I'm Sunray, your resident hopelss romantic who would kill for a hopeless romance.
I am sorry in advance for the slow updates on my WIPs. School is murder.
The Lily Trilogy:: A series of 3 fics surrounding Lily's choices, that later changed Harry's life.
The MMB Universe:: A series consisting of a WIP and several one-shots, surrounding my OCs, Rose and Alex, as well as their family and friends.
That was great! Sirius really does deserve to be best man at their wedding ;)
Author's Response: Yesh indeed he does! ^_^
OMG!!!!!!! so good! just right and unbelievably cute!!!!! what other fics have you written?
Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.
Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.
~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!
Hmmmm...interesting. I have read the entire story thus far, and I (who does not usually read about rape) found it believable. Though I myself have not gone through such a situation *thank G-d!!* I felt like it might actually happen. Hermione is VERY in character in the beggining, and changes as the story evolves. The change in her attitude is gradual, as it may be. I have heard of a scientific term that I think may be good for describing her situation. It's called Stockholm Syndrome, and happens when a person is kept in the captivity of somebody else for a while, and after a while begins bonding with their captor. Hermione seems to fit this cat. very well. She is being held both physically and mentally by Draco. Her evolvement is done perfectly.
love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!
it's sooo awsome!!!!!!!!! update soon
Author's Response: thank you!! I have updated!
that was absalutely amazing. has Darco taken secret lessons on the laws of chivilary per chance? because he sure sounds it. he's acting like hermione's knight in shining armor.
Author's Response: Thank you! Hmmm, that’s a good question. The sudden change does seem slightly suspicious, doesn’t it? Or maybe it was a spur-of-the-moment kinda thing… Hahaha, knight in shining armour!! Hahaha…
James laughed heartily. "Oh Lils..."
:) amazing, that's all you can say to describe this fic. simply amazing. James is so cute (both in the memories and out) and Sirius is hallerious! update soon!
cute! so so cute! love it! just one thing- why hadn't hermione seen harry in 4 years?
you're not the only one that cried. It's so sad!
no!!!!! it can't be over!!!!!! you can't leave me hanging like this!!!!!!! i'll die!!!!!!! help!!!!!!
sooooooo goooooood!!!!!!!! im want more!!!!! please please please update soon!!!!
Wow! That was really powerful. Poor Sirius :( he deserves better...You shouldn't get punished for having a good heart *tears apart room Sirius-like*
Tears leaked down Sirius’ cheeks as he sat perched still on his bed. The sadness was creeping upon him again. There was no way of stopping it. He tried desperately to become angry but it wasn’t working. I loved that part.
You used the lyrics really well! Great Job!
Well, for starters, I would like to thank you again for my amazing banner. Second, I would like to say that I suck at reviews, so I opologize ahead of time.
Now: I would like to say how I find it terribly ironic, and so totally believeable that what drove Tom to such levels of madness, of hatred, was love. It fits his love-lacking character (in canon) so so much. Even though this story was written pre - HBP, it could still somehow fit in with canon, at least in charcterisation, and that is totally amazing. I love the Symbolysim of the rose, and of how even after death, their love remained. As well, a rose is one of the prettier flowers that exist, yet it has thorns. Their love was true, and beautiful (you ceratinly made it beautiful) yet it had the downsides (that were not their fault. I'd hate to put the blood of millions in the hands of Hermione. SHe doen't deserve it). A rose is beautiful, but it stings.
Also, re-reading it now, right after I read another book, in which a rose has that symbolysim, it has been magnified to me.
it's so awsome!
can't wait for the next chappie and (hopfully) journal entry.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am working hard on it! Don\'t worry, it\'s coming soon.
this story is reeeeeaaaaaly good!!!!! but there are a few problems with the house colors though, go back and fix them when you get the chance, please. i'm surprised the mods didn't catch it. anyway, nice story.
Author's Response: Heheh, hey there! I'm really glad you like the story! The House Colours? Oh, goodness. Do you think you coud point out roughly which chaper or what part the mistakes were in? I don't feel at the moment to go back through the last 20 chapters looking for each House colour. I think readers were much rather have me working on chapter 21. Thanks for pointing it out though! Thanks for reviewing!
I like how they confront the Death Eaters and it isn't because of some made up prophesy...
For all of you who wanted an update, I have a proposition. You may or may not like it, but it's all I can offer.
Check review challenge for the last chapter. details there!
James and Lily Potter were possibly the most famous parents in wizarding history. We know alot about their adult life, but what do we really know about their childhood? Even Harry never knew about the Drama, jealousy, danger, friendships, happiness, sadness, resentment,confusion and love that his parents went through as children. Here, their lives, from when the two of them were eleven to when they were brutally murdered at only 21, is recorded. Lily and James Potter were unsung heros. This is their story.
it's sooo sad!!!! but how did the dementors kill him?anyway, it's great, update soon! *does puppy eyes*
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review! Well, techniaclly they didnt. but its much easier to say and think of it as "killed" rather than "Is completely soulless as to the fact that it was sucked out through his mouth." :) Its updated already :P
UPDATE!!!! I'M DYING HERE!!!!!
Author's Response: Im trying! they wont accept it or send me an email whyyyy!
oh my god!!!!! sooooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!love it !!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: hey, thanks for the review! glad ya liked it!!
Woah! That was absalutly amazing! For starters, I like how Charlie had to get over Bill's death, and he did that by falling in love. There is no greater medicine in the world that love!
Also, I found Lauren's secret very interesting. I would love to hear more about it!
All in all, Great Job!
Author's Response: I will hopefuly expand the story someday. Thanks so much for your review - I appreciate it!