Really good story line and plot. I love how you've capture the witty and humurous essence of James and Sirius, however, i think Sirius needs to be a bit more sarcastic, but not to the point where it's mean, unless, of course, it's aimed at the Slytherins, lol. Overall, really good story, i love how you've kept the readers hanging with Valeries last comment.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the reviews! Sirius is gonna be more sarcastic towards Slytherins, especially ones related to him. *goes back and checks* OOH! THAT last comment... Dear Lord, we left a cliff-hanger. I just noticed... Merlin, I hate cliff-hangers. Sorry if we made you mad guys, the cliffy wasn\'t intended
I LOVE your fanfiction!!!!!! I think it epitomises James and Lillie's personalities exactly, not to mention Sirius'!!! I've read tons of fanfictions where James end up crying over Lilly because she's said something bitchy to him and you know that he wouldn't have done that!! I love your story plot too and the sentence strucutre, grammar and vocabulary are all really good!!! Keep the chapters coming, lol.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great feedback!!! I\'m really glad that you like my story!!!
hey, ilike ur story, i was going to write something similar, but i wont now...maybe make it so harry has to face somthing really hard and there'll all impressed by him or they have to save his life, and that's how they meet him or something...good so far though
Author's Response: You won\'t now? Why in the name of Heavens not? I\'m sure you\'re just as good a writer, if not better, than I am! If you had something in mind, don\'t think i\'ll mind if you\'re \"copying\" me! Anyway, thanks!