Date of Birth: January 29, 1993
Fav Music: Bowling for Soup, Twister, Usher, Switch Foot, Blink 180, Simple Plan, Eminem, D12, G-Unit, Lil John and the East Side Boys, and much, more...
Fav movies: Harry Potter collection (so far), Lord of the Rings Collection, Star Wars, Without a Paddle (not out yet), and more...
Fav TV shows: BET rap city, Music on MTV, Boiling Points, Punk'd,
Fav Books:Harry Potter, Hardy Boys series, Lord of the Rings, Goosebumps, Star Wars, and more...
This is a good story! Geese! I have got to admit that is the best story I've EVER heard! Don't make them break up! PLEASE! Keep writing!
This is really good, and really incredible. I just hope this book never ends! You've inspired me, and I'm assuring you probably hundreds of other amautuer writers. Keep writing! Update SOON! And merry christmas =D
Awsome story! Thanks of reading my story! But read my newest story, Harry Potter and the Charnicoles of Volemort, and review! Thanks! rock on! (Please update soon!) Rating:10
Author's Response: sure, no problem! thank you very much!!
Your story is great! Just a little short and also short of description. But besides that, I like your writing,your title, and creativity. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Your opinion means alot! :)
I'm back to give you some tips... describe Hermione a little more (like, describe her perm, tanned skin, and cafe brown eyes), talk about your scenery (like, go back to the fireplace in chapter one. add more, describe hoe the lime green flames flew up into his face), and stretch it out (like say what knid of text books Harry got), but again, I like your story. Keep typing (and if you don't mind read my story (Harry Potter and the Last Tactics, and give me some tips! thanks!)
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, I'll check out your story!
Even better! Thanks for reading my story! And pleaz read my other, Harry Potter and the Lost Memories, and in a tomorow or Monday, read my new one, the Charnocals of Lord Voldemort. But seriously, your writing rocks! Keep writing, and update soon! (what's youyr name? if you don't mind!)
Author's Response: Okay, I'll read your stories, I think you are an excellent writer! My name is Jesse.
Author's Response: Okay, I'll read you're stories, I honestly think you are an excellent writer! MY name is Jessica.
I think it was awesome, and the only thing you really need to touch up on are your scenery details. Like say that the flowers in the garden were fresh and buetiful, with a dark, cheery red. But besides that, your doing great! update soon! Rating-9
Great job doing the story! (somebody's Jealous, DRACO!) Great job! update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's great to get reviews!
I think you did a good job describing you story! update soon! Rating:9.9
Author's Response: Ah, but what is descibing but mere words? It was so hard to say what I wanted things to look like and still make sense! Writing is NOT like talking to my friends. I can't just point something out and say, 'That, it looks like that,' ir 'It has that color'. It just wasn't that easy. Lord, if I could write like Julie Andrews or something, whew! I would be a legend! Thank-you though!
Kool...I'll giv u a nine star, you did good. It's different, but really good and creative
Author's Response: Well, thank you kindly. I do hope you enjoy the updates.
excelllent detail! I like the way youbring back old times, and you are good with making the characters sound like who they really are. The only things I saw that were wrong were spelling mistakes, but other than that, please keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanx! I tried hard to correct those spelling mistakes! :)