I am 36 years old and a published author. I have three wonderful kids aged 14, 11 and 20 mos. My 11 year old daughter is in the process of writing her first book and is up to 13 chapters now. I am married to my very best friend and soulmate. I love Harry Potter and enjoy sharing it with my kids. It is great to have something we are all interested in. I am available to beta read M-F evenings. I will give my HONEST opinion along with helpful suggestions, and always try to do so in a kind manner.
Cute story......I don't think it would have taken the others that long to figure it out, though. I think maybe there should have been more? It was good and enjoyable, though. I really liked it.
Really good! I liked it alot, I didn't think I would like it based on the premise, but it was great! Keep it up!
Excellent!!! That was great! I love the way Petunia is portrayed as secretly being a witch!!! Keep up the good work!
Really good, but ended too suddenly. You really need to keep it going.
Author's Response: Well, I originally was going to continue writing it. I got a really bad case of writer\'s block in writing the second chapter, and then I got the idea for my other story Love Blossoms Once More, and ideas for that story were pouring out, so I stopped updating this one. Thanks for your review, though, and I might continue in the future.
Excellent! That was hilarious!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Ummm....good idea I guess, but the whole Mugglenet thing and them reading about themselves was kind of dumb. Sorry. The idea of Hermione teaching Arthur Weasley about computers or other muggle things is a good idea though, I just think the Mugglenet thing was going a little too far.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. There\'s really no need to be sorry for thinking the whole Mugglenet thing was stupid. You are definitely entitled to your opinion and it is nice to know what you thought didn\'t work in the story just as much as what you thought did work. So, thank you for taking the time to let me know your opinion.
Sorry, total rip off of Schehesrazade's story, and his was better. Baby Harry is supposed to be 3 months old in your story? He does stuff that kids don't do until they are almost a year old. A 3 month old doesn't do much more than sleep and eat.
Great Story and Great Layout! As for the idea of Hermione being married, I like the idea that she is strong enough to be on her own, no one says she HAS to marry anyone! This one is one I will re-read and recommend.
Author's Response: Thanks-I\'m glad you liked it!!! I agree that she is definitely strong enough to make a life for herself and make descisions for her own reasons. I could see a life of teaching and caring for students to be a rewarding one for her. -Daisy