I am me.
Haha... all the reviews are ending in Will he ever remember? Even this one! Will he ever remember?
Read my story?Please? And review? Please? -in big booming voice like on the wizard of Oz- THAT SHALL REPAY THY DEBT! -gigglegiggle-
Author's Response: Hi, Bewitching! I will definitely read your story. I\'ve got a lot on my plate right now, but I promise to get to it soon, okay? *hugs* -SIW
Okay... I understand that you've been going through alot... but its been nearly a year now. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I haven\'t posted it here yet, but there is a new chapter posted at www.dracoandginny.com under the author name KateinVA. I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story!
Cheeheehee! Hehehehe! Oooh! I'm laughing inside! I don't know why...maybe an exited laugh, or the sweet irony! But hehehehe... I loved it! Short, but sweet. Don't let anyone get grumpy about its length! You did great!
Oh...and Draco still hasn't dressed! Won't Ginny be happy...
Very original plot. I like it. Its deffinently going in my favorites.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate that!
I thirst for responses
He miight have dresssed, I mean, it wasn't clearly portrayed, but I imagined that in between the time of Ginny's departure and Lucius's arrival he probably at least put on a hotel bathrobe. Is it just me, or has anyone else noticed how fluffy those robes are?
I enjoy your fanfic very much! I love your word choice, it creates amazing imagery and I can just see the scene ply out in my mind! The only problem I found were a few grammer mistakes that probably just came from quick typing.
[Quote]His father smiled at his weakly, his face shining with loving support. [/Quote] Just little things like that, they are a pet peeve of mine, thats why I notice them. Maybe double beta? I do that sometimes when I'm having issues getting my fic accepted. Overall, I loved it!
Author's Response: Yea, those are the things that drive me crazy when I go back through, the stuff that never gets picked up by spellcheck... thanks for reading and reviewing!
I really enjoyed this fic! I have never read a Regulus Sirius fic before. It really shows how Regulus might have ended up with a good/evil war inside him, and how he might have become the mysterious RAB. I also like the relationship shown between Sirius and Regulus, it was exactly as I imagined it would be, a love that easily borders a hate is the only way I can describe it. I hope to see more from you!
" I am not great at giving reviews, but I will do my best.
First of all, I love how in this story, you are incorperating your own theories for future books. It is a very original way to get your theories out and make them known.
"He would, of course, know what it’s like to be lost… to have fallen. But I was young, naive, headstrong… even delusional, you could say."
I love this quote from your story because it shows your writing style so clearly. I love the rythem that you have managed to put into your writing by using grammatical tools. Much more efficient and understandable than Shakesperean meter.
I lvoe your writing and I would love to hear more from you. Thank you for the banner too!
Author's Response: Thank you! And you\'re welcome for the banner :)
I really like where this is going. It should be interesting. =]
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the rest!
I ver much enjoyed this story, I liked how you showed that a person can look past what they know of someone off the bat. Your character being a woman, Harry testifying for Lucius and Lucius actually being thankful for it are all great examples. I think the one thing that bothered me was when Harry was holding back tears. I just have never imagined Harry to be the crying in public type. He has spoken about his parents before calmly. But other than that, I think the story was absolutely amazing. (I wouldn't even have mentioned it if we weren't required to say something we didn't like. It was that small of a thing).
Author's Response: Heh, I appreciate that you mentioned it anyways. I think that I\'m proudest of this fic, so it means a lot to me when people like it. And thank you for leaving such a nice review - I always appreciate getting them and this one just made my holidays a little more cheery. Thank you! :D
I really love your story!
I like how you illistrated how close everyone is to Ron. Sometimes, I forget Ginny is his sister, and that she loves him just as much as Harry and Hermione. =)
The one thing that bothered me were some odd spelling errors. Just like, when you accidently press a letter twice. Stuff like that. Also, I think towards the end, Ron's choice of words was just a little bit out of character. But not so much that it couldn't be explained away by the fact that he's grown up.
Lovely story overall!
Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you liked my story.