I am actually a published author myself, self-published but published none-the-less. I've been struggling with myself over posting fan fiction for about a year now. One part of me says, "I shouldn't spend time working on something that won't bring any money in," but the crazed HP fan in me says, "DO IT!" You can see which one prevailed.-----RMV
I really enjoy your series. I think you have done a very good job of playing with two of my favorite characters. Keep 'em coming.
Glad to see you made a series out of these stories. I have enjoyed them all seperately, it's good to have them all in one spot.
Good and very intriguing, but over too quickly.
Author's Response: Too short! Isn\'t it like, twelve chapters long? How is that too short?!? Although, if you want more, you can go ahead and check out my other remus/sirius stories as well as \'Much Ado About Puppies\' a story posted by Legion of LSPM for which I\'m writing all the Hogwarts years. Ill Met is getting quite the makeover for it...
I definitly liked it but I wish there was more to come.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! There just might be, what with the tentative bunny hopping in front of me at the moment. It wouldn\'t be a continuation though, just something similar in tone, I think, since this one covers thirteen years....Thanks for reviewing!
I have enjoyed your fic. I find it intriguing that Severus gets a type of outsider's opinion about his life.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you like it!
I found this chapter very interesting. It always makes for a good story when secrets are revealed. I think that this is a definitely good twist to the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love to hear what people think when the big stuff is finally revealed. I\'m glad you liked it. : )
I really enjoyed your story. I was hoping for Remus to come out from under the cloak and make the image real though.
Author's Response: Yeah, it really is a sad story. The cloak almost symbolized the closet in this scene. By the end, there was no need, though, because there was nothing to watch...
Very good. I really liked the last few lines.
Author's Response: Thanks. So do I *grin*
Author's Response: Thank you
I'm glad you decided on continuing the one-shot. I really enjoyed it. You did a good job on the rewrite of the first chapter too, not that I didn't like it to begin with.
Author's Response: Thanks!
OMG you are killing me, killing us all I'm sure. LOL. That was a very interesting chapter.
Author's Response: *polishes up her Dark Mark proudly*
Very amusing! I love the end of Snape and Umbridge's conversation; it made me laugh very hard. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I\'m just relieved to know I\'m not the only one with this nutty sense of humor. :p
I find it very funny Snape is taking being read to as payment for occlumency, so funny that now I can't wait for the rest. It seems, to me, Hermione was thinking naughty when she offered that. It's a very interesting idea for getting them together.
Author's Response: *sporfle* Teh Funneh and poignant are what I aim for in my fics--whether I hit the mark remains to be seen, but I\'m glad it worked for you! And no, I think Herms was proposing it completely innocently--she\'s got to have some serious conflict and resolution with Snape before the story\'s ready for that Professor rating ;p
I liked your fic, including the reason why Lily agreed to date James. It would be nice to see more of this fic.
Author's Response: I\'m very happy that you feel that way, but the fic is over.
As always, I love you fics.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I enjoyed your utter crack, especially the way Sirius cautiously enters the room in the beginning. The “I do have eyes. Step away—” was definitely a good giggling moment.
Author's Response: Yep. Very fun to start stories with dialogue. If you\'ve noticed, the ones that do usually lean more towards the crack! end of the spectrum. Thanks for reading!