Name: Cat or Kitty
favorite HP character: Draco
favorite HP book: OTP
house i would be in: Slytherin (naturally)
favorite color: silver (has nothing to do with slytherin colors)
favorite word: masticate . . . look it up. use it. think of me.
i'm a very very sarcastic person. everyone thinks i'm shy and nice. ha. lol. no, i guess i'm nice on the outside, only cuz i know that if i was mean i would never get anything i want. :P
i'm also quite nerdy. i admit it. i'm more of a closet nerd. i'm also a closet fanfiction writer. so shhhhhh!! lol.
oh, and i permit you to send me an im through aim, or add me on myspace (myspace/dramacat). lol. actually, please do! just tell me before you add me on myspace so i know it's not some random person. lol. if you im me just say "hey Cat, this is ____ from mnff" or sumthing. lol. hope to talk to you soon!!
very interesting! i like it! Is Billius Ron's actual middle name from the books? or did you make it up?
Your origional character's names are creative. they sound very . . . magical, i gues i can say. lol.
there was one thing i didn't like though: the i pod thing. i think dumbledore or the ministry would have put more advanced spells on hogwarts so that a student could'nt get around them. but, i totally see where you're going with that part. lol.
I also loved the diary entry. it is exactly like somehing i would write! :P
keep it up!! on to the next chapter . . . .
Author's Response: Yes, Billius is his acutal name. It\'s after one of his uncles that did something important, tho i can\'t remember what. All the names of my OC\'s are all Scottish, Irish, and English (my three ancestries) and I thought that they sounded really pretty. The I-pod\'s gonna play in a little more later on, I just did wanna have to go and think up songs and stuff for the balls, so I figured, why not just make her a bit special and cool like. I haven\'t really been keeping up with the diary that much, I\'d actually forgotten about it a little bit (I was having grad plans for other things, lol). But I will try to bring it back every few parts, we\'re just gonna assume that she writes in it all the time. glad you like!
the Seeing thing seems almost a Mary- Sue quality. But, not quite. You covered the Mary- Sueness with the fact that she's still learning and she doesn't even want the power. if she went around flaunting her powers, then it would be Mary- Sue. lol. great job so far!!!
Author's Response: yeah, she definatly doesn\'t want them. she will eventually get the hang of them and then some interesting things will happen. but she never really knows exactly what\'s going to happen, just little snipts of things, and the feelings.