Very good. You're first fic? Good job, on to your others.
Author's Response: I have made others.
This is too crazy NOT to comment on. That's quite the imagination you have there. If you can fit turning Tonks or Bellatrix into a female centaur in the next chapter I'll tell all my friends about you, LOL!
Author's Response: You've given me a great idea for the next one.
I love Remus fics! Very good start. "Wheat colored eyes" I've NEVER seen that before. Bonus points for being original!
Wow, you are certifiable! This is too funny. You must put off whatever other projects you are working on at the moment and make a list for every other character, even Mundungus. But, you must hear that a lot...
I like the flashbacks of them in school together. And I like that they have a history. Great chapter!
Cleaning the old Black manor...that poor house will never be clean enough. Lol! I know because I put that in my story too. Great chapter, I can't wait to find out what it's all about. Thanks for updating.
I like the beginning of this story. With Ella appearing so shabby I thought for sure she would be a lycan too. I can't wait to read more.
Cute! You had me fooled up until the second chapter. Vegrin reminded me too much of the word vegan -- and then the broccoli and the beans... I like it though. I didn't think it was lame. Besides, that just saying "lame" isn't constructive critism, that doesn'thelp you further the story.
So sad, it's always good to read something out of the ordinary though. I'm gladed you redeemed Harry in the end. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: And thank you for reviewing!