL NOT kill of Sirius in this story.... (no promises for anyone else :P ) ....................... Your going to kill Remus! B-but he is just as important as Sirius! No! Please, end my fear here! Or say something! Oh no.... (Again, sorry for double reviewing but this was important! I need to know.. I might forget.) *heart racing* ...

Author's Response: ah, one of the few to discover the wonders of author replies! Yes, I do give away quite a few things in my replies (which people should read before making assumptions) and you happened to stumble across a big one. I really don't want to say anything at this point to confirm or deny your interpretation of my words, so I'm simply going to say "wait, watch, and don't bite off all your fingernails just yet." ;)

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 04/17/05 Title: Chapter 36: Interlude Four: You Haven't Cried

Hahaha, I ~grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr~ you. Wow, usually I dread interludes but this was pretty good. Wow, wonder what happened! Hmm, and I wonder what color it was. Hopefully not green. Red at the most? Hm, well can't wait for the ____ __________! (Fill in the blank!) ((I only say that because I have said that in almost all of my reviews! )) :D

Author's Response: naw, the light was white, I'll give you that ;)

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 02/17/05 Title: Chapter 16: Don't You Dare

That was what I was waiting for. For Lily, James and Harry to just be together. Wow, it's weird to write those names together. But I would like to keep in habit of doing so, just because Harry deserves it. I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :D

Author's Response: isn't it weird? try writing them intereacting with each other :D glad you're still enjoying it!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 07/12/05 Title: Chapter 41: Or is It?

Wow. I sure have missed a lot. Everything is updated, and I am actually going to give it a try and review! ;P
:) I am so happy that Sirius didnít die! Yippee! Lol. Though you said you werenít going to, I still had to read it to believe it. And you didnít kill Remus. Donít worry I didnít bite my nails. :D Itís weird, after reading that chapter, which was really good, I actually canít think of anything to say. So, Iíll end it here and wait for your next chappie.

Enjoy your summer and carry on! Dani

Author's Response: yeah i keep my promises :D thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/12/05 Title: Chapter 24: Interlude Two: Back-up Plan

Oh oh, I know that it worked. You are just trying to trick me (right?). Well this should be definetly interesting if Snape is really back in time only because i want to see his reaction to seeing James. Lol, oh I am so excited! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So excited! :~) 10 [Puerto Rico!!!!! *hint- Usher live*]

Author's Response: trick you? little ol' me? ::gasp!:: how could you think of such a thing!?? :p glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 46: All Was Right


Actually, that was the perfect ending. I don't think I could think of a better one. I can't believe it's all over. Yea though, I am so happy that Remus, Sirius and Harry are all so happy and living together! :sigh: This was the perfect story (except for J&L dying, but that's never changed...). Atleast Harry was able to meet his parents though.
Sirius is alive. That's how it should be. Why did J.K. have to kill him? Why can't she go along with your story... oh well. Well, congrats for finishing such a long story. I mean it, I have problems finishing and you kept with it. Kudos.
Well, I found something that I wanted to point out to you. their coking was eatable... I take it you meant to put cooking right? That's all I could really find that looked wrong to me. I'm not good at find such stuff.
Well, it was lovely following along with your story. Shame it has to end.
See you,
10/10 :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind comments throughout my story! It was always fun to see a review from you and I hope I was able to live up to the expectations you wanted. Once again, thanks :D

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/12/05 Title: Chapter 6: You're Not Alone

Everytime I read a chapter in this story I have tears in my eyes and on the verge of crying... I can't cry though, seeing as I am in public and that would seem alittle weird to cry and having other people look at you. Anyways, if I was at home I would probably be crying freely, which would be a long time. It is just sad and perfect. I am so happy that Sirius is back and I feel so sorry for Harry. And Remus... Well, I love this story. I really do. I really can't wait till you update this story. :S Keep it up!

