Age - 13
Hair - Dirty Blond
Eyes - Blue
I have wirtten ONE fanfic, (lily/James) I should say, I'm writing one, because it's not nearly done, but I'll probably end up writting different oneshot's about L/J while I'm writing that story, Or possibly other ships....Ok....I like cake....Cake kicks.... So does pie.....and harry potter.... ok, bi!
x x x Savanna
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Rated: [Reviews - ]
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I LOVE IT, it;s great, I wonder WHO took her diary, i hate reading an unfinished one, but all the good ones are these days.... UPDATE SOON! IM WAITNG!! *mwuahahha* hurry up! ANDALE!
Potter's Charm by Secret Lily
Rated: [Reviews - 2501]
Summary:
All's fair in love and war
Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP
IM BACK, I'd like to apoligize for all of those spelling mistakes, truly, I don't know how I passed third grade. I can't spell. OK. Ill be back again, later.. To check up on you... YOU BETTER finish this story! ~ttyl x x x Sammy
Author's Response: hey..spelling mistakes happen. I make my fair share as well.
Am I getting annyoing to you? Ho hum. I just keep refreshing, and the next chapter isn't popping up! WHATS WRONG?! Ok... Maybe it's not me.. maybe its YOU.. Back to the story, I liek how you make James actually act liek himself, the smart ass trouble maker he is *ouch* Because in alot of other sotries they make him and Lily get together in the fourth year, but yours is good. GREAT. k.. Im actually going to wait out until the next chapter to review again, arnt you proud? BYE! ~ ttyl x x x Sammy
Author's Response: so proud..
I FOUND IT!! YOUR OTHER SITE!! You knwo what im talking about, the one with your story posted on it?? MWAUAHHAHAA I'v been indisposed for a while, il begin reviweing on the other site though, -is proud- GREAT story!
O crap.. ignore that.. wrong story.. so sorry
Ok, great, I like how you made James so mature so far, and how you've portrayed Sirius's Charachter! (
oooo, Im getting the shivers! That was great, I love your cliffhangers, they make the story so much better, if possible. oooooo, how else could they get there besides apperating?? deatheater? howd they get there? so many questions, keep writing this is a great story so far, I don't know how it's going to end, it may very well be crap, i DOUBT it, but it great so far, lol! just so I know it's not crap, could I get the website where its posted so I'll want to keep reading? lol, jk, great plot, Lily's showing she lieks James already ooo!POST SOON! ~x x x Sammy
I tried my homwork, I promise, I did, but I can't stand those deatheaters! argh! -kicks deatheaters HARD- grr, how could they be so sneaky and mean? those poopfaces... I love how powerful you made Dumbledore, I just wished you would give us more information before you stop! Oooh, James is so brave, great writing, everyone semed to fit... Ok, Sorry to clog up your review board! buh bye!
Author's Response: suuure you did. everyone hates homework. mainly everyone being..me.
Wow. That's incredible. I love how James is so.. deep.... Why won't Lily look at him a in a different light? she's to proud to think he may actually of changed!! ARGH! She just needs to, notice it! wow.. Great chapter, sorry I havn't reviewd in so long, I was grounded from the computer! Ok, well, I'll try and review next chapter! ~Sammy
lol, very nice plot line! I love it, im so jealous! WHY CANT I WRITE THAT GOOD! lol girls in underwear with Sirius, im surprised he stayed down the whole time,, ok back to being normal! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
lol, very nice plot line! I love it, im so jealous! WHY CANT I WRITE THAT GOOD! lol girls in underwear with Sirius, im surprised he stayed down the whole time,, ok back to being normal! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Sorry it took so long to review!! Im all tingly! That was great! Lol, who are they coming for? Does James know? How does he know? NIOCE. Love the cliff hanger! Ok, -yipps- Im off to write me own *Gallops out of room* OH! WAIT YOU HAVE to review mine! *Mwuaha* ILL BE BACK
Ok, one more review till next chapter, IS there anything I can do to get that website url (The one with the story on it?)? Ok, Well, -gallops off into sunset- Go to go make my own story! It'll be better than yours!! mwahaha! JAYKAY, It could NOT be better than yours.. -sugar spree- ~x x x Sammy
I'm SO sory for nto reviweing, I've been busy, in fact, ?I just posted like 300 chapters on my story, but wow. great plot. Great story. Lily finnally came round huh? good for her, mamaii, no offense but I don't lik eher... any way, keep it up!!
EEP!! This is my first review EVER.. You should be so proud! -yipss- GREAT story, although I did find some thing I abseloutly dreaded about it, well not in this one so far, so far this one IS quite YUMMY(if I do say so myself, lol) but in your other one, I didn't like how everyone one was supposedely perfectely matched with every one else! This is turning out to be quite A long revewe.... quite a long review indeed.... ANY WAY, I dont liek PERFECTELY perfect ending, but all of your stories are horrible... Just kidding, it's great, I'l be BACK
x x x ~Sammy
Author's Response: in this story? or in my other story? I know many people don't like mary sues and find them annoying but i kind of like my OC's. I have some OC's that aren't there just for the purpose of hooking up with a Marauder. Trust me..there will be no perfect ending because as you and the rest of us Harry Potter fans know, Lily and James die! :Gasp: i know. horrible. Also, Sirius goes to Azkaban! :gasp: i know, i know, contain yourself here. I am planning on taking both my fics to Lily and James's death. Thanks for the long and numerous reviews. I enjoy them.
Vindicated by Secret Lily
Rated: [Reviews - 610]
Summary:
Lily Evans has always pushed guys away, keeping her distance away from heartbreak. If she never got too attatched, she would never get hurt.
Yet, James Potter refuses to be pushed away. Will he be the one to actually tear down Lily's walls that separate them?
!! I like it alot, keep up the good work, but why is Lily so nice to Sirius? I don't get it.... And another thing, are Lily and James sleeping in the same dorm? After all, they ARE head boy and girl! UPDATE SOON!!
James' Pain by Secret_soul
Rated: [Reviews - 124]
Summary: I'm sorry guys but this story will no longer be updated. See my profiel for reasons etc.
I like it alot! IT's a great story, very nice plot! ;) I wish we could have mroe details on the pain james is feeling :-/ would Sirius go out wuith Lily if she asked? You have ten review, update!!
Author's Response: I have submitted my next chapter! There will be more pain *laughs evilly* and I doubt very much that Sirius would do that to James! Besides, what if Lily's lying?
