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:Coming soon: A Ginny/Draco story. Be prepared for the best.

:Mwa: Hey-lo! Well, I am 17 years old (turning 18 on May 31!) and am a senior! Yes, I will be graduating this year, so go '06! I like to write but I can never seem to finish what I start, so sorry for that. :S
Well, lets see what there is also about me...

:Favorite Ships: 1. Harry and Hermione
2. James and Lily
3. Draco and Ginny/Hermione

:Favorite Character: Harry Potter and Sirius Black.

:Misc: Well, my favorite color is purple and green and I have four dogs, 1 cat and three birds (eew). I lurve dogs though so... yup!

:Ending: Well, that is all I can really think of myself. I am tired because I just came from school after a week of spring break so I think I am ready to.... Zzzzz...

:Just so you know: If you are going to review, I just thought you should know that I really do appreciate critism as long as it is helpful. I do not appreciate, however, when your review is disrespectful and has no point. So please, make it worthy. Thanks! :)

Dani
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Summary:

It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.

But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.

But life is full of mistakes.

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"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.

“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”

“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.

Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.

Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 40943 Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Published:
11/28/04 Updated: 10/03/05


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/21/05 Title: Chapter 22: Never forget, never forgive?

Aww. This is such a cute story. It is so cute that it makes my heart pang. Lol, and its hilarious.. Poor ants *sobs* lol. Well, I am totally diggin' this story. Really. I love Sirius. OMG, I love that guy so much. Lets see, how many times has James asked out Lily? Lol, only Sirius was know. Well, I really can't wait for the next chapter only because this story is so awesome! :~) }):({ J&L4eva! }):({ 10

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 12/15/04 Title: None

Can't wait! :D

 
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 12/06/04 Title: None

I like it very much! Can't wait!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 05/15/05 Title: None

I'm just wondering. Are you still working on this story? Or are you just busy?
Just wondering... Dani

 
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 04/14/05 Title: None

whoa. A blow by blow fight. Interesting. Wow. Strong. Mind blowing. I can go on and on. My mouth is literally hanging open, well not any more but it was. Good job. Loved it. Fabulous! You're on fire baby! lol, well, can't wait for the next chapter. (Uh oh, Voldemort is still going to come back... duhn duhn duhn!)

 

No Inhibitions by GringottsVault711
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 82]

Summary: Ron accidentally takes a potion to free him from his every inhibition - with 'interesting' results. Will this finally be the push that makes him reveal to Hermione his true feelings? Not so much fluffy as funny.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2879 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/30/04 Updated: 11/30/04


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 12/31/04 Title: Chapter 1: No Inhibitions

That was so funny! Lol and cute. :D

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/01/05 Title: None

Aww.. That was so cute!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/16/05 Title: None

>.< uh oh. Lol, I have a feeling that a certain someone is going to be in trouble! Smoke out of his ears, lol. So many people will do anything for money. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Really? Someone is going to get in trouble? Who? Lol, just kidding. I'm glad you like it. :) Merci beaucoup

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/23/05 Title: None

Yea! It's weird to see Ginny so... just out of it. :~)

Author's Response: Yeah....well....read the response above you.....you'll see yeah......

 
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/09/05 Title: None

Hmm. This story gets you thinking. I mean, as I read this story I have to kind of like, decipher what you mean at some points. ANYWAYS, I really like your poems. I am not that much of a poem reader only because they are usually about flower life or such and such but yours is totally different. Grabbes my attention. I feel like its one of those poems where you snap instead just closing the book *Snap snap snap snap* Thats a compliment just to let you know. Well, I am diggin' this story so keep it up! You got talent on the poems! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D 10

Author's Response: Wow, thanx for the extra long review. I'm glad you read it. And yes I'd have to say my poetry is of a....um....different sort.....And thanx for the snaps....I re-submitted my chappie recently, so I hope it will be up soon.

 

Summary: Every story written about the Marauders has always been the same. Pranks, love, mischeif...But, what if there was another side to all of it? Another side to the fun? James Potter finds out sooner then expected that reality isn't just a bedtime story. It's real. And it's haunting him. How can he live out his days in Hogwarts as a regualar teenager when things start happeing that are beyond his control? Not to mention, the love he possess is slowly being taken from him...













CHAPTER 10 IS UP!!!!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 17839 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
12/07/04 Updated: 06/25/07


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 05/09/05 Title: Chapter 7: A Secret Told

This is a cute story but Lily and James’ relation moved a little too fast. Slow down a little. :) Ok, well I have to do this. I hope you don’t mind but I love leaving long reviews. Here goes *cracks fingers*.

Didn't Dumbledore here of what happened last night? ‘Here’ should be ‘hear’. James smiled and set the bowl aside. "You fainted so I brought you up here." After ‘aside’ you should have a comma. Same with this sentence, She glared at him. "And I had a right to faint! What were you doing on the grounds with a werewolf?!" she asked sharply. Get rid of the period and change that to a comma. You have a lot more of those, but I didn’t want to put them all down into this review. So, basically every time you have someone talk, add a comma. [Ex: She said, “Bla bla bla.” “Blabity blab,” he answered.] You get my drift?

