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11/24/04

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Date of Birth: January 29, 1993
Location:Kentucky
Email:RandyThorpe@msn.com
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Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 11/26/04 Title: None

This is a good story! Geese! I have got to admit that is the best story I've EVER heard! Don't make them break up! PLEASE! Keep writing!



Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 12/18/04 Title: None

This is really good, and really incredible. I just hope this book never ends! You've inspired me, and I'm assuring you probably hundreds of other amautuer writers. Keep writing! Update SOON! And merry christmas =D



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Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 11/28/04 Title: None

Awsome story! Thanks of reading my story! But read my newest story, Harry Potter and the Charnicoles of Volemort, and review! Thanks! rock on! (Please update soon!) Rating:10

Author's Response: sure, no problem! thank you very much!!



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Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 11/25/04 Title: None

Dear Author, Your story is great! Just a little short and also short of description. But besides that, I like your writing,your title, and creativity. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Your opinion means alot! :)



Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 11/25/04 Title: None

Dear author, I'm back to give you some tips... describe Hermione a little more (like, describe her perm, tanned skin, and cafe brown eyes), talk about your scenery (like, go back to the fireplace in chapter one. add more, describe hoe the lime green flames flew up into his face), and stretch it out (like say what knid of text books Harry got), but again, I like your story. Keep typing (and if you don't mind read my story (Harry Potter and the Last Tactics, and give me some tips! thanks!)

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, I'll check out your story!



Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 11/27/04 Title: None

Even better! Thanks for reading my story! And pleaz read my other, Harry Potter and the Lost Memories, and in a tomorow or Monday, read my new one, the Charnocals of Lord Voldemort. But seriously, your writing rocks! Keep writing, and update soon! (what's youyr name? if you don't mind!)

Author's Response: Okay, I'll read your stories, I think you are an excellent writer! My name is Jesse.

Author's Response: Okay, I'll read you're stories, I honestly think you are an excellent writer! MY name is Jessica.



The Beginning of Forever by Ronsbiggestfan09

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 22 Reviews
Summary: This takes place in the trio's fouth year during and after the Yule Ball. Harry is taking Hermione, but wants to be with someone else. Hermione and Ron both have secret feelings for each other that are about to be uncovered.
Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 11/27/04 Title: Chapter 2: The Yule Ball

I think it was awesome, and the only thing you really need to touch up on are your scenery details. Like say that the flowers in the garden were fresh and buetiful, with a dark, cheery red. But besides that, your doing great! update soon! Rating-9



The American Revolution by Sparkling Star

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 133 Reviews
Summary: Melody Chancelle, an American-born girl who had lived in France for the last five years, has just been transferred from Beauxbaton to Hogwarts. How will she adjust?

Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 11/27/04 Title: Chapter 5: Going into Hiding

Great job doing the story! (somebody's Jealous, DRACO!) Great job! update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! It's great to get reviews!



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Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 11/27/04 Title: None

I think you did a good job describing you story! update soon! Rating:9.9

Author's Response: Ah, but what is descibing but mere words? It was so hard to say what I wanted things to look like and still make sense! Writing is NOT like talking to my friends. I can't just point something out and say, 'That, it looks like that,' ir 'It has that color'. It just wasn't that easy. Lord, if I could write like Julie Andrews or something, whew! I would be a legend! Thank-you though!



Harry Potter and The Enchantress by Kairos Devan

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 30 Reviews
Summary: Harry's back at Pivet Drive. Everything is different. Aunt Petunia reveals a secret that makes things bareable. Harry also has a dream that could change everything is well. Can Harry make it through even more?
Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 12/10/04 Title: Chapter 1: Nothing Remains The Same

Kool...I'll giv u a nine star, you did good. It's different, but really good and creative

Author's Response: Well, thank you kindly. I do hope you enjoy the updates.



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Reviewer: Darkpassions IV Signed
Date: 01/08/05 Title: None

excelllent detail! I like the way youbring back old times, and you are good with making the characters sound like who they really are. The only things I saw that were wrong were spelling mistakes, but other than that, please keep writing! =D

Author's Response: Thanx! I tried hard to correct those spelling mistakes! :)