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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: leena Signed
Date: 04/20/06 Title: None

Really good story line and plot. I love how you've capture the witty and humurous essence of James and Sirius, however, i think Sirius needs to be a bit more sarcastic, but not to the point where it's mean, unless, of course, it's aimed at the Slytherins, lol. Overall, really good story, i love how you've kept the readers hanging with Valeries last comment.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the reviews! Sirius is gonna be more sarcastic towards Slytherins, especially ones related to him. *goes back and checks* OOH! THAT last comment... Dear Lord, we left a cliff-hanger. I just noticed... Merlin, I hate cliff-hangers. Sorry if we made you mad guys, the cliffy wasn\'t intended

 

Lily and James by blue sapphire lady
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 72]

Summary: Everyone knows that Lily hates James and James likes Lily. James is usually trying his best to impress Lily while she's trying to avoid him at all costs. Neither is working and they always seem to be together through a series of crazy and weird events. . Read and review, this is my first story! For information about chapter 4 and 5, read my bio!

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 18297 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
06/16/06 Updated: 06/12/07


Reviewer: leena Signed
Date: 08/09/06 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Stuck With You Part 2

I LOVE your fanfiction!!!!!! I think it epitomises James and Lillie's personalities exactly, not to mention Sirius'!!! I've read tons of fanfictions where James end up crying over Lilly because she's said something bitchy to him and you know that he wouldn't have done that!! I love your story plot too and the sentence strucutre, grammar and vocabulary are all really good!!! Keep the chapters coming, lol.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great feedback!!! I\'m really glad that you like my story!!!

 

Meet the - Children? by Winged Artemis
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 244]

Summary: Lily Evans is a cheeky, brainy, hopeless romantic seventeen-year-old Head Girl with a sour temper. James Potter is an arrogant, hilarious, prank-pulling seventeen-year-old Head Boy with an immature head on his shoulders. Lily loathes James and James loves Lily. Blahblahblah.

However, when a mysterious locket and a very wacked Headmaster inform the two of them that their son is in grave danger, James, Lily, and of course, Sirius, are magically transported to the future to meet James and Lily's son and the state that the magical world is in.

A twist of mystery, fun, romance and some Sirius humor! And with a wee bit of J/L, H/G, and R/Hr!

WARNING: Tree climbing Dumbledores, valuable pieces of jewelry, and an ecess of sugar are contained inside - oh, and HBP is disregarded.

See profile for update information.

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 11269 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
11/15/06 Updated: 09/08/07


Reviewer: leena Signed
Date: 11/21/06 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - To the Future

hey, ilike ur story, i was going to write something similar, but i wont now...maybe make it so harry has to face somthing really hard and there'll all impressed by him or they have to save his life, and that's how they meet him or something...good so far though

Author's Response: You won\'t now? Why in the name of Heavens not? I\'m sure you\'re just as good a writer, if not better, than I am! If you had something in mind, don\'t think i\'ll mind if you\'re \"copying\" me! Anyway, thanks!

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