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Christmas Magic by Asphyxiated
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 80]

Summary: Ask anyone and they’ll tell you there’s something exquisite in the air around Christmas Eve. But what? Witness the magic of Christmas twirl two unsuspecting 7th years into each others arms… as Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger find out exactly what ‘Christmas Magic’ is all about.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4453 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 02/12/05


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 12/12/04 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Magic

Why oh why are they French kissing? I mean, it's only their FIRST kiss.......and it's gross!!!!!! But other than that, I love it! :)

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 12/06/04 Title: None

DUDE THIS STORY ROCKS!!!!!!!! ...........the best parts are when you point out problems in the movie.......that is sooooo me! LOL. Keep on writing!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
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12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 12/18/04 Title: None

This chapter took an odd turn that I wasn't expecting. Please try to keep the story on the same track in was going, as I feel you are changing that. However, that chapter was still nicely written!

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 11/30/04 Title: None

*Cheers.* Draco is even hotter now!

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 12/29/04 Title: None

*starts chanting loudly* DRACO! DRACO! DRACO! DRACO! It's great.

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 11/29/04 Title: None

Hmmm..........I'm still wondering what Malfoy is doing..........good job, keeping your readers coming back for more. But why is Hermione using Muggle technology????? She's a witch, remember? KEEP WRITING MORE!!!!!!!

Author's Response: actually, i thought i'd just throw in a couple muggle items since she's muggle born, ya know? but yeah, realistically, she probably wouldn't. thanks for reviewing my story!

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 01/10/05 Title: None

*sigh....* And Draco's so funny...first 'it must be my lucky day' and then 'it must be my lucky week'.....what's coming next? It must be my lucky month? It must be my lucky year? It must be my lucky decade? Is he ever going to realize that maybe HE'S the lucky thing?

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 12/03/04 Title: None

yeah! Draco is getting hotter by the minute!

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 01/12/05 Title: None

Oh, someone suggested this story to me and now I LOVE THEM! This has a sound and quite original plot, everyone seems to be in character, there are no grammar errors as far as I can see, and it has my favorite ship in it! It's a great story, keep writing!

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 02/07/05 Title: None

I like it! The tension is quite obvious and you are doing a good job working in words and actions that show us how Ron and Hermione feel for each other. And being nice and gradual is always a good thing. :)

 

The Summer Before 6th Year by Terri
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 109]

Summary: Summer after losing Sirius, with Voldemort growing stronger, how will Harry cope?

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 58422 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/07/04 Updated: 11/14/04


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 11/29/04 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Three words.....I.........LOVE........IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And it's long, that's good, that's always good. :) The only thing is everything seemed to be happening so fast with Harry discovering his powers and everything......I guess your opinion is that he's going to need all the time he can get to prepare for the last battle in the seventh book??

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 02/18/05 Title: None

No offense, but I could barely understand the prologue. The letter part is a bit confusing, and everthing seems to be happening to quickly. However, I like your story idea.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 03/11/05 Title: None

Again, am I completely blown away by the cuteness of your story. It was a bit confusing, and the sort-of-poem sort-of-story format didn't help. Rating this a 6.

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 11/29/04 Title: None

Not bad.....not bad at all.......but why are Ron and Hermione using Muggle technology 24/7 ? They're graduates of Hogwarts for goodness sake! And the conversation with Ella and that Jack (that is his name, right?) seems a little pressed to come to the ending line.....even though it is sweet. Other than that, it's good!

Author's Response: well, they are living in a muggle comunity. so if the muggles saw magic it would be a fiasco! i don't understand what you mean about "pressed" call me a ditz, but you totally got me there. like is this a good review, or a flame? i'm confused! thanks anyway! lol!

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 11/29/04 Title: None

It's a good review! I'm just using "constructive criticism!" And by pressed I mean that it doesn't seem natural that Jack (I'm pretty sure I'm right with that name.....) just asks out of the blue 'Did your parents meet at the Ministry?' Maybe enter a question or too before that......maybe he recognizes Ron because he's the co-minister??

Author's Response: okay, i was just wondering! no, i won't change it. sorry, that's the way i pictured ending it when i started the story! and that's what i'm keeping, i'm the author, so it's my decision. no one else said anything about it, so one person can't change my opinion. sorry. thanks!

 

Summary: Various HP characters get drunk or high on sugar/caffeine/whatever (as long as it's legal!). Insanity follows. No one's in character. Very random.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3511 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/10/04 Updated: 11/11/04


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 12/06/04 Title: Chapter 2: The Marauders

That was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo random!

 

Summary: This is Ronald Weasley's last year at Hogwarts and has recieved everything he once saw in the Mirror of Erised. He's become Head Boy, holds the Quidditch Cup, and actually looks good. But there's someone missing in the Mirror.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 86859 Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/10/04 Updated: 02/10/05


Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 12/11/04 Title: Chapter 15: Closing the Semester

Yes, as much as I wish Hermione hadn't broken up with Ron, it would have really, really, really, really, really irritated me if it wasn't the real chapter.....I've had enough of that! :) Write lots of chapters down on paper so you can post multiple ones at the same time when you start posting again!

Author's Response: Yeah, I think I'm done irritating people with my fake endings...though it was freaking funny! lol. And yes, they did break up...and don't worry. I have the next chapter written out already! And I'll think about doing the multiple chapters! lol. Well thanks for the review! I'll see ya on the 17th! Peace Out!!

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 01/01/05 Title: Chapter 20: Operation Commencement

One word, Hoku:wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you...One word. Mahalo! Which means the first two words in this review! lol. Peace Out!!

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 12/18/04 Title: Chapter 16: The Sisterly Confrontation

YEA YOU FINALLY GOT ANOTHER CHAPTER UP!!!!!!!! It's better every chapter, and I'm not kidding.

Author's Response: Hooray...I did!! But I'll probably update soon...hopefully! I told you it gets better in every chapter...I wonder what's going to happen next! And thanks for the review...I love your story...so hurry up and update also! Peace Out!!

 
Reviewer: witchwannaB Signed
Date: 12/07/04 Title: Chapter 14: ~*~Letters from Lucy~*~uncut

You know, tricking us one time was bad enough, but TWICE??? Though frankly I like the new Letters from Lucy much better..........

Author's Response: LOL...okay, I'm sorry...I guess I was having too much fun! lol. Okay...I promise not to trick any more on this story! I promise, and if I do...I promise to give you a part in my story...got it! Okay...so no more tricking! And thank you...you are the third person that agreed to my second ending! I rather Ron feel guilty for his actions, then him having the satisfaction of watching Hermione and Lucy fight! lol...though I did have fun with that little chick fight! lol. Thanks for the review. Peace Out!

 
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