i'm eleanor from indiana. im not wut u'd call a hp super fan or anything, i just love writing. i appreciate reviews a lot, but please, im young and don't want me spirit crushed, please be kind! thanx a lot everybody, and hope u enjoy my stories
wow. i love, absolutely love, ur description of the mauraders playing frisbee. that they glowed because they had each other. it was just amazing. please keep writing, i luv it!
Author's Response: Wow. Hehe...thanks hunn. *blushes* Keep reading and reviewing!
man, great minds must think alike. this is exactly the way i imagined the harry/hermione situation if (and when?) her 'rents die....excellent story so far
i lk it a lot...i caught the clue once u mentioned it, but not in the story. very interesting tho. i really feel sorry for a certain person, and not the one everyone expects...hope that made sense to you! great story
good story, but one thing doesn't make sense. whos this grandmother telling the stories? harry's mom is dead, and hermione's mom is a muggle. unless u mean grandmother in a figurative sense, that doesn't work. good writing style tho, i enjoyed it...
Author's Response: Sorry if I didn't make that clear. I ment grandmother in a figurative sense. Now it should fit together. Thanks for reviewing!
im assumin to copy phantom? ur doing a good job....its accurate w/its own twist...i got a little annoyed by the exact copyin in the last part of this chapter, but if u look at it as just applying poto to hp, it works really well...god story tho, i really lk the idea, however creepy it is, of snape being obssessed w/mione...the dungeon parallel between the phantom and snape works well too, totally just got that
Author's Response: Thanks for such a detailed review, I really appreciate it.
well, i loved it...don't know wut some of the other reviewers were reading, i thought it was great really realistic, not too fluffy, but not too dramatic. nough information to give me an idea of their past, not so much to flood the story with pointlessness, and not too little to make it incredibly vague. pretty much amazing...
hooray for quoting 1984...that was really cool and i think it is quite likely that woudl be one of hermione's favorite books...
this was really..usually when i write/read harry/hermione fics i like it if ginny and ron find other ppl, but u did this so well despite the incredible sadness i felt it was still amazing
Author's Response: If I had continued this story, Ginny would have moved on to Neville and Ron would fall in love with Lavander. And they would live happily ever after. Actually, I just made that up now... But if it makes you happy, feel free to consider that to be what would actually happen ;-)