"Yes, James Potter. I have. Ok, here is my opinion. It would honestly sound better if you had a comma after ‘Potter’ and before ‘I’. But that is my opinion.

Now, before that little… eh, momentary kissing part, Lily seemed a little OOC. You do a really good job, what with all of the characters you have to include, but watch out on those parts. Afterwards, I really liked the part where she was beating James, "James Potter, put me down! I have two legs! Don't make me jinx you!" Cute.

You have a really good story going on, you just need to watch your grammar. You seem to cut your sentences short. Don’t be afraid of a little comma here or there. Otherwise, this story is so cute! I love Lily and James. This is a cute story, very interesting with James and Lily having to share a same room (what was Dumbledore thinking?). Hmm… Well, carry on. Dani

 

With you by Kaily_Kiss
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 53]

Summary: I'm finished with this story! Hermione yells at Harry for never spending time with her. And she is pregnant. But shortly after Harry gets injured in a battle and Hermione fears she will lose him forever.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5222 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/11/04 Updated: 01/22/05


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/24/05 Title: Chapter 5: The blushing bride

:D I love Harry Potter. He is just da' bomb! Good story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! At first I thought no one would like the ending!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/16/05 Title: None

Hmm. So someone was spying on them? I really do like your writing style, it flows so well. Well, I can't wait for your next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! It's so great to see people who are enjoying my story! you'll find out more later! They're LOADS of surprises comming up!

 
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 02/17/05 Title: None

Hmmm... Who I happen to think it is, is either You-Know-Who or else a dementor. That is what I think. Well, I am happy that Malfoy is down. Interesting way on knowing him though, kind of get the feeling that he likes her? Wonder who is spying on them (most likely because of ... Heh, forgot her name. Oops). Well, that is just something I will have to wait for. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

 
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 02/17/05 Title: None

Delete what I just said on that. Wrong chapter... Heh

 
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 02/17/05 Title: None

Hmmm... Who I happen to think it is, is either You-Know-Who or else a dementor. That is what I think. Well, I am happy that Malfoy is down. Interesting way on knowing him though, kind of get the feeling that he likes her? Wonder who is spying on them (most likely because of ... Heh, forgot her name. Oops). Well, that is just something I will have to wait for. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

Author's Response: Thanks for your input and lovely comment. A lot of questions you have, eh? Well, as much as I just want to tell you everything that happens to save me the time of writing all this, I shall strongly refrain myself. Thanks a lot for droping by, and I hope you continue reading and (of course) enjoying!

 
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/20/05 Title: None

Ooh, Malfoy knows her? This should be interesting. I wonder who was spying on them... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: :):):)!!! Yes, it starts to get interesting! I submitted chapter five, so look for it at a fiction site near you! Random Info: Chapter four's ending is my favorite ending that I've came up with so far! I usually try to end all chapters in a cliffhanger (no matter how small it is) and that one, I'm proud to say, I am quite fond of! More chapters to come! Thanx for reading, and I always love your reviews! You guys are the best! :)!

Author's Response: EDIT: It's chapter FIVE'S ending that I like the best! Sorry, I got a little mixed up! It's up, you may all go read at your risk!

 

Summary: This story is written from Hermione's notebooks, her point of view. Bare feet, Hogsmeade trips, quidditch games, and broken hearts.

Nik, you promised...

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 61059 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
12/21/04 Updated: 06/14/06


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 07/29/05 Title: Chapter 17: As Fate Would Have It

0.0 Wow. This story is awesome! Even though HBP is totally a different story, along with a different ship, that still doesn't change the fact that I am a H/Hr shipper. And I just love this story! It's so cute, even with Ginny/Draco. I like that ship too, somewhat. :)

Well, keep it going! Dani!

Author's Response: I'm glad you still support my story! Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/27/06 Title: Chapter 20: Sugar and Spice

Awww. It was cute, real cute. But Malfoy seemed a little too nice then. I know that he really likes Ginny but I always kind of figured that he would still have that... edge to him, you know?

Oh, I think I found something wrong. “How we can either fight about it, or treat the matter like civilized human beings,” he said, extending his hand. I'm guessing you meant for it to say "Now we can... instead of the 'how'. Unless that is how you wanted it to be.

Good job, Dani.

 
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 07/15/05 Title: Chapter 16: Messing Up

Lol. This is such a good story. I am glad that you are not going to stop updating (or are going to relate this to the HBP) because of the... HBP- I seem to be replaying myself. *Cough* Anyways, I love this story. Harry is so cute. I wish I met a boy like him.
Well, can't wait until you are able to update again. Which will be in a few days. Enjoy the book! Dani 10/10

Author's Response: If you're glad, I'm glad. :)

 
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