Wow. This is story is very interesting....the writing is well. Pirates are pretty cool. Do the Dursley's go to the secret island too? It's pretty shocking that the trio are still best friends and have cubicles near eachother and are still keeping in touch. And the cliffhanger?! THAT'S EXCITING. You should have a marching band in the story too! Keep writing!
Author's Response: thanks! a marching band, huh? you must've seen that post i made at the forum talking about a harry potter marching band fic. that's gonna be a separate story. anyway, thanks for the review! i'll get around to continuing eventually.
Wands flying out......what the heck? Strange form of writing.....Fiona sounds kinda prissy...I don't know if I like her.....same with Harry's dad. I mean why do they have to be so mean...at least snape was honest...he told her that he sat alone since his second year and I'm sure those other guys (warewolf, harrys dad-day, and seriously black) knew that tradition as well. He isn't a rain cloud...he just prefers to be alone and they shouldn't tease him. I don't like how Fiona was like "I'll take that offer up" because I feel sooo bad for snape. They don't know what he had to go through.....it brings tears to muh eyes.....awwww I'm crying right now. Its super sad....HOPEFULLY people will be nicer to him and Fiona too. And black and white was a cool idea...BUT...i don't think they should hook up...but its your story and I'll still read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*CC 4 Life*
Author's Response: Yes. I do believe that Snape is definently misunderstood. I mean, James and Sirius always pick on him for no reason at all. Maybe Fiona will be able to get to know him a little better and won't leave him. Who knows? You may think Fiona is prissy, but Snape was mean to her, so I think she had a reason to have an attitude with him. That's my thinking. Keep reading *CC 4 Life*
where have you gone?
Where is the rest of your story??? It's like soooo good...they need to let you put it back up....so what if Lucious's age is queered up. It's ok w/me.
Author's Response: Thanks Michelle. I have heard your ranting on and off about the canon thing. It's not that big of a deal. I mess with it and hopefully it will be accepted. I love your constant enthusiasm and support. LYLAS...wait...you are.
hey man. you haven't updated. oh yeah i forgot....severus doesn't act like himself in the next chapter so you weren't updated. cool how he's a teenager and they never act the way they should. sheeeeesh.
i love it and want to read more....more more! ugh ugh!
comment me zanga
Author's Response: I bet you five bucks you can't live one night without saying 'coooooooooooooooool.' I actually wonder whether matt is going to see that $5???? Probably not. Yeah, I'll read your 'z'anga.
OMG i love your story...maybe I should like email you and beg you to update....lmao. No, j/k. I know the ending....but I won't say.
Author's Response: Heh, glad you like it. Maybe you should e-mail me about updating. That helps me feel guilty and actually makes me quit reading stories and actually post my own. I know you know the ending...I swear to you if you tell anyone, you'll be sorry. I know where you sleep at night, twin sister!
Wow its great........but I have a few suggestions to make......I think you should make Snape fall in love with a girl named Fiona White and make then look at stars together.......that would be great...............I *heart* Alan Rickman.......not really......I prefer Robbie Coltrane but anyways, its good....and Lucious better not be evil like all the other stories......and he better not M****t someone either.....keep updating......a lot..........bravo! *kiss kiss* MUAH. ~*-We all know that Santa's coming-*~
Thats pretty weird like how Sirius is still alive even though he died? So this is like book 4.5 (after four before five?). It's good though. The grammar is good but no Draco? I heart draco...he should be in the story more. And Sirius looked like Jesus in the movie but who knows what he looks like in your story. Death Eaters are hard to write...I didn't write them in mine, but you are doing good. What is Lucious trying to do? He's always doing something......I give it a ten.
You should do author's responses to either none of the reviews, or all.
Author's Response: I appologize HHo. :) Been busy...the next chapter is coming though very soon...keep reading.
Ron is annoying. He's too obessed with worrying about Ginny and Draco. It's funny how I like haven't read any of the other chapters in between except a few and then I read this one and understand it...haha.
You need to add more....but you were rejected, and thats insane and crazy. You write good....who knows. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: hey, thanks for reading, Ho! lol. Always appreciate your comments...you must have been bored to be reading on the computer...know how your eyes hurt all the time staring at the screen. Mwuah!
I skimmed through it but I've decided that I hate reading off the computer screen...I can't concetrate and it gives me head pains...but I'll keep skimming? Its good...but why is Lucious so evil?
I sorta can't read your story this second because Monica is playing Josh Groban music but I'm sure it's great....I'll read it later.
Author's Response: LOL, well I love Josh Groban. Hope you enjoy it when you DO read it. :D
good. i hope this is appropriate >:O
Author's Response: yes, very appropriate...thanks for the review. :D