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One of the greatest fics I've ever read! Hats off to you, Pallas. The ingenuity and intricacy of the back story you created for Remus and his family is unparalled. What REALLY struck me about yout story is that this was published BEFORE HBP, the similarities between Kane and Greyback were truly astonishing! Congratulations on a terrific story!
Bravo, Madame Phantom! As usual, well worth the wait. For those who aren't studying French, what does the title translate to? Just wondering. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It translates as "Sunset". Thought French was a bit more dramatic than the English ;)
Sheer genius again! It was absolutely worth the wait. Keep 'em comin, Erik!
Pallas, you've done it again! You're a master of cliffhangers, I'm on the edge of my seat! Please don't be long in posting the next segment!
Very well done! The sense of fear and urgency on James' part was perfectly captured. To me, this moment in their history is when James finally shed his blind faith in Sirius, and had to act on what he knew was right. Obviously they get past it, but with your last line, it's clear what James is feeling at the time. Beautifully done, would love to see more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I think this, plus the Snape's Worst Memory incident are what changed James, but this incident is where he started seeing that Sirius wasn't quite as wonderful as he thought. Also, it made James think of other people - Snape and Remus - instead of himself and Sirius. Thank you so much for the review. ~Carole~