female, 34 years old please do not delete me.
Please do not tell me that she will the man at the alter and run off with Ron, cause that would be a. cliche' and b. not fair. Considering that she talked with him before he married and it made no difference to him, well see how it feels to be on the receiving end.
Sniff, I loved it, but to me it would have been better having both Draco and Hermoine die together. Still, lovely.
Now, you know that youcannot leav us all in suspense like this!! I've been following this story from day one and it is one of my favorites. So you have to finish it!! I cant believe that pansy could win this one, I hate her. But let me guess: the love knot snapped in half, right?
Finally, an update!! Where have you been all year long?? Happy New Year.
Special agent Harry Potter? I really like the change of character, he's the bad guy and Hermione has to save Draco. Update soon!
This is how I hope J.K. ends the series, with Harry alive. Excellent job.
AHHHHH, just when I thought that they would reveal their identities to each other, they don't! When will you do it? The suspense is killing me. Let her and Ron break up, no big loss. Update rapido por favor.
Great chapter. Now when will u climax this and have Draco reveal himself to Hermoine?
Great chapter. Took her long enough tofiguere it out. Update soon.
Will this story have a happy ending is what I wonder. I have enjoyed it so far though.
This is NOT the ending I had in mind. He goes to Greyback and asks to be bitten, saying good bye to his humanity and pain. Many years go by. At last one evenig as he's out walking he stumlbles upon a family, a man and woman with three children. He kills the man, but as he sets his sights on the woman, recognition hits him and he leaves her. But not before she sends the septumsupra(?) charm his way, slicing him as he runs away. In anger over the lost of her man she persues the beast, and finds him, badly hurt. He looks at her mournfully, lets out the saddest howl ever heard and awaits the curse she was sure to cast. As he returns to human form, a small smile plays on his lips. And to his side written in his own blood " I love you Hermione. Good night".
Author's Response: Er... well, that\'s not exactly the ending I had in mind, either.
Wait a minute. I thought that draco always knew that Hermoine is Starlite, that he figuered it out already. Why the sudden change?
Maybe it's just me, but in this chapter you really get a feeling of extreme loneliness from Draco, driving him to share his secrets with Hermione. Please update soon.
Ok, are we going to assume that Draco already bears the Dark Mark? The dream, a sign of things to come? You got some good material to work with. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks you for the nice comments; I am sorry to say that I cannot say much more on Draco\'s dream. But you have some very good guesses! :)
I felt that you an "O" for originality. The prison should have had more personal, and a back-up plan should have been in place. You captured the sense of aloofness and the subsequent sense of hopelessness of the aurors. Like the story so far.
Author's Response: Thanks, arwenevenstar. I\'m glad you like the story. This chapter is perhaps my favourite out of all that I\'ve written with this story, and I see the Ministry not really caring much about the prison and such. One sort of gets the feeling that, in the books, they very rarely, if ever, do things just the right way, and have enough sense/people in place, that it would be reasonable for them to think the enchantments and such would be enough to hold the prisoners in. Anyway, I\'ll quit rambling and just say, once again, thank you for reading, as well as taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. ~Megan
Ok chica, it's been seven months since you finished this story, and X-men Last Stand is now on dvd. When will you begin the crossover story???? Sorry you didn't win, I always believed that this story is the best. Read the other one.Doesn't have the same pizzaz as this one. You deserved it.
Author's Response: I\'ll probably be starting on the crossover next year. And thank you for your kind words. I was a litle disppointed that I didn\'t win, but it\'s all gravy. =D
Brilliant ending, but it left more questions than answers. #1. Y did she leave in the first place? Percy obviously has her ands been living with her. #2 What became of the baby she was carring? #3 What does X-Men have to do with this(I love them btw). Enough ?. Your a gifted writer and the main reason I even log on in the first place. Loved how Draco told his daughter how he really met his wife and the impressoin It left on him. Now I never really liked his character, but now I do. I'm also glad that you were able to show the transforming power of love by the way his character evolved. Brilliant, jusy brilliant. Let me know when the sequel will be ready.
Author's Response: Trust me, the questions will be answered in the sequel.
Now, I don\'t know if X-men compares to Star Wars, but I enjoyed the movies. =)
This is my first review and this story is is amazing! From character develpoment to this chapter, what can i say? Cool!!!! I've been going over the Malfoy curse trying to figure out how your going to end this. Frankly, I'm stumped. How can Draco brake it. Is it meant to ever be broken? What really happened to his mother, did she die because of the curse? We only assumened Lucius killed her, but he never said he did. Cant wait for the end. BTW, I dont think Angie's dead. Ithink Percy blackmailed her.
Author's Response: First off, welcome to site, I hope you enjoy your time here. It\'s a great little place. Second, Woohoo! I have the honor of being your first review. That\'s like, so awesome.
Hmm. . . let\'s see, I\'m looking over your review, and I think you may not fully understand the curse. It isn\'t to be broken per se. In fact, right now, it\'s being played out.
What happen to Draco\'s mother? Well, it isn\'t something I wrote out in the story, but in my head, I like to think that she left Lucius. Because you know how Angelina threaten to leave, but Draco begged her to stay. Well, I like to think same kind of senario with Lucius and Narcissa, but her still deciding to leave. And I would like to think that Lucius covered up any sign that she left him.
So you do think Angelina is dead and that Percy is blackmailing her? Hmm. . . I can\'t stay much on that, but I think you\'re headed in the right direction.
Thanks for the review!
I LOVE HOW YOU MADE THIS SCENE SO MOVING. AS I READ THE STORY, I FOUND MYSELF SEEING ON THE BIG SCREEN. YOU ARE A TALENTED WRITER. I'VE BEEN FOLLOWING THIS STORY FOR QUITE SOMETIME. UPDATE SOON. BTW, WHAT HAPPENS TO EVERYBODY POST WAR, THE MALFOYS I MEAN?
Great ending to an even better story, one of the best i've read in Fan fiction. The action, the excitement, the plots, all key in keeping the audince's attention. Not once did i have to ask "why did you do that"? Although I will admit that you ahd me there when Harry "died". Great job.