I am sorry, but my stories are no longer available on MuggleNet. I may re-post them at some point in the future.
A fun and appropriately nostalgic chapter. Sorry to say it could use a bit of editing for flow, but nothing so distracting as to put me out of the story. Looking forward to the next.
Things are moving right along I see! Well, you did sort of say that they would. Okay, I am prepared to go with the flow... And the fun.
From the title I expected a bit more wrath from Molly. Maybe even some disapproval? Not much of course, but some.
I am enjoying your story, but I must say the characters seem a bit OC to me. Hermione as an impetuous girl? I have always pegged her as the uber practical type. Not that I think she wouldn't want to marry Ron, but I would think she would spend more time working out her exact rationale. And Ginny asking Harry. Fun, but I would have thought Ginny would be one more to plant the idea and see how long it took Harry to the catch the hint.
Still all-in-all, I am enjoying the whole romp.
If you are willing, I would love it if you could check out my stories (there are only two) and give me your opinion about characterization and circumstance.
Thanks and still reading.
Just a fun little one-shot, dedicated to Lori (WeasleyMom), the Queen of all things Romione.
Very cute... I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Great! Thanks for reviewing. =)
Very nice, you have captured both characters beautifully. Well done. It was a joy to read. Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!