Penname: Jordez [Contact]
Real name:
Member Since: 04/07/06
Website:
Beta-reader: 0
Status: Member
Bio:
[Report This]
Reviews by Jordez
 

Canis Majoris by trinsy
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 645]

Summary: Adhara Jocelyn Black has always been torn between her loyalty to James Potter, her cousin Sirius's best mate, and Lily Evans, the sister she has never known. But in her seventh year everything changes. Join Jocelyn, Sirius, Lily, and the rest of the Marauders as they battle for their lives... and loves...

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 56522 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/27/05 Updated: 04/04/06


Reviewer: Jordez Signed
Date: 06/11/06 Title: Chapter 1: Jocelyn's Predicament

Starting it, now I havn't started reading it yet because Dad doesn't let me on the net for too long i copy it all then read it so i will reveiw at the end.

Jordez

 
Reviewer: Jordez Signed
Date: 06/11/06 Title: Chapter 34: Beautiful

Ok starting to read now. Looking forward to it!!!

 

Summary: Harry begins to put his plans for defeating Voldemort into action, but runs into unexpected trouble that will make his task considerably more difficult. Harry will have to change his plans completely and rely on his friends more than ever as he battles Death Eaters and destroys Horcruxes, often inches from death itself. Seventh Year, post-HBP. H/G and some R/H. A lot of action, a little romance, a great read!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 96251 Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/20/06 Updated: 06/26/06


Reviewer: Jordez Signed
Date: 06/07/06 Title: Chapter 24: A Shattered Sword

Hmm very interesting, good job

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Jordez Signed
Date: 05/31/06 Title: Chapter 23: Hufflepuff's Cup

Um just saying that in this bit

"As the last rocks fell, blocking them off from the badgers completely, and the dust started to clear, Harry looked up at Hermione in amazement."

Harry can't look at Hermione, he is blind. Apart from that, it was great.

Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes that is hard to remember, especially since he can see with Fawkes. Let\'s all just pretend that I meant he was looking using Fawkes, shall we? =)

 
Reviewer: Jordez Signed
Date: 04/07/06 Title: Chapter 16: Phoenix Eyes

Hi, I read all ur chapters yesterday and I even joined so I could reveiw you. Ok number one, I think that Harry would try to teach Ron and Hermione to become Animagus, also, um actually I don't know if Ill say this, every one else have said this but anyway, you need to put Ron and Hermione in more, I believe that you have put them more in as the chapters progress. I think that Harry being blind is a great twist, but wouldn't Fawkes be able to heal them by crying, or is the injury to with the brain, anyway I love the plot so far and I think you are doing fine.

Author's Response: All of your concerns are going to be addressed, I hope. I\'ve been working on including Ron and Hermione more, so it should all work.

 
Reviewer: Jordez Signed
Date: 04/07/06 Title: Chapter 16: Phoenix Eyes

Actually when I say fine I mean absulutely great, I'm addicted

Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, I know that I need to use more Ron and Hermione. As for them becoming Animagi, most of it is personal, so they'll have to do it on their own. Harry will help as he can. And as for the blindness, yes it is an injury in the brain, not directly to the eyes, so I don't think something that seems to require a topical appilication, such as Phoenix Tears, will do the trick. I'm glad you like the story!

Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Severus Snape and the Kiss Of Death by Hotrav 1st-2nd Years
When you lived half of your life a double-agent it is hard to to keep what is...
Neville's Chocolate Toads by The Ravenclaw Sheerio 1st-2nd Years
Neville Longbottom is known for his constant mistakes. When he pronounces the...
The Green Knight Rises by Kerichi 6th-7th Years
In Creevey Wizard Comics, the Green Knight aids those in need under the cloak...
FEATURED
Wild Card by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
It was going to happen eventually: Oliver Wood had to retire. But when the decision...
Half-life by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Neville has the rest of his life ahead of him, but all he can do is look back...
Skinny Love by xxbabewithbrainsxx 6th-7th Years
“I’ve always been chubby. Admit it.” “You’ve never been skinny...
Tigerlily by Maple_and_PheonixFeather 3rd-5th Years
You promised yourself you'd never hurt her, but there are times when you wonder...
Astriferous by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Merope Gaunt has never been celestial.Nominated for a 2014 QSQ - Best Dark/Angst.
CATEGORIES