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Sins of the Father by TheVault

Rated: Professors • 394 Reviews
Summary: There was something about him that made him irresistible to her. Siobhan Murphy will go to any lengths to ascertain her deepest desires - but when the object of those desires is a married man twice her age with secrets darker than she can imagine, she will find herself caught in a scandalous liaison that she can't walk away from. Not Canon-Compliant.
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 03/31/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Secrets Revealed

Just thought I'd let you know, as it seems neither your beta nor moderator has picked it up - the expression 'could care less' is actually 'couldn't care less' she couldn't care less if the stone was from the street... for example.. in other words it didn't matter to her that it may not have been valuable (from the street).. hope this has been a helpful criticism... Fabulous story by the way - no other faults found!!!

The Unexpected Gift by Accio_Brain

Rated: Professors • 114 Reviews
Summary: It's Voldemort's birthday and Harry and Hermione have been invited to his birthday party. As the festivities commence, Voldemort makes a new friend. But things aren't always as they seem, for someone else has a plan that could make this Voldemort's worst birthday ever.
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 08/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Snape's revenge - nice, very nice.... Loved it!!

Author's Response: Thank you! : )

A Different Reality by Gmariam

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 233 Reviews
Summary: Harry has just witnessed the death of Professor Dumbledore, and chases after the murderous Snape before he can escape the grounds. But the former potions master easily captures Harry, and takes him back to Spinner’s End along with Draco Malfoy. What happens to Harry at Spinner’s End? Will Snape cement his allegiance to the Dark Lord and turn Harry over to Voldemort? What happens to Draco Malfoy? Will Voldemort punish him for his failure on the Tower? And what about Severus Snape - will Harry learn the truth about the former Death Eater at last?

This story is now complete, and presents an alternate ending to Harry Potter and The Half Blood Prince, in which Harry learns more than he could have ever imagined about Professor Snape and Professor Dumbledore. He must abandon many of his old convictions and come to an understanding of a new and different reality before setting out on his final journey to vanquish Lord Voldemort in Book Seven.

Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 02/15/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen: Funeral

Fabulous ending, thoroughly enjoyable. Ahh those ever recognisable eyes... thanks for the ride!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m so glad you enjoyed the ending, it was a bit of a challenge wrapping up everything I\'d started. I really appreciate the lovely review - thank you for reading this story, and taking the time to leave such a nice note! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 01/09/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Vow

Read the whole thing in one go - fabulous. I was a little dismayed to discover that I'm so close -yet so far away from the 'final' chapter. I can't wait. I've always thought this was probably the way things approximately happened - possibly with the exception of the wife, maybe. I just adore Snape - he is surely a man of hidden depths...

Author's Response: Hi there! That\'s a lot of reading in one sitting, I\'m so glad you enjoyed it! I know the chapter with Snape\'s wife can be a bit jarring, I\'m surprised I haven\'t gotten more yelps about it. I do think, however, that something very important moved Snape to change loyalties. I can\'t wait to see what JKR has in store for us! As for this final chapter, I do hope to wrap it up soon. Thank you so much for reading this story, and for the wonderful review!! ~Gina :)

A Sleepwalk to Remember by Lady Knightly

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 943 Reviews
Summary: For once in her life, Hermione is faced with a problem she does not know how to solve...
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 06/11/08 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

"She only hoped she wouldn't lose too many house points" - Made me giggle girlishly out loud... and of course... the "girlish petulance" quote was too funny also.

Well done... still avidly following this. Snape telling her he ached when he couldn't hold her was intense... it made me shiver and deeply wish I was Hermione.

'Til next time...

