Penname: keysers1girl [Contact]
Real name: Melissa Cabic
Member Since: 04/20/06
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I am 36 years old and a published author. I have three wonderful kids aged 14, 11 and 20 mos. My 11 year old daughter is in the process of writing her first book and is up to 13 chapters now. I am married to my very best friend and soulmate. I love Harry Potter and enjoy sharing it with my kids. It is great to have something we are all interested in. I am available to beta read M-F evenings. I will give my HONEST opinion along with helpful suggestions, and always try to do so in a kind manner.
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Of Rats and Drainpipes by Loki MM
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: It all started when the Slytherin Quidditch captain threw a curse at Peter, who transformed and hid. In the sink of the third-floor boys bathroom. And got stuck. It's up to the other three Marauders to get him out. COMPLETE

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1615 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 11/06/04


Reviewer: keysers1girl Signed
Date: 04/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Um ... of Rats and Drainpipes

Cute story......I don't think it would have taken the others that long to figure it out, though. I think maybe there should have been more? It was good and enjoyable, though. I really liked it.

 

Memories by ringbearer44
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 86]

Summary: A conversation between Harry and Dudley set after 5th year.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 939 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/17/04 Updated: 11/17/04


Reviewer: keysers1girl Signed
Date: 04/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Memories

Really good! I liked it alot, I didn't think I would like it based on the premise, but it was great! Keep it up!

 

Petunia Gets Punchy by MsTattersall
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: Aunt Petunia's in the kitchen, cooking up something magically delicious, to tell the truth. (Post-OOP)

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2391 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/01/04 Updated: 12/01/04


Reviewer: keysers1girl Signed
Date: 04/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: (Short Story)

Excellent!!! That was great! I love the way Petunia is portrayed as secretly being a witch!!! Keep up the good work!

 

Summary: Ron Weasley finds out that he is eligible to praticipate in the Wizard Exchange Program, a program in which two witches or wizards exchange lives for 3 months. But something goes terribly wrong with Ron's application!!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 904 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/05/05 Updated: 02/05/05


Reviewer: keysers1girl Signed
Date: 04/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

Really good, but ended too suddenly. You really need to keep it going.

Author's Response: Well, I originally was going to continue writing it. I got a really bad case of writer\'s block in writing the second chapter, and then I got the idea for my other story Love Blossoms Once More, and ideas for that story were pouring out, so I stopped updating this one. Thanks for your review, though, and I might continue in the future.

 

The inverted Boggart by Perselus
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 48]

Summary: What happens when a Boggart turns into your deepest desire, instead of your deepest fear? Snape is about to find out...

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 1035 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/27/05 Updated: 04/27/05


Reviewer: keysers1girl Signed
Date: 04/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Excellent! That was hilarious!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

 

Spider Web by songbook99
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 55]

Summary: Hermione shows Mr Weasley how to use a Muggle computer. Confusion about spider webs, and what a mouse really is, ensues.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1129 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/21/06 Updated: 03/21/06


Reviewer: keysers1girl Signed
Date: 04/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: Spider Web

Ummm....good idea I guess, but the whole Mugglenet thing and them reading about themselves was kind of dumb. Sorry. The idea of Hermione teaching Arthur Weasley about computers or other muggle things is a good idea though, I just think the Mugglenet thing was going a little too far.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. There\'s really no need to be sorry for thinking the whole Mugglenet thing was stupid. You are definitely entitled to your opinion and it is nice to know what you thought didn\'t work in the story just as much as what you thought did work. So, thank you for taking the time to let me know your opinion.

 

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Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: keysers1girl Signed
Date: 04/25/06 Title: None

Sorry, total rip off of Schehesrazade's story, and his was better. Baby Harry is supposed to be 3 months old in your story? He does stuff that kids don't do until they are almost a year old. A 3 month old doesn't do much more than sleep and eat.

 

Dear Mrs. Potter... by DaisyMaeEvans
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 202]

Summary: Past Featured StoryProfessor Granger deals with a pair of students who have inherited a knack for trouble...

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1446 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/15/06 Updated: 04/16/06


Reviewer: keysers1girl Signed
Date: 04/28/06 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Great Story and Great Layout! As for the idea of Hermione being married, I like the idea that she is strong enough to be on her own, no one says she HAS to marry anyone! This one is one I will re-read and recommend.

Author's Response: Thanks-I\'m glad you liked it!!! I agree that she is definitely strong enough to make a life for herself and make descisions for her own reasons. I could see a life of teaching and caring for students to be a rewarding one for her. -Daisy

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