Author's Response: Wow! thanks so much for taking the time to review! I'm so glad you're enjoying it and that you are crying! (sounds weird :P ) But that's what you're supposed to do, so that's good!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 04/06/05 Title: Chapter 34: It Doesn't Make Sense

So, is that saying that Severus is going to help James and Lily live? Oh man, I am sorry but I got confused around the end of this chapter. Maybe it's because I am tired. I need to go to bed earlier, then I will re-read and say if I understand it any better. :) Well, I kind of knew that something bad was going to happen to Emily. I just had a feeling in the pit of my stomach (and it's nothing like the stomach ach i have right now) that she was going. Well, good cahpter and I can't fix the typos because I quickly have to got to go.. Sorry if i don't make secne. Cannt wait for the next chapter. 10

Author's Response: it's okay, this was a confusing chapter and that's partially my fault since I'm just adding onto the confusino you guys already have! I promise that a lot is explained in the next chapter, so watch out for it!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 09/14/05 Title: Chapter 42: A New Past

Well, I'm a little behind, aren't I? Please forgive me, I have been taking a break from Harry Potter (I know, gasp!) fan fictions- including my own stories- for school. :) '06 baby!

Anyways, my eyes are dead tired and need some rest but I had to read yours. Heh, work? What work? Heh heh, anyways, I just love your story. Yea, Sirius isn't a bad guy! Whoo hoo! Don't you just love happy en- wait, it's not over yet? Hmm, wonder what else you have to add. ':) Well, do carry on and take your time. No one should be rushed to write a fan fic. Hell, I seem to be having a major writing block on my story (two months long :X). Help! Anyways have fun working, because it is just so darn fun. Not.
Anyways, toodles! 9/10

Author's Response: lol okay :p lay off the sugar there :D thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 11/03/05 Title: Chapter 43: Try To Remember

Oh, I really don't want to cry. For all those who don't want to cry in public, start blinking. Gosh, you are just so gifted at making people cry. You have that wonderful power. Grrr you, I don't want to cry!

I just love Sirius and Harry together. Oh, Sirius is just the best and I love how you made Harry stop crying once he looked at him. Gives the heart a good feeling you know? I can't describe it, but it's there.

Now, You know that I already love your story. Why else would I review all the way from I believe chpt 6. --that's a long way-- But I also look up to you. You are a role model. you started at 11/04 and your still on a roll. Me, I can't write without a stupid, long writers block. Oh, heavenly role model, how do you do it? :)

Hey, keep it going.
Peace and love,
A nice 10 for you. Enjoy!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/16/05 Title: Chapter 26: For Once

Yea! I just love it when Harry and Jame talk. It is so perrrrfect! *Wipes eyes* Well, like I am sure I have said before, I am loving your story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :~) 10!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it. this chapter was hard to write so I'm glad everyone liked the end result :D

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 11/03/05 Title: Chapter 44: Try to Move On

0.0 Oooh. So it was Remus, eh? Oh boy, I wonder whats going to happen next. Oh, this is going to be short because I want to read the next one!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 11/03/05 Title: Chapter 45: Two Roads Colliding

:) <--- I don't know what to say so I am just going to smile. I am happy basically. Sirius is alive. :)
Carry on,
Dani 10

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/06/05 Title: Chapter 23: Blast That Man

No... Please don't kill him again. I swear, if he dies I am going to be so mad. You better not kill him. Don't do that to us........... He better not be dead. I... Omg. I can't stop crying. Something better happen because Sirius shouldn't be dead and Harry shouldn't have to go through that again...

Author's Response: if he died again I would be SO mad, I'd probably kill the author....wait....

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/06/05 Title: Chapter 23: Blast That Man

Grrr you.. How could you scare me like that? I swear, I had a heart attack with the way my heart throbbed. Grrrrrr you. GRRRRRRRRR! Can't wait for the next chapter. and no more scary parts. Grrr you.

Author's Response: ::snickers:: terribly sorry :p but I make no promises for not doing it again ;)

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/26/05 Title: Chapter 9: Ask Me Again

Finally it was updated. I understand, busy and such and such but no one is really updating.. Heh, I should talk. Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter. I am guess that is when Sirius (and Remus?) go and ask Harry. Hmm.

Author's Response: yes ::mopes:: it was sent back to me for Sirius and Remus being OOC so I had to change some stuff, but hopefully it'sll still work :)

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 04/04/05 Title: Chapter 31: Like A Sister

Yee-hah! Wow, that was a good chapter. Loads of action. Wonder what happened to You-Know-who? Hmm... Oh dear though, now Sirius is going to find out. *sigh* I feel so sorry for him. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: yes, I'm being awfully mean to poor Sirius in this story :( Terribly sorry, but I'm going to make it all better in the end, you'll see!

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