Author's Response: ah! the feeling is mutual i assure you. i wish i was hermione too xD xD thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 08/18/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

Sorry, didn't mean the chapter was short - I meant the time they had together... sorry for the confusion. This is so great - I never want to imply I am unhappy with your writing or story telling ;)
Keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: hahaha oh no i didn\'t think you were unhappy with it :D but now i see what you mean! well thank you very much, and yes, i too am sad that it was a bit short. but not to worry, reader, things are BOUND to happen... (wink wink)

Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 08/16/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

AHHHHH - so frustratingly short! But the forced nastiness we have to look forward to should be vastly entertaining enough to make up for it... bring it on ASAP! Thanks for your dedication to this creative piece of entertainment. Severus alive is SO much better than him dead! ;)

Author's Response: ;___; yes, i agree completely! also, heeeeey, this chapter was the longest one yet! xD but i will try to keep them long in the future as well. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 06/18/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

Love it, more, more!!!
"And what did Snape say he was going to do to her hair?" - priceless!!!! Her dream was so vivid, scary. And Snape's anger at her minimising his sacrifice was very well done - he's struggling to dismiss those emerging feelings for her, isn't he...
Wonderful, looking forward to the next chappie, don't take too long, please!

Author's Response: yes! that\'s exactly what i wanted to get across with Snape :D thanks for reading! i\'m glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 04/21/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

My most favourite story I've ever read - just dying to know what happens next. I'm not usually a fan of Hermione/Snape ships, but as I usually have a gander at anything Snape, I was fortunate to stumble across this gem. Brilliant, unique plot - hilariously funny to begin with, now soberingly serious. I kinda stil want it to be Hermione's fault, so he can YELL at her, but I guess you have a whole different direction planned for this. Can't wait to see what happens - update quickly, please.....

Author's Response: wow thank you so much for such a wonderful review!!! i\'m so glad you\'re enjoying it :D

Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 05/18/08 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

You are forgiven the long, long wait - as you have produced an enjoyable chapter. :D (I'm guilty myself of a much longer wait for the readers of my ficcy on ff.net) Never mind the uneventfulness - I personally think plenty of things happened - and it was nice to just relax and deal with both their emotions about what has happened before we launch into the next round of drama.

Well done... looking forward to more as soon as you can deliver.


Author's Response: oh so good to hear that i am forgiven!! :D i\'m glad you enjoyed the chapter (and that the lack of physical \"action\" did not deter you from liking it xD) Can\'t wait to get out the next update! as always, thanks for reading!!!

Sirius Black and the Drapery of Doom by capella_black

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 16 Reviews
Summary: The last day of Sirius's life. He's got a lot of free time to hit the bottle and brood on life, memories, people, etc. Order members come and go, and it all ends with the battle and a certain mysterious veil.
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 06/27/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Couldn't help but leave a review - the most emotional, stunning piece of writing and storytelling I have encountered in the fanfic world - and even far exceeds many original published novels. Sensational... you are truly gifted. Tears are sliding down my cheek as I write this and I'm not even a Sirius fan, so to speak (not that I hate him or anything), I'm a Snape Harem member through and through - so you've done your job well to touch me in such a way. Well done!!!

Author's Response: Oh gosh, I might just have to print and frame this as my all-time favorite review ever. Thank you so much, you\'ve just totally made my day!! :D

When Darkness Did Surround Us by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 764 Reviews
Summary: 2007 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Petunia Dursley is enjoying dinner with her family when someone starts pounding on the door. Ready to tell them off for being so rude and refusing to leave when they didn't answer at first, Petunia opens the door to have a baby shoved into her arms and told she is his only family. Years after the great Harry Potter defeated Voldemort, Death Eaters have risen to power and taken over Hogsmeade, Hogwarts, and even the Ministry of Magic. Their marriages announced invalid, their children in danger and their lives hanging by a thread, the heroes of the war with Voldemort must once again take a stand against evil.

H/G and R/Hr

(pre-Deathly Hallows)


*Quote from The Epilogue*

Suddenly Harry was kissing her as if he couldn’t resist the temptation. There was a kind of frenzy to the kiss at first, a kind of desperate need, but it melted into something soft and sweet and gentle, a promise of a future when kisses would never be limited. When they broke apart he rested his forehead on hers, sprinkling a few affectionate butterfly kisses across her face. “I love you,” he murmured.
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Sins of the Father

As I'm firmly a member of the Snape Harem, I was dismayed to discover that Severus was the perpetrator of the nastiness in this fic... but, although I first felt the whole 'Snape loved Lily, was hurt, and wished to execute revenge' plot started to get a bit corny in the middle of this chapter, I pushed through it and you managed to rationale his motives and actions enough for me to change my mind. You wrote this well to be able to keep me as a reader, as I remain a staunch Snape supporter, and do indeed believe Severus acted on Dumbledore's orders during the events on the Tower. I'm curious as to if I can poke holes in your 'story'.... so I'll keep reading.... Well done!

Author's Response: Your penname even speaks your support of the man! I\'m glad you liked it despite it\'s Snape-bashing, but I\'ll tell you the truth: I hate Snape and I think he killed Dumbledore for the sake of killing Dumbledore. Thanks for the review!

Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel by Starmom

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 52 Reviews
Summary: Summary: What happened on that fateful night at Godric's Hollow and the (still!) unknown events that followed in the next twenty four hours, before Harry's arrival on Privet Drive? What motivated the actions and decisions that were made in the years leading up to the defeat of Voldemort? The truth is neither black or white - only complicated shades of grey. Behind the stories of Lily Evans, Severus Snape and Peter Pettigrew we learn that we are all vulnerable to evil.
(written between HBP and DH - story is complete)
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 03/05/07 Title: Chapter 14: 11. Invitations and Obligations (Part 2): May 1978

Enthralling, completely believable and throughly enjoyable.
He really had no choice from the beginning, did he? He would certainly be dead right now though if he had not initially wanted it. I feel for Severus, tricked by the hint of love, I hope he finds what he craves - perhaps from Dumbledore in the future!!??

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you\'ve found your way to this fic! Yes, I think the whole idea of \'choice\' is up for grabs in this story - a bit more nuanced than in canon; perhaps a bit more like real life, eh?

On Boundary Lines by BloodRayne

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 7 Reviews
Summary: Charlotte Marquet is a Muggle-born witch in Slytherin. Not only that, but she’s got a strange ambition as well. When she remains faithful to this strange desire and even spurs it on, so to speak, will it really bring her what she wants? Or will it only ruin her and her life?
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 04/16/07 Title: Chapter 3: Thirteen and Fourteen

Where oh where is this heading? I'm certainly intrigued. And who could blame Charlotte for her crush on Severus, completely understandable... ;) She doesn't have a lot of natural curiosity about her does she, to get to fourth year and not have heard of Voldypants? Does she get more interested from now on? Update soon, I need to know more...

Author's Response: I\'ll try to update quicker than this time...thanks!

A Different Sort of Peace by Vindictus Viridian

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 245 Reviews
Summary: At some point there had to have been a choice.

The logical place to begin a story is at the point of the first decision. But what if there were no decisions? What if, at every point, there was only one possible act? What if the story simply cannot be told?

Completed (though not posted) entirely pre-DH.
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 05/25/07 Title: Chapter 16: Tuesday Morning

Waiting with baited breath for the rest of this thrilling tale...

Author's Response: Thanks!

A Death Eater's Diary by DailyProphetEditor

Rated: Professors • 10 Reviews
Summary: Bellatrix Lestrange POV. Set during HBP after 'Spinner's End' chapter.

After the failure in the Ministry, the Dark Lord punished Bellatrix violently. Now he has ordered Bella's nephew Draco to kill Dumbledore, thereby basically sentencing the boy to death. Bella finds her faith in the Dark Lord wavering. Slowly she realises that there is only one left whom she could turn to, and it's a man she mistrusts more than anyone else - Severus Snape.
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 02/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my God, she's going to betray Severus - that nasty rotten b__tch....

Author's Response: Thank you - you have pointed out to me that I should maybe have made the end more clear :) But thank you so much for reviewing. My first review, whooooo!

Minerva McGonagall and the Half-Blood Prince by DailyProphetEditor

Rated: Professors • 64 Reviews

What do you do when the man who murdered your best friend turns up and claims to be innocent?

What do you do when you realise you slowly start trusting him again?

What do you do when you fall in love against your will – with a man half your age?

This is a McGonagall/Snape fic about trust, friendship, shame, and love. It’s canon compliant otherwise; set immediately after HBP except for a mini prologue.

This fic also is my attempt at continuing the at Book 7, so you also have the war against Voldemort, the search for the Horcruxces, and the way they run Hogwarts during that year included in the plot.

Side characters like Ron, Hermione, Moody, Lupin, Tonks, Neville, Augusta Longbottom, Draco, Hagrid, and the rest of the Weasleys get their fair share of the story.

It is done novel style, which means that some apparently minor issues mentioned in early chapters will become important in later chapters. I do recommend you read them in the right order.

To be on the safe side, I rated this “Professors” because it contains violence, sexuality, character deaths, and torture - although none of them described in detail.

Also I now have added an AU warning - my story contains two detals that we will not see happening in "Deathly Hallows". I made the Sorting Hat a Horcrux, and Arthur Weasley will become interim Minister for Magic in my last chapter. Well, I wrote this before those rumors were shot down as non-canon by JKR, and I'd not like to change my plot now - so, sadly, my story has become a bit AU. You have been warned ;-)

Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 04/20/07 Title: Chapter 10: The Killing Curse

Phew - thank goodness, ya had me worried for a minute. He'll be alright won't he?????? :)

Author's Response: You just wait and see... (*evil grin*). Thank you for reviewing!!!

A Brief Acquaintance by Mizz Parkinson

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 10 Reviews
Summary: Looking back on his days at Hogwarts, Remus recalls a particularly painful episode that happened during his OWL exam week. Can he forgive himself for what he did...or failed to do? Please leave a review!
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 04/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Brief Acquaintance

Wow, what can I say... Severus as misunderstood as I always believed he was. Perhaps a little nicer to Lupin than I expected, and I'm not sure you left room for the Werewolf prank, when I believe Severus' real hate for the marauders took hold, but a wonderful, entertaining and at some points heartbeaking tale to read. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I guess I think of Remus as the most compassionate of the Marauders, and it sort of intrigued me that he and Snape might have had a brief friendship, especially as Snape still makes him Wolfsbane as an adult. Glad you liked the story!

The Battle for the Prophecy at the Department of Mysteries by cmwinters

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 3 Reviews
Summary: Severus Snape is sent on a challenge by the Dark Lord to retrieve a prophecy from the Department of Mysteries. What follows is a series of challenges.

Written for the Gauntlet Round 4 and submitted by CMWinters of Slytherin House

Many thanks to my guide, FanficWriterNikki, and my substitute guide while Nikki was on vacation, _Crazy_Purple_HP_Freak_. and MithrilQuill for conducting it.
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 05/22/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Maze

Oh, interesting. I have from time to time pondered the thought of the existence of a prophecy regarding Severus... hmmmm - wonder what it was about?? Do you know? Do you have any intentions of sharing?
Wonderful job, very enjoyable!!

Author's Response: Yes, actually, this was an idea of a friend of mine, which I\'ll be incorporating into my larger fic that\'s in progress now, but serves my story entirely, although it makes some sense that Snape would have a prophecy about him.

Flibbertigibbet by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 13 Reviews
Summary: Narcissa Black is called a word that she does not know the definition of. Curious to find out the meaning, she strikes up a conversation with Severus Snape.

A light, short piece showing a snippet of Narcissa's time at Hogwarts.
Reviewer: misundersnape Signed
Date: 06/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Flibbertiggibet

He, he - put her in her place Severus! Dumb, blonde, gossiping scatterbrain....

Loved it - great work!

Author's Response: Teehee, yes, he certainly did. Thanks so much! :)