Starting it, now I havn't started reading it yet because Dad doesn't let me on the net for too long i copy it all then read it so i will reveiw at the end.
Ok starting to read now. Looking forward to it!!!
Hmm very interesting, good job
Author's Response: Thanks!
Um just saying that in this bit
"As the last rocks fell, blocking them off from the badgers completely, and the dust started to clear, Harry looked up at Hermione in amazement."
Harry can't look at Hermione, he is blind. Apart from that, it was great.
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes that is hard to remember, especially since he can see with Fawkes. Let\'s all just pretend that I meant he was looking using Fawkes, shall we? =)
Hi, I read all ur chapters yesterday and I even joined so I could reveiw you. Ok number one, I think that Harry would try to teach Ron and Hermione to become Animagus, also, um actually I don't know if Ill say this, every one else have said this but anyway, you need to put Ron and Hermione in more, I believe that you have put them more in as the chapters progress. I think that Harry being blind is a great twist, but wouldn't Fawkes be able to heal them by crying, or is the injury to with the brain, anyway I love the plot so far and I think you are doing fine.
Author's Response: All of your concerns are going to be addressed, I hope. I\'ve been working on including Ron and Hermione more, so it should all work.
Actually when I say fine I mean absulutely great, I'm addicted
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, I know that I need to use more Ron and Hermione. As for them becoming Animagi, most of it is personal, so they'll have to do it on their own. Harry will help as he can. And as for the blindness, yes it is an injury in the brain, not directly to the eyes, so I don't think something that seems to require a topical appilication, such as Phoenix Tears, will do the trick. I'm glad you like the story!