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03/04/06




I am no longer an active member/moderator of MNFF. I will pop up now and then since I do plan to finish DTB but as far as new stories go, this is it for me. Thank you.


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Closer Than I Ever Imagined by 3secondfish

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 248 Reviews
Summary: After the Voldemort's defeat in the second war, former Death eaters are still at large. The Ministry of Magic has begun cross-training between departments to make up the shortfall of qualified wizards. Draco and Hermione are involved in a training accident and end up closer than they ever imagined.
The last chapter has been appended. I'm *done*.
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/25/06 Title: Chapter 14: Gate-Crasher

Awwww...how cute



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/25/06 Title: Chapter 6: Slithering

lmao.
pure genius.
that's all I have to say.



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/25/06 Title: Chapter 9: Tales of the Darkness

Esmeralda is definitely fun to read. lol.
I love your story btw.



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/25/06 Title: Chapter 10: Letters From Old Friends

lmao
Crookshanks using the toilet or more like flushing?
Hermione teaching the runespoor to write?! wtf?
Where you do you come up with this stuff?



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/25/06 Title: Chapter 11: Hissing

what a smart animal you have there! lol.
I'm so glad to finally read a story where Harry didn't end up being an Auror after the war...so cliche. Kind of weird that he and Hermione aren't friends anymore...but it happens. At least he and Draco appear to be old chums. Love your story.



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/25/06 Title: Chapter 12: Damn Potter

lol...
damn Potter.



It's Witchcraft by Nicole_Riddle

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 667 Reviews
Summary: When Draco Malfoy finds himself falling for the Gryffindor know-it-all, he convinces himself that it’s merely witchcraft. But when they both finally come to terms with the truth, nothing can stop them from being together. This is a tale of forbidden love and dangerous passion weaved into the Half-Blood Prince, where circumstances beyond their control might tear Draco and Hermione apart forever… Check out the long awaited sequal Fatum Amoris...The Fate of Love about Medea Malfoy and Patrick Potter now appearing in the other pairings section.






Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 1: With One Look

This is based on Sixth year right? I like it already. =]



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 2: Confrontation

lol....funny...you're making Draco so annoying and amusing to watch.



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 3: It's Witchcraft!

I don't know...it's odd that all of a sudden Malfoy develops an infatuation with Hermione. lol.



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 4: Secrets

"Did you only ask me here so you could snog me?”
The look that came to his pale face was absolutely comical. “Isn’t that what we’re supposed to do?”

That quote up there was just comedy. You make Malfoy sound like such a typical 16 year old male...who obviously doesn't what to do when he's suffering from puppy love



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 5: Happy Christmas

this is the biggest oxymoron I've ever read: "a successful, secret relationship with Hermione" lol.
You have such a cute story here...love it



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 6: Together

Awww...how sweet



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 7: Reality

Awww how sad...
It's so cute how you made them each other's "first" and so innocent with their love...
It's also sad that she found out he's a death eater



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 12: Letters

Ok here's my thoughts...
I kind of have a hard time believe that Harry and Ron would EVER stop talking to Hermione. Gryffindors don't hold grudges like that...I could understand the hotheaded Weasleys but Harry?!
On the other hand it does seem probable...
I did notice that Hermione feels bitter/resentful about her friendship with Harry and Ron in this quote: "Their hero who would have died many times over was it not for me, she thought." Or perhaps she felt resentful that her secret relationship with Malfoy caused the drift. But in all honesty you can't help who you love.

On another note -- I don't take Malfoy for the perseverant type but he is a Slytherin and they are loyal so who knows...as for the letter writing...very cute touch. Totally believable as long as he wasn't stalking her to the point of obsession which it does appear he did for the next five years...
One question...how was he tormented? Was he bullied by the other students?



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 13: A Date

oh.
how sad.
Now that I've read this I can see why he only wrote letters
It's so sad how she tormented him over and over again by giving him hope of her love until she broke him and saw him at his weakest moment.
you truly are an incredible writer...



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 15: Awake

you do a good job of making him sound pathetic. lol.



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/15/06 Title: Chapter 18: Hiring

awww so cute!
can't wait to read the sequel



Silver-grey meeting chocolate brown by tetris

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 69 Reviews
Summary: Just a little poem I wrote for fun..... :) Please read and review! ^ ^,
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/16/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

cute...

Author's Response: hihi thanks ;D



The Tricks of Fate by Silversen

Rated:57 Reviews
Summary: As the wizarding world is overrun by the Dark Lord’s power, Hermione is taken captive. Draco immerses himself more and more in the Dark Arts, desperately hoping no one will find out about a decision that changed his life forever. What happens when the most unlikely person discovers the truth? Who will she tell? What will Draco offer for her to keep it a secret?

excerpt:

Hermione reached up almost involuntarily and traced the silver band branded on Draco’s arm.

“That’s Dumbledore’s mark,” she said softly.


Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Symbols

“Just a moment, Mr. Malfoy, my gargoyle has caught fire.” His eyes were twinkling.


This is so like Dumbledore to say. That's great! I love your characterization of the old Wizard, himself.

I'm intrigued by that silver band on Draco's arm. It seems that you began the story in the future, and then flashbacked into the past. Very good job of doing that. I know that I have a hard time doing transitions, but you're quite talented at them. Very good.

Your first chapter is so action packed, I can just image the rest of the story. I can't wait to read the other chapters.

Great job!
~mugglemathdork/Knight of the Turnip Table



The Life and Times of Harry Potter by Cassie Payne

Rated: Professors • 154 Reviews
Summary: After Harry's retirement party, he and Ginny remember their long and happy life together, including Bill and Fleur's wedding, Harry and Ginny's first kiss, and a lot of other firsts, too! (Rated cautiously for adult themes and mild language in later chapters.)
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 05/27/07 Title: Chapter 8: A Good Pillow Fight

First, I love your story! I've read it a couple of times since my time on MNFF (about a year) and when I did ship Harry/Ginny it was absolutely one of my most favorites ones to read. I never reviewed before this time, though.

Now that I can't stand Harry/Ginny or Ron/Hermione (you've got fanfiction to thank for that,) I can honestly say that this story still is one of my most favorites. And that is saying something - trust me! (Avid Dramione shipper >.>)
No, you can't convert me back - but this story still makes me *squee*

As for the story itself, and more specifically this chapter, I have to give you props for your superb characterization of Harry and Ginny, not only as separate characters but together as a couple.

I loved how you wrote humour into a non-humours situation; and the frustration from both sides was evident and clear.

It was brilliant the way you wrote Ginny's nervousness and Harry's enthusiