i am an 18 year old from bangladesh. i love books and music and food...and hogwarts! i love to write, too, but i'm new in the world of fanfic writing...so...wish me luck...
and one more thing.......i like making new friends!! :-)
(while i was reading, a lot of things came to my mind that i wanted to write...even a pinch of criticism...but after i finished, this is all that came out!)
P.S. i kinda liked it...i guess....!!
when i read the title of this one, i was pretty sure that i'd read it before...then i read the story and now i know that i did. i just didn't remember how much i'd loved it. the story's great...and as i read it right after i finished 'Sincerely, H J P', it was actually like a relief from all the death and 'reality'...
the last paragraph didn't seem really necessary to me, though.
nice one! i really liked it. could be a bit longer though.
awww! tho thweet!! i really, really loved it. wish i cud be as gud as you. the only romantic fic i ever got to write didn't get accepted.:( anyways...can i ask u smthing? how old are u? and which country are u from? nd also smthing else...why don't u write more???
P.S. will u plz check out my fic that did get accepted?
This piece is a seventh year, One-shot concerning Hermione and Draco that will either puzzle you, or intrigue you. I might warn you of slight AU, it depends on your take on this piece. We already know that this couple wouldn't exist in canon anyway, so please bare with. This was my very first HG/DM pairing and I did my best to avoid any...cliche's with this complex couple. And really, let my know your opinions. Criticism, flames, well hopefully not, or kind words are deeply appreciated.
UN-believably amazing! i don't think my review would be this overwhelmed if it weren't for the last paragraph. i wanted to quote a line here to let you know which part i liked best from this paragraph, but each kept getting better from the other. so...i hope you get my point!
it's fics like this that got me into non-cannon ships :D
cool! i really liked ur fic. nice details;-)
It was sooooooooooo sweet! i loved it. especially the part where Hermione thanks her mom.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks. I liked that part too - especially since I am a mom! :) [Have you hugged your mom today?]
that was awesome...good job! especially the poetic parts...loved the "golden red sand" thing. :-)
The story is really beautiful...i loved it. actually i was thinking of writing a story about Myrtle in order to make her smile. now that you've already done it... CONGRATULATIONS!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you agree with me that Myrtle needs to smile :-) Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! I'm glad you liked it.
wow! i mean...WOW!!! it's damn good! brilliant idea and great writing. didn't feel like a 'fanfic' at all. u r really good. :-)
Author's Response: thanks a bunch! One of the nicest reviews I\'ve had in awhile.
Oh...one more thing. i've read a lot of fics on MNFF, and yours is the first one i'm adding as my fav!
Author's Response: thanks! That really means a lot.
rofl rofl rofl!!! it's so cool! loved it. :-D
good one...didn't seem that much funny though...but i enjoyed reading it. and you've got some great ideas! :-)
Author's Response: Well, it was never supposed to be hilarious, and I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway. Thanks for reviewing! At least someone thinks the mad stuff in my head isn't a bad thing ...
so sweeeeet! luv it.
Author's Response: thanks
awwwsome!!! this is so amazingly cool! :-D you really understand all of them very well. the point of view was great. really good idea. *thumbs up*
umm...i don't really know what to say...just that i HAVE to say something...
it's...i dunno...beautiful is the right word, i guess.
"We must have been really happy if the Dementors took away everything I knew about him" - it touches you.
one thing bugged me a little though...if they were about the same age, then they must've been in Hogwarts at around the same time. then, with the marauders' reputation and all, shouldn't she have recognized him?
P.S. on a lighter note...one of this days i'll just sneak into your head and kidnap a couple of you bunnies!
Author's Response: Hmm, that is a good point. I think she did mention that she didn't remember much of Hogwarts, though, so that'll be my excuse! (In reality, you're absolutely right). On an advice-y note, if you want inspiration, I'm not going to say it's easy, but you should take it from everything you see. Also, anything starting with the words "What if ...?" or "I wonder how ...?" For example, "I wonder how Sirius figured out that being innocent would keep him same because that's not actually a happy thought?" and "What if there was a woman who told him so?" Anyway, thanks again for reviewing!
hey...had to write a little more...
i always read all the reviews after writing my own...in one of your responses i saw something about your original fic writing...could it be possible to get access to some of them? coz your writing gives the impression that you are really good at creating new characters...so your originals are bound to be as good as your fanfics.
i forgot to mention something in my first review...in this fic, the minister's words sounded too polite to be spoken to such a brutal murderer(that's what Sirius was to the world)...then again, maybe his tone was more scared than polite...
also...the part in the end where we find out more about Mistry, i.e. her being married and all, halfway through being shocked, i felt like...yeah...of course that's the way it was...
err...sorry for blabbering so much! like i said...i just HAD to write it all.
P.S. loved the name Mistry...the phrase "Serious Mystery" keeps coming to me!
Author's Response: Um, I'm not quite sure what you meant about her being married, and whether it was a good or a bad thing, so I'll just move on to the other stuff. I'd never noticed "Serious Mystery" before but you're right! And I think the minister probably was just scared, and possibly he could tell what Sirius was feeling. No matter what a person's done, love is still love, right? Although mostly he was probably scared. As for the originals ... I'm afraid not. It may sound odd coming from someone who posts internet fanfiction for everybody to see, but I really don't like showing the original stuff to people ... weird, huh?
wow!!! loved it. it's really sweet. but...u kno...hermione's reaction after ron proposed...cudn't it be a bit softer? anyways, the whole idea of the fic was awesome.
beautiful. i can't find words. really. it's so beautiful. i've read the harry potter books and was reduced to a puddle of tears. but among all the fanfictions i've ever read, this is the first one that brought tears to my eyes. i simply loved it. everything about it. i'd write a lot more. i feel like writing a lot more. but if i do, then i'll be writing the same things over and over again. so i think i'll stop here. for one last time...your story is really beautiful. and i love it. :-)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks ever so much! I haven\'t been on the internet in over five days because of high school, so I felt so happy to find this lovely review waiting for me! =]