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Real name: Chloë
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I no longer write fanfiction, and this account will not be updated. For the time being, I have decided to leave my stories online. Thanks for your interest, and have a lovely day!
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My Juliet by CathCarl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 26]

Summary: A certain Slytherin mulls over his affection for a certain redheaded Gryffindor.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1302 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 11/07/04


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 03/05/05 Title: Chapter 1: My Juliet

That was very, very good! I've always liked the idea of Snape liking Lily. At first I had thought it was Draco/Ginny and then about half-way through I thought, "hmm..maybe it's Severus/Lily," and then I'm like, "No, definitely Draco/Ginny." Ha ha, you definitely kept me guessing till the end. Great fic. :)

 

Oblivious by Pallas
Rated: [Reviews - 559]

Summary: What if there were more to Remus Lupin's bite than a badly timed stroll in the woods? The arrival of a feral invokes secrets of the past and terror for the present...

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 162508 Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 08/27/05


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 09/06/05 Title: Chapter 18: Waiting

Absolutely fabulous! Although we all know Remus did turn out okay, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time! Excellent, Excellent, Excellent! This is positively one of the best fanfics I've ever read. :)

 

Memories by ringbearer44
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 86]

Summary: A conversation between Harry and Dudley set after 5th year.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 939 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/17/04 Updated: 11/17/04


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 04/23/05 Title: Chapter 1: Memories

That was hilarious! I loved it! I don't really know what else to say other than "ha ha ha!" Sorry, I usually try to give better reviews, but I'm laughing too hard to think. :)

 

Summary: A series of hilarious journal entries and lists from Hermione, describing the insane "war" she has gotten herself into with Parvati. Insanity, and hilarity, ensue... A sequel to "The Secret Thoughts of Hermione Granger" (though it'll make sense if you haven't read it)

Note: Another story from "back in the day."

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 14991 Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/27/04 Updated: 01/24/05


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 02/27/05 Title: Chapter 2: Parvati's Revenge

3.) Bewitch a herd of llamas to follow her around all day (wow, that was random…) 5.) Haha…..llamas….. You have no idea how hard I laughed at that. Honestly, I practically fell off my chair laughing. Llamas....ha ha ha.... Anyways, not exactly how I imagine Hermione's personality, but it was so funny, and these ARE her secret thoughts...who KNOWS what goes on the brain of a genius? (certainly not me...) 10 because it was SO funny. I'm off to read the other chapters...ha ha...llamas...

 

True Design by Arianna
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: Lily tries to recognize her fate, and figure out her life and what has happened in this One-Shot Songfic. (Somebody by Bonnie McKee) The chapter does not include lyrics.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1490 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/17/04 Updated: 12/29/04


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 02/21/05 Title: Chapter 1: Why She Fell

This was beautiful. Really, you have a wonderful way with words. I loved the way the reader got a sense of everyday life going on around Lily, but you still had the sad mood portrayed in your writing. Also, I loved the way you wrote in the bracelet throughout the whole story, sort of metaphorically following her around. In short (to cut to the chase after all my gibbergabber), this was a beautiful story. It made me smile. Congratulations! You made me smile on a Monday! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, you made me smile on a Monday (and one after NINE hours of babysitting at that)! You're just wonderful.

 

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Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 02/21/05 Title: None

Haha -- poor Peter. :P Wait, did I just say that? What's gotten into me? e_e Anyways, I love this story. It amused me immensely. More! More, I cry, more! Update soon, please, or I might just go crazy. :)

 

Summary: James loves Lily. Too bad she despises him. Yet suddenly she is drawn to him. He's different now, but she will not let herself be another one of his victims. But for how long will she be able to hide her true feelings? True love always conquers, but there will be plenty of bumps along the way. chapter 4 in queue:)read and review please:)

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5363 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
01/09/05 Updated: 08/28/05


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 03/11/05 Title: Chapter 2: a surprise rendez-vous

Hello. :) I read this a while ago, but I have just now gotten a chance to review. This is very good so far! The only thing I can really think of on the constructive critisism mode is that your point of view (third person omnicient, yes?) can be a little confusing in some areas. Just because, really, when you have several people's thoughts (ie Lily, James, Shay) right after one another, it can be kind of confusing. But it's a great story so far! I liked it a lot. :) Tehe, Shay will use her wonderful persuasion to convince Lily of her love for the fabulous James Potter. *dances* :)

Author's Response: ahaha yes dance the night away! thank you for being my beta!:)*gives thumbs up* yes, i need to work on my POV i think..maybe just be more clear..hmm we shall see...

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 02/25/05 Title: None

This was a cute story! I love James...he's so cute in his wonderfully arrogant way...;) Anyways, great fic so far! The tripping thing made me smile. xD Update? :D

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 02/27/05 Title: None

James is so mean!! 'Do you believe in magic?’ Suddenly Lily pulled away and said in a disgusted voice ‘Ew! You’re not going to kiss me are you?’ That was funny ^__^ I think Lily's reaction might have been a little more shocked, and disbelieving, but it was good. :)

Author's Response: i think that Lily probably was one of those people who is open to any opinion, so James beleiving in magic is fine for her

 

What I hate about you... by The Marauder
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 101]

Summary: In this sweet one-shot, Lily receives a note from James one night, and finally admits to herself and to him her true feelings...

excerpt:

I hate that to me your perfect,

Even when you rumple your hair.

I hate that I’ve come to expect,

That life without you I can’t bear.

(Inspired by Kat's poem in 10 Things I Hate About You )



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1063 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/05/05 Updated: 08/10/05


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 02/18/05 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

This was so adorable. I loved the poems! I'm adding this to my favorites :)

 

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Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 03/11/05 Title: None

Oh dear smurf, Peter is rather annoying, isn't he? Poor Ron, he's so oblivious. He needs to TELL her...lol. ;) Cute so far! Peter reminded me of Justin Finch-Fletchy in the second book. And...VOLDEMORT. Oh dear, is Peter Voldemort reincarnated? ha ha... that would be interesting. ;)

Author's Response: Ron is pretty obvious, and he really needs to tell her. Yes. ;) Thank you very much for reviewing!

Author's Response: About Peter: I think that he could be much like Tom Riddle in LOOKS. I didn't realize that I had made Peter almost exactly like Tom (in his LOOKS, don't forget that!) before I finished first chapter...

 

The Draught of Prospicio by Burrowbrat
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 411]

Summary: *Last Chapter up!!! It's been awesome everyone!!! Over 4000 reads and 300 reviews!!! You guys are amazing!!!* It is summer before sixth year and everyone has gotten together to celebrate Harry's Birthday when something goes terribly wrong for Ron and Hermione. How will everyone handle this terrible event and how will everything turn out?! *~*this fic is written pre HBP (see a/n on my pro for more info)*~*

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 20534 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/15/05 Updated: 08/16/05


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 05/15/05 Title: Chapter 1: Summer Assumptions

Hello! It's a good first chapter! Very cute. I liked how both Ron and Hermione were arguing with themselves. I can't wait to read the other chapters, but alas, I have to go and do dreadful homework. Happy trails ~Chloë

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the first chapter...please come back for more...hope the homework works out ok =)

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 09/01/05 Title: None

I thought it was a lovely first chapter. Your descriptions of the thunderstorm were splendid, I felt as thought I was sitting in one right as I read it, thought it's bright and sunny here. A description of the children would've been nice. I'm not sure how to picture Maggie. Does she have her mother's red hair, or Harry's? DId she get Harry's green eyes, or Ginny's? I also quite liked how you portrayed Harry. His character is quiet, and somewhat mysterious. Knowing the back story and that he must've by now defeated Voldemort makes this all very interesting. I was alittle surprised by the first day of school coming so quickly, I hadn't expected it. As I think someone else mentioned, you might want to talk about it a bit more and make it clear that it is the night before she goes to school. All in all, I thought it was great, and I can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I wrote it in a thunderstorm and I'm glad I was able to capture that. I did say that James resembled his father but I'll try and include more in the next chapter. Maggie has red hair in hazel eyes. Anyway, thanks for the review, I'm so glad you liked it.

 

One Day in Surrey by Isabel C
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Past Featured StoryHarry gets his first pair of glasses, and Petunia vows never to take him shopping again.

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2206 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/10/05 Updated: 08/10/05


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 09/01/05 Title: Chapter 1: One Day in Surrey 1/1

You only have one review for this? I can't believe it, this was excellent! I thoroughly enjoyed it. You wrote Harry excellently, and I thought you captured Petunia wonderfully. I really liked the comment about Harry looking like James father; it makes us think she might've known him better than she lets on. Superbly structured and wonderfully written, I'm adding this to my favorites. :)

 

Forever Yours by harry_potter_star
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 872]

Summary:
sigh.
Okay. Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay Okay


For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!


James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 40400 Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Published:
08/29/05 Updated: 07/30/06


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 11/13/05 Title: Chapter 1: First Year: The beginning

Hello! i just finished Chapter One of your story, and I thought I'd give a review. I liked it! Nice cliffhanger, there. (Cliffhangers rock ^_-) I thought it was a lovely first character, and I liked how Lily and James don't hate each other right now, and Lily even seems to have a little crush on him. It's cute! One thing, though: You spelled "Beggining" wrong in the chapter title. It's spelled "Beginning." Other than that, excellent story, and I'm going to go read the next chapters. :)

Author's Response: Wow, thankyou for your reviews, btw, I luv your stories!! Thanks for your tip on the chapter name, I changed that right away, i didn't even realise! And I'm supposed to be a good speller, I should be ashamed of myself, just joking. OMG, your like the first person to actually like cliffies, most of the time i have just seen people get hate-reviews for them lol! Thanks again, keep reading and writing!!

~*~Sophie~*~

 

The Story of Our Love by Hallie Black
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 30]

Summary: Janet Ross, a wedding planner, has finally come to the Potter house to help James and Lily organize their special day. While working, she asks the couple how the two got together, but Lily and James give their own version of the facts, recounting their memorable story.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2265 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/13/05 Updated: 10/13/05


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 11/06/05 Title: Chapter 1: How it all began...

Janet Ross was my french instructor's name. *giggle* Anyway, this was really cute. I like how Lily and James still fight though they're engaged. And James's rambling about Sirius...that was cute. ^__^

Author's Response: no way! : ) anyway thanks so much! I am honoured to have a review (and positive, too!) from you when I myself simply LOVE your stories!!! THANKS!!

 

Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158315 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 07/23/07


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 11/12/05 Title: Chapter 2: The Trainride

Hello! I thought this was a really cute chapter! The scene with the first years at the end was adorable. "I think he likes her." Hehe. ^__^ Very cute. I applaud! :)

 

All Right, Evans? by anglophile
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 272]

Summary: Everyone knows the story after that Halloween night that Harry Potter became an orphan... but what about before? James Potter and Lily Evans are two young people with an extroadinary story of bravery, friendship, and love. Join them throughout their seven years at Hogwarts and see how the past affects the future.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 28043 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/01/05 Updated: 12/13/07


Reviewer: chloish Signed
Date: 11/06/05 Title: Chapter 1: The First of September

I enjoyed this very much. :) I really liked how you described Lily. Brava! :D

Author's Response: Grazie mille! ;)

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