Hi ... everyone! =)
My name is Sara, and I'm a Malaysian. That's located somewhere in the South East of Asia. I'm a big fan of HP, and first came to the world of fanfiction during the year 2004.
My favourite genres are Romance, and Humour. Adventure fics with a good plot and interesting characters are good in my books too.
My ships are: R/Hr and H/G. Well. That's all I read, that is. Not H/G so much, though. And lately, I've been writing about Jimmy/Demelza ... read HBP, and you'll know who I mean.
Anyhoo, if you like reaing my fics, please drop a review. Constructive critiscm is always welcome, and in short, reviews brighten up my day. =)
That said, happy fanfic reading/writing!
OOoh...Bad idea,Ron.But if he did tae off his trousers,what next?His BOXERS???lol!
Ps.I now this must be stupid,but I checed my dictionary and the explanation confused me.What is innuendo?
Author's Response: Er... innuendos are basically the same thing as insinuations. To insinuate is to imply or convey an idea subtly and gradually. My use of innuendo probably isn't the clearest ever, but I can explain it for you in a nutshell. The wizard in the painting told Ron he would have to "stand naked by the full moon" for the remedy to work. When Hermione offers to help with the remedy, she's subtly implying that she'd like to see Ron... 'hem... clothing-less. She doesn't come right out and say that though. Does that clear things up a bit? I hope so. Thanks for reviewing! - Angela
Hey,pls tell me its not over yet!Its so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmm-hmm,I have learned my lesson! (WEll,I would if I have written anything before,sigh)But you did a preeeeetty good job.It was hilarious!!!
That was agood one :) Oh,the mental images!!!!
I like tha way you used the bits from LotR in this. Perfect for this kind of romance fic. I like the second paragrpah best ... I can really feel what Harry and Luna are feeling in this.
I just have a few things to point out here, and not much of a problem at all.
"L-look w-who it is...",
I notice that this happens quite a fair amount of times in this fic. Since that an elipse is already present at the end of the sentence, you don't need the comma, like so: "L-look w-who it is..."
"Like it was yesterday.", Luna said.
This happens a few times too. There is no need for a period in this sentence, and the comma should be placed before the quotation mark.
I just loved the ending, as well as their last conversation. Regarding the last paragraph, I think it would be even better if you fleshed it out a bit. Maybe break it into two paragraphs, to indicate that Luna's dreams are happening a while after Harry's death. Overall, I enjoyed this fic, even though I don't ship this. Good job!
For some odd reason, I really like this. I love the writing style you used ... matches the atmosphere brilliantly. I don't read vampire stories very often, and I have to say, of the very few I have read, yours is among the best. Yes, it's a bit gory, what with the slaying of the unicorns, but you managed to make it seem beautiful, in a gruesome sort of way.
I just have a few things to point out:
My white-blonde hair becomes windblown, as my windows are wide open, and I am standing in front of them.
The first part of the sentence, '- hair becomes windblown -' doesn't seem to mesh with the rest of it. I suggest that you change 'becomes' to 'is', since that you're using continuous present tense (well, I'm pretty sure ... I've never been too good with naming these grammatical terms ...).
Before he knows what's happening, my fangs in his neck, sucking precious lifeblood from him.
There should be an 'are' after 'fangs', or else the sentence will seem inomplete. Oh, and lastly, I just have to say that the way you portrayed Draco and Artemis at the end of the fic seems to say a lot about how they accept each other, yet can never be as close as real siblings. You did that very well. Overall, wonderful job!
Oh boy, that was great! Had lots of fun reading it, and the proposal itself was hilarious. I liked the shopping list best, for some odd reason.
I like this.Really.ANd the names for their group is really funny.When I read the Lovers of Avacado,well...let's just say that its really hard to laugh and eat potato chips at the same time...:)
Author's Response: Please don't choke. And let me comment that I get SO excited whenever I get reviews for this one...I'll look through "Hmm, 'I love who' has 12 more...Target practice has 6 more...Evil Villainy has 11 more...YES! I GOT ANOTHER 'OVERTURNED' REVIEW! HORRAY! PARTY!" I have no idea why I'm like this. And another random comment, I just re-read the original story...oh wow...
Oh, this is adorable. You're right; it's more funny than fluffy, and this is one of those few R/Hr one-shots which doesn't have them confessing their undying love for each other at the end. A kiss, yes ... but no confession of undying love. :claps happily: My favourite part was Ron yelling at Ginny, Harry and Snape in the Great Hall.
Okay, I just have a couple of things to be nit-picky about. The bit with Hermione talking in Harry's memory:
You want to be an Auror, donít you? Hermione had said. To even have a chance you have to have a N.E.W.T in Potions, Hermione had continued. Besides Ė Ron wonít be taking it, Iíll have no one to sit with, Hermione had pleaded.
I think you should write her words in italics ... or else it looks like normal text, and when I first saw it, it confused me a bit.
Lastly, the ending sentence (which I love, by the way):
Too bad he hadn't managed to jinx Filch though
You forgot to add the full stop at the end of the sentence.
Overall, I love this. It's short, and sweet. And I had a great time reaing it! =)
That was beautiful. Beautiful in the sense that he kept that little notebook for so long, and looking through it when he feels the need. I love your writing style, I can really feel and see what you've written.
Oh goody,you're back!That was cool,especially the last part about Hermione being 16,not 10!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!!
This is one story I dont mind making fun of Hermione.The story's good!and the fact that I AM watching LoTR right now,and thinking of Legolas while he's on screen...keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I try to watch or read LotR before I write anymore of my story. It gives me idea's!! Thanks again!!
Er,why is Sam gay...?Just asking.
Author's Response: Umm. . . because. . . . o_O
That was the. Best. Hilarious! I was laughing all through the fic! Crotch-less panties? :raises eyebrows suspiciously: Anyway, that was great. Very amusing. :D
That was sad. I'm guessing you're a fan of LOTR ... when I saw the title, I knew. That was so sad! Everyone's dead! (Except for Ron and Neville, yeah, but ...) the way you wrote it was great. It really got me feeling.
Author's Response: I'm glad. :) That's precisely what it was supposed to do. Yes, LOTR is one of my favorite things on earth (next to Harry Potter, of course).
Hmmm ... Ron took it *very* well, I think. Poor flowerpot. Anyhoo, I find Miranda extremely annoying. Very. And do I sense something between Harry and Ginny there? 'Cause if I'm not mistaken, that's what Hermione did with Ron in Cos movie ... the handshake ... the 'hug' ...
The suspense is KILLING ME!!!!I can barely breath!Oh boy,that's a shock,I never saw that coming.I mean,Miranda.I don't even know her,and I hate her already!!!
Gah. If I were Hermione, I'd have given Miranda a nice little souvenir on the nose, courtesy of Ms Fist. Not only that, I'd have *does a violent jump and strangling motion* her to next Tuesday!
Okaaay, I was wrong. He believes her! That ... nevermind. I didn't expect that. Can't he tell that a little slap can't hurt anyone? :deep breath: Okay. I thought Hannah was asleep ... by the looks of it ... she woke up, found daddy's wand, and decided to have some fun with it. Oh dear. Nive work. Really keeping me on the edge of my seat!
Ooh, nice job with the ending. I liked the suspense ... I was leaning of my seat. And Miranda=bad. But really, would Ron actually listen to her squeal on Hermione? 'Oh, Ronald, she hit me! I feel so unloved! I was just trying to be her friend/help her!' I have faith that Ron wouldn't side with Miranda. Positive. :silence: Never mind, I'll find out soon enough! I also liked the Harry/Ginny moments ... I think those were really well-written. So, overall, I say, good job!