I am a Harry Potter maniac (aren't we all?). My name is Kellene, (just so you know, I'm a lady).
I live in Maine, (which is in the United States). I go to Hogwarts (translation- school where I'm in seventh grade).
I love Harry Potter, Lord of the Rings, acting, swimming, singing, dancing, and playing basketball. My true passion is writing and reading. My teachers have given my many writing awards and honors (such as going to Young Authors). Many people say I am talented in writing, but it doesn't show in fanfiction because I am just playing with Jo's characters and world. I also enjoy it when people review, so please review.
See you in cyber space-
It's got a good plot twist too it and I'll enjoy it. Keep up the great work. Update soon, please.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I just uploaded the next chapter.
Did Joanne die or something because you seem to be channeling her spirit. Keep up the good work and update as soon as you can.
Author's Response: Ahhh, bite your tongue! Thank you, however. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Good job. I love your plot. It's exciting and breath teaking.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Great, just brillent. I loved it and I want the next chapter like NOW. It's almost like waiting for HBP. Anyway, good job.
Author's Response: LOL, well, I don't think the waiting is that bad! And I promise, this will be done before we see HBP.
Great job. I love it. James should have been the one to tell Harry, but... This is so not fair! James and Lily shouldn't have been killed! Am I going on a rant again? Sorry, great chapter!
Author's Response: I know, and if not James than Sirius. But...life is rarely fair.
I found one small error- "You [i]WHAT?[/i]" Fudge bellowed in spite of if himself.-
You need to put "You WHAT? " Fudge bellowed in spite of if himself. Other than that, it's good.
Author's Response: Yes, I suppose I should have. I didn't put in any codes, mainly bacuse I forgot. ;) I submitted the other chapter (this story was short by most standards) and it should be up soon. :-D
Good. I like your grammer. you made only one mistake, but that's okay. It right here...it means that at we’re dead...
It should be...it means that we're dead...
Other than that, good job.
Author's Response: All fixed! (I'm a perfectionist) Glad you liked it!
This is so cool. You are a great writer. Keep up the good work.
Hmm...it's good. I've read worse.
It's great and powerful. It's so true that the sun also rises even in the darkest of places. Thank you for another great story.
Great job. I'm am crying right now as I normally do when I read your stories. You are an amazing writer. 100/10!!
It's so good. Once again I am crying. I can give you no higer praise than that my friend.
Very good. I would love to have the next chapter soon, so please update when you can. You'll be getting a ten!!!
Umm...I think it's a good story, but then again I wrote it. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, it was a good story. *How come I'm responding to my own review? Just when I thought I couldn't get anymore mental. After all I am insane waiting for book six...*
I liked it. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks bunches!!!!
AWESOME! I love it. You have a great hook, but you have some major grammer errors. Please have a beta look over your next chapter. Other than that, great job.
Author's Response: Thanks!! Sorry about the grammer errors, I'm not fond of grammer at all really so I don't pay as much attention as i should. :( But thanks for the great review!! :)
Okay, you need to watch out for grammer and formatting. When someone has a line, you start a new paragraph. EX:
You had- “We can fight him.” Ron whispered vengefully to Harry. “We can do this,” Harry reinforced, “It’s just Malfoy and his brainless cronies.” It was only then Harry realized how quiet the hall had gotten. Everyone, including most death eaters, were staring at the opposing forces. The crowed seemed more nervous and anxious then Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny.
It's supposed to be- “We can fight him.” Ron whispered vengefully to Harry. “We can do this,” Harry reinforced, “It’s just Malfoy and his brainless cronies.” It was only then Harry realized how quiet the hall had gotten. Everyone, including most death eaters, were staring at the opposing forces. The crowed seemed more nervous and anxious then Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny.
Silly me, I can't show you the proper way to format this. My sugesstion is to get a beta to look over your chapter before you send it in. Good luck.
Author's Response: Ya, you can't show that in a review... I'm working on getting a Beta, so hopefully, I'll have less grammer errors. And, hey criticism is better than no review right?? Thanks for reading!! :)