Well I felt some tears welling up for that one. Absolutely wonderful; brilliantly written. It's amazing that you wrote that in thirty-minutes! Again, awesome little story. I do love your detail, and subtle dialogue. You are going on my favorite authors list!
Oh my, what a wonderful ending! Keep it up Mary!
Ah, I do love the One-Shot HG/SS. As a fellow member of this outcast 'ship', I was relieved to find that there was actually a catagory for us here. Brilliant little tale!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the positive feedback. I am so happy they finally got a HG/SS category. Thanks.