Well, I've just started writing Harry Potter fan fiction, so I might not be very good with it yet. I've been writing short stories also, so email me if you'd like the read them.
I love writing about romance, and just emotions in general.
Please review my work! :]
Summary: It's been six years since Harry and Ginny have come face to face. Different career oprions led them in different paths than they had hoped but now at the wedding of Ron and Hermione they are forced back together. Will their fragile love survive the troubles that haunt their pasts? Rated "R" for Sexual scenes, Teen Pregnancy and Spousal Abuse in this story.
I agree with Zultan a little bit. This chapter would have been hard to write, and I myself would have had a lot of trouble deciding what dircetion to take with Harry and Ginny.. Zultan said tthat they should have had a conflict at the end instead of them aking up, which would have been interesting.. But the thing is, climax's are supposed to tie up loose ends and resolve conflicts. If the story had ended in a conflict, the story in a sense wouldn't have really changed, or gone anywhere. I like this story, but i'm on the fence about the ending.
Summary: During a summer at the Burrow before their final year at Hogwart's, Ron and Harry discover more than an everlasting friendship.
SLASH RW/HP (Rated R and AU just in case)
You are an amazing writer. I didn't expect to be able to relate to harry and ron with their new found relationship but i came to realize that i CAN relate to them.
This story sent a message that says You should not be afraid to love someone, no matter what the situation is.
Your writing is amazing and intense, I really get an accurate picture of what is taking place in the story in every scene.
I loved how Hermione and Ginny were okay with their relationship, and you stayed true to the characters and their personalities.
Loved it. Abosloutley adored it!
I'm SO looking forward to reading more from you!
I'm writing a few stories myself right now, not al about Harry potter...but i need a good writer's perspective.
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Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Summary: Hermione Granger is not the person everyone thinks… sure, she regards the rules more than most people and tries her best to keep her grades perfect, but a real teenage girl resides. This story is Hermione’s diary, and if you read it, you will read about the girl that is hidden by the bookworm, and we will explore Hermione’s real thoughts. Rated PG-13 for language.
Author’s Note: This fic was written BEFORE the publication of HBP, so it will follow through OotP cannon. And, I promise that the story is better than the summary! ;)
Chapter Five accepted!! The story is finished now... you know you wanna review!
I feel really mean giving you a review like this... but it's just a different opinion! So don't get mad! :]
I agree with a review you recieved before this.
Hermione was way too bitchy for me. IT was like i was reading about a different character than hermione. It just didn't feel like her, it felt like i was reading about Lavender of something.
I had trouble sympathizing and relating to Hermione in this story, some of the events like stealing lip gloss were just too out of character. Instead of being mad at Parvati, i expected her to be mad at Ron.
I know that your story shouldn't be exactly what I think it should be, it's just the Character seemed out of place.
Everything felt rushed, and Hermione was just beinga Bitch the whole time. Is that really how you think of Hermione?
Also, the way she wrote in her journal seemed a bit unlike her. SHe seemed like an American..lol. Just cuz maybe you used certain british terms in the wrong places maybe..but how would i know? I'm amercian! lol.
The ending was rushed and it just didn't seem believable.
THe writing was good, i can't think of a specific example but somtimes things just didn't flow quite right.
I liked the overall idea and style of the story though!
I hope you take this advice from me, and i can't wait to read your next story.
Author's Response: Oh no, I'm not in the least bit mad! Thank you very much for your feedback, I really appreciate it. Don't feel mean, everybody is entitled to their own opinion! ;) Well, in my other stories, Hermione isn't bitchy, lol. Check them out: The Yule Ball Argument, and Hermione's House. Again, thanks for your advice! xoxoxo
Summary: One-shot. Hermione Granger isn't perfect - no one is. But perfection is expected of the very best and it isn't only the weak who crack under pressure and strain...
Wow, very good! I loved how we saw a new side of Hermione, not exactly in her character, but it's Fan fiction, right? :] Depressing, but emotionally powerful. Your story is one of those that make us realise what life is all about. I liked seeing this new depressing side of Hermy, and i liked how you added in she didn't want to be always thought of as the 'smart girl'. I'm really glad you didn't make them kiss at the end, it would have tipped the story a dfferent way then it was supposed to go. I love this fic becuase it's not filled with just sex like a lot of the other ones. No contact like that, just pure emotion and realization. Me+This story=Lovee.
Summary: He saw her letters and became jealous. Passion turned to obsession, then he did something horrible to her. But if she was his, would she stay for sunrise to pass over her face, just so he'd know it wasn't a dream? Rated 'R'.
The sequel, Black Rose: The Lost Chapters, is now up!
mmk...well. I liked the story, but it moved too fast for me. I thought the idea and the plot were interesting, but it wasn't quite long enough for the characters to sink in. A little too much drama all at once. Some parts were pretty confusing but i guess it worked out. I was surprised and kind of well, dissapointed when i found out draco hadn't died. I guess it was okay, i don't knwo what else you could have done to end it. Well, the ending was pretty good becuase it left me with an elated happy feeling, but it just didn't quite fit with the story, get what I'm saying? Lol, well all in all i think it was a great story!
Summary: Dean/Seamus One-Shot.
How Dean and Seamus got together…
That was great!
I loved how you set it during the triwizard tournament, it made the story have a good pace.
It was refreshing to read because it wasn't extremely sexual and over done.
Their relationship seemed believable, lol.
Overall great work!
Author's Response: :D thankyou! *hugs* glad you enjoyed it