Ah...beautiful, loving story. JK Rowling couldn't have done better herself. And the epilogue was gee-org-gee-ous. Congratulations. You should consider publishing it in a magazine or something. Many magazines have this kind of stuff.
Wow...this is very good. I loved it, and it was just so realistic. It went through a tiny bit fast though, but I loved it anyways. It's awesome, and you should consider getting it published in a magazine or something.
Love it! Can I make a request? Can you make the pregnancy slower next time? I got confused because it went through so fast, but I really do love it!
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry, it did seem to fly a bit! Well thanks for reviewing!!! :)