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12/03/04




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:Coming soon: A Ginny/Draco story. Be prepared for the best.

:Mwa: Hey-lo! Well, I am 17 years old (turning 18 on May 31!) and am a senior! Yes, I will be graduating this year, so go '06! I like to write but I can never seem to finish what I start, so sorry for that. :S
Well, lets see what there is also about me...

:Favorite Ships: 1. Harry and Hermione
2. James and Lily
3. Draco and Ginny/Hermione

:Favorite Character: Harry Potter and Sirius Black.

:Misc: Well, my favorite color is purple and green and I have four dogs, 1 cat and three birds (eew). I lurve dogs though so... yup!

:Ending: Well, that is all I can really think of myself. I am tired because I just came from school after a week of spring break so I think I am ready to.... Zzzzz...

:Just so you know: If you are going to review, I just thought you should know that I really do appreciate critism as long as it is helpful. I do not appreciate, however, when your review is disrespectful and has no point. So please, make it worthy. Thanks! :)

Dani
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Rated: Reviews
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Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/12/05 Title: None

*Raises eyebrows* Interesting. Billy Goats is different. Tell me, is the real Fellix like that? Is goats really his weakness? Lol, that would be cool and funny if so. Well --my usual saying-- Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Author's Response: Hey, I don't make this stuff up. Last year he declared that billy goats were his weakness, don't ask (because I don't have an answer) The next chapter is coming...eventually!



Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/06/05 Title: None

Lol, this story is so funny. :D I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks!



Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/29/05 Title: None

Lol, for now one when someone cuts me off I will say "You do not cut off the Dark Lord!" Lol, that would be so funny, even if I do get the weird looks at me. Oh, this is such a funky story. Keep it up! :D

Author's Response: Hahahahaha.....that's hilarious! I am SO doing that to my sister...



Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/24/05 Title: None

:D monkeys? Interesting choice... 10

Author's Response: Why not?



Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 02/10/05 Title: None

Good ending. :D I love how you are always up with new stories. Never keep is hanging around, bored. Yea!!!

Author's Response: I'd never keep you guys hanging around - glad you enjoyed it!



Cry Lily, God Just Cry by Lilysdancin

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 45 Reviews
Summary: This fic takes place the 1`st year Lily and James get out of Hogwarts and the couple you love to love are not together!! Find out what went wrong when they were going out 7th yr. through flashbacks Lily, James and the gang have of Hogwarts. Also, Portrays the lives Lily, James and all their friends had while young and on their own in the wizarding world. Story w/ lots of twists, humor, drama, suspense, romance. READ AND REVIEW Its different from most Lily James stories but in a good believable way with lotz of flashbacks!!
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 04/08/05 Title: Chapter 3: Freaking Idiot!

Ooooh, now I understand how everything is going on. Haha, i was like, weren't Lily and James supposed to be together during year 7? Well, this chapter answered my question. This is another good story of yours (I read your other one) and I really can't wait for another chapter of this fab story. Dani. Oh, and here is a nice 10 for ya'!



Indefinite Imprisonment by Botti_C

Rated: Professors • 27 Reviews
Summary: Ginny is the victim of a stupid joke, and when Draco tries to save her, they end up stuck together. Even after they're released, for some reason Ginny still feels imprisoned.
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 12/03/04 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter the first

Write more please!



James and Lily: Hate and Love: Life and Death by immortal_evil

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 537 Reviews
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It is ambitious Lily Evans' 7th and final year at Hogwarts. She is very excited about being one step closer to becoming an Auror and thrilled about being back to school altogether.

But there is one little annoyance: the Marauders. Specificially arrogant James Potter. He has been pestering her to go out with him, but she has coldly denied his wishes. She thinks this year will be no different to the past six school years.

But life is full of mistakes.

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"Just one minute.” Lily noticed footsteps heading in her direction. She saw a hand reach from between the screens and drop a flower onto her bedside table.

“Mr. Potter! Return to your dormitory immediately!”

“Alright, alright…” The hand disappeared.

Once Lily was sure that no one was in the wing, he lifted her head and saw what flower Potter had dropped.

Lily stuffed her head in her pillow and screamed a muffled scream that no one could hear.


Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 04/16/05 Title: Chapter 23: Griffindor Troubles

Is she saying she should be careful of James??? Hmm.



Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 05/22/05 Title: Chapter 24: Unspoken Wisdom

Oh, bad griffin...

Well, it was a bad griffin.

No idea what novel. And I have one mistake in your chapter. The italics. Sorry, you were obviously done with the 'mind chats' and you just kept with italics.. Thats all. Carry on, Dani

Author's Response: oh... that's a bad thing... very bad thing! thank you for pointing that out!



Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/21/05 Title: Chapter 22: Never forget, never forgive?

Aww. This is such a cute story. It is so cute that it makes my heart pang. Lol, and its hilarious.. Poor ants *sobs* lol. Well, I am totally diggin' this story. Really. I love Sirius. OMG, I love that guy so much. Lets see, how many times has James asked out Lily? Lol, only Sirius was know. Well, I really can't wait for the next chapter only because this story is so awesome! :~) }):({ J&L4eva! }):({ 10



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Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 12/15/04 Title: None

Can't wait! :D



Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 12/06/04 Title: None

I like it very much! Can't wait!



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Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 05/15/05 Title: None

I'm just wondering. Are you still working on this story? Or are you just busy?
Just wondering... Dani



Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 04/14/05 Title: None

whoa. A blow by blow fight. Interesting. Wow. Strong. Mind blowing. I can go on and on. My mouth is literally hanging open, well not any more but it was. Good job. Loved it. Fabulous! You're on fire baby! lol, well, can't wait for the next chapter. (Uh oh, Voldemort is still going to come back... duhn duhn duhn!)



No Inhibitions by GringottsVault711

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 82 Reviews
Summary: Ron accidentally takes a potion to free him from his every inhibition - with 'interesting' results. Will this finally be the push that makes him reveal to Hermione his true feelings? Not so much fluffy as funny.
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 12/31/04 Title: Chapter 1: No Inhibitions

That was so funny! Lol and cute. :D



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Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/01/05 Title: None

Aww.. That was so cute!



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Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 01/16/05 Title: None

>.< uh oh. Lol, I have a feeling that a certain someone is going to be in trouble! Smoke out of his ears, lol. So many people will do anything for money. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Really? Someone is going to get in trouble? Who? Lol, just kidding. I'm glad you like it. :) Merci beaucoup



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Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/23/05 Title: None

Yea! It's weird to see Ginny so... just out of it. :~)

Author's Response: Yeah....well....read the response above you.....you'll see yeah......



Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 03/09/05 Title: None

Hmm. This story gets you thinking. I mean, as I read this story I have to kind of like, decipher what you mean at some points. ANYWAYS, I really like your poems. I am not that much of a poem reader only because they are usually about flower life or such and such but yours is totally different. Grabbes my attention. I feel like its one of those poems where you snap instead just closing the book *Snap snap snap snap* Thats a compliment just to let you know. Well, I am diggin' this story so keep it up! You got talent on the poems! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D 10

Author's Response: Wow, thanx for the extra long review. I'm glad you read it. And yes I'd have to say my poetry is of a....um....different sort.....And thanx for the snaps....I re-submitted my chappie recently, so I hope it will be up soon.



Do You Believe in Love at First Kiss...? by The_Heir_of Gryffindor

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 149 Reviews
Summary: Every story written about the Marauders has always been the same. Pranks, love, mischeif...But, what if there was another side to all of it? Another side to the fun? James Potter finds out sooner then expected that reality isn't just a bedtime story. It's real. And it's haunting him. How can he live out his days in Hogwarts as a regualar teenager when things start happeing that are beyond his control? Not to mention, the love he possess is slowly being taken from him...













CHAPTER 10 IS UP!!!!
Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion Signed
Date: 05/09/05 Title: Chapter 7: A Secret Told

This is a cute story but Lily and James’ relation moved a little too fast. Slow down a little. :) Ok, well I have to do this. I hope you don’t mind but I love leaving long reviews. Here goes *cracks fingers*.

Didn't Dumbledore here of what happened last night? ‘Here’ should be ‘hear’. James smiled and set the bowl aside. "You fainted so I brought you up here." After ‘aside’ you should have a comma. Same with this sentence, She glared at him. "And I had a right to faint! What were you doing on the grounds with a werewolf?!" she asked sharply. Get rid of the period and change that to a comma. You have a lot more of those, but I didn’t want to put them all down into this review. So, basically every time you have someone talk, add a comma. [Ex: She said, “Bla bla bla.” “Blabity blab,” he answered.] You get my drift?

"Yes, James Potter. I have. Ok, here is my opinion. It would honestly sound better if you had a comma after ‘Potter’ and before ‘I’. But that is my opinion.

Now, before that little… eh, momentary kissing part, Lily seemed a little OOC. You do a really good job, what with all of the characters you have to include, but watch out on those parts. Afterwards, I really liked the part where she was beating James, "James Potter, put me down! I have two legs! Don't make me jinx you!" Cute.

You have a really good story going on, you just need to watch your grammar. You seem to cut your sentences short. Don’t be afraid of a little comma here or there. Otherwise, this story is so cute! I love Lily and James. This is a cute story, very interesting with James and Lily having to share a same room (what was Dumbledore thinking?). Hmm… Well, carry on. Dani