Summary: Curious as to why Sirius always seemed to harbor a special hate for Snape? The answer is here. Set in the time of the Marauders, sixth year, this is a startling revelation into their animosity. Rated R for offensive language, GA, MOL and (eventual mentioning of a) SSP. SSP means SAME SEX PAIRING. Do not read if you are offended by such things.
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I think you're doing a really great job with this fic, everybody seems to be perfectly in character... honestly, you're doing the best job of keeping everybody in character in the MWPP era out of any fic I've read. Now I have to read the next 2 chapters :D
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you think so! If you are looking for other MWPP fics that are very in character though, I suggest reading Vindictus Viridian's 'In the Eyes of Others' which you can link to through my favorites. Brilliant look at Snape's life from when he goes to Hogwarts until Harry arrives. It will change the way you think about Snape forever...
Wow. You did a spectacular job of writing the fight between James and Sirius... also, I like how this fic has slash, but it's not the entire focus. Too many slash fics are completely centered around the same-sex pairing, but you do a great job of creating an alternate plot. So, good job.
Author's Response: Well, when I write, I try to focus more on the relationship and people interaction in the story than in the action itself, which is why the actual chapter of them in the Shack is so short. I wanted to say what happened before and what happened after. So, in a way, the slash relationship is the focus of the fic, just not in a romantic aspect. Thanks!
Summary: Sirius Black, Marauder, heart throb and good friend, is in his last year at Hogwarts. Follow his journey through friendship, pranks and that special someone. Chapter Thirty One is here at last! I realise I have left this for nearly 3 years, but I am finally back! I am very grateful to the readers who have stuck by me during my extended hiatus. Thanks a lot guys :)
First of all, I've only read up to chapter 2 so far so if anything has changed in the remaining chapters, sorry... but I'm leaving the review here. Yeah. So....
I like your fic so far, but everything seems too... fast-paced? You need to slow things down, give it more meat. What I think you need is a beta to bounce ideas off of (if you haven't got one already).
James and Sirius are supposed to be the absolute BEST of friends, always joking around, etc. Think Fred and George... try to instill some of that in them.
Author's Response: Someone else has said this to me as well and no I haven't got a beta but I did try to get one after I posted chapter one and no one was interested. Unfortunately, I have finished the fic and I do tend to write whatever comes into my head so I'm afraid that may show through. If you could read a bit further and let me know if you think it's still too fast I'd be really grateful :)
First of all, I've only read up to chapter 2 so far so if anything has changed in the remaining chapters, sorry... but I'm leaving the review here. Yeah. So.... I like your fic so far, but everything seems too... fast-paced? You need to slow things down, give it more meat. What I think you need is a beta to bounce ideas off of (if you haven't got one already). James and Sirius are supposed to be the absolute BEST of friends, always joking around, etc. Think Fred and George... try to instill some of that in them.
okay, so I've finally read up to here... and I like it. I mean, there is room for improvement, I think, the plot still needs to be buffed up just a bit, but you did a great job through the whole thing.
Author's Response: Thanks :) I didn't expect the plot to be perfect there are probably holes in it but I hope you keep reading to tell me what's going wrong and such like.
Summary: The young ladies of 5th-year Potions are called out for a 'special class,' leaving the boys without their genteel influence. That calls for a special lesson.
This is a Book 5, Harry/Draco short fic that is not meant for younger or saner readers.
ahahahahahahahaha, I already love it, hope the next chapter is up soon :P
Author's Response: It\'s in line...but I have a feeling I\'ll have to tone it down before they\'ll okay it. ;p
The things they carried were not always visible, or tangible. They were not always pocket-sized reminders or magical objects or wands or potions. They were not always spoken of.
But they were always there.
This was really well done, and incredibly insightful... I liked it a lot. The image of Arthur throwing out his plugs really hit me, actually.