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Interviews with Rita Skeeter by LO1
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 47]

Summary: Rita Skeeter has 7 minutes to quickly interview staff and Students of Hogwarts school of W&W! See what Hilarious antics that Skeeter woman will dish out as she hounds Harry, Ron, hermione, macgonagall, Snape, Moody, Trelawney, Draco, Dumbledore, hagrid, luna and lastly a special guest. Hopefully witty! Read and Review! please review! I beg of you! lol!

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1408 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
12/08/04 Updated: 12/08/04

Reviewer: DarkLordsApprentice Signed
Date: 04/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: Quibbler Exclusive!!!!

hahahaha really good but she should have been worse to hagrid


The New Surprise by rache
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 889]


Hi everyone just to say this story is finished, there will not be any more chapters. Sorry if that wasn't clear beforeb>

Harry and Ginny are married, with a seven-year old daughter. As Ginny finds out she is pregnant with her second child, memories come back to her, good and bad. The war is over, and everyone feels safe. Shouldn’t they? Strange things are happening, mysterious plots are being formed, putting Harry and his loved ones in danger. Everyone knows he will do anything for the people he loves…Especially Ginny.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 52832 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
11/17/05 Updated: 10/18/06

Reviewer: DarkLordsApprentice Signed
Date: 04/18/06 Title: Chapter 9: "She's beautiful"

I loved it, its finally here! 10/10

Author's Response: Yay! I know, it\'s always a relief for me to know that a chapter has been okayed (becasue then I can work on the next!) Thanks for the ten and glad u liked this!!


Before They Died by lily_writes
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 23]

Summary: Ever wonder what went on the night Lily and James died? I am basically telling the story as I wanted it to be pieced together.

Thanks to the people who have reviewed so far. Please review. I do my best to review for everyone else's stories that I read.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 5001 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
01/07/06 Updated: 02/17/06

Reviewer: DarkLordsApprentice Signed
Date: 12/04/06 Title: Chapter 3: I Have Specific Orders From Dumbledore

1. What was your favorite chapter? I would have to go with the second one, it was the darkest, and I especially liked the way you used the quotes from the books in it to make it really fit in with canon.
2. What was your favorite quote? She was intent on saving her son now. If she let Voldemort take Harry away from her too, without a fight, she knew that she would never forgive herself for it. It just really shows Lily's strength and personality, the way she won't give up even though it's hopeless.
3. Was there a part that made you cry? No, but I almost did, and it takes a lot to make me cry.
4. Out of 10, how would you rate this story? Nine, there's always room to improve, no matter how good you are.
5. Would you read anything else by me? Yeah.

I just thought this was a really good version of the night they died. I've read others, and this is one of the better ones. Your characterization was great, and I love the few OCs you threw in too.
The only thing I noticed was that you switched between tenses a few times, but not often.

The Order of Ravenclaw House Elves

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I always like finding a new review. The thing with the tense switching was because I originally wrote it in the present tense and then I tried to go through and fix it, and I knew I missed some. Good luck with the Order! ;)


A True Friend by Cheshlin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Nyphadora Tonks goes to visit her friend Charlie Weasley in Romania. When he is injured on the job, she gets through lots of challenges to get him the help he requires.

This is a second Gauntlet entry from Cheshlin of Slytherin House.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6526 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
08/26/06 Updated: 08/31/06

Reviewer: DarkLordsApprentice Signed
Date: 09/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a great story! You always found a simple, logical, and very likely (or more likely than what I came up with) approach when you wrote your responses. Tonks was wonderful, and I liked the way you included Tim and his need to find Hippocrates as well.

Author's Response: I couldn\'t figure out why someone would attack her in the hospital. I thought if someone else was desparate to find a cure for a loved one, that might bring them to using an Unforgivable. I\'m glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing. :)


Egypt by ProfessorFlitwick
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: Lesson one in Slian Martreb's class on the MNFF Beta Forums.

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5612 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
10/16/06 Updated: 10/16/06

Reviewer: DarkLordsApprentice Signed
Date: 11/03/06 Title: Chapter 2: OWL Level

Eep, I'm so sorry I forgot to do this. Is it better late than never?

Anyway, in school a while ago, I learned some about Egyptian gods and stuff, but apparently I either
a) forgot it all or
b) I was barely taught anything
I suspect the latter.


Summary: I do believe many of you have been curious to know as to how my nose came to be quite so crooked. What an odd thing to wonder, I tell you, but none the less, I will comply. It is quite an entertaining tale to say the least, occurring on two different occasions during my younger days. I, Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore, write this in my own hand, to satisfy all those who need to practice quenching their curiosities for more appropriate matters.


Hufflepuff House

March One-Shot Challenge--Albus Dumbledore--Prompt 1

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, None

Word count: 2372 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
03/14/07 Updated: 03/15/07

Reviewer: DarkLordsApprentice Signed
Date: 07/22/07 Title: Chapter 1: Tales

This was a very funny story! I can imagine Dumbledore writing this, and the incidents you described are very described almost exactly how I think he would have done it. Good Job! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I\'m glad you feel I portrayed Dumbledore well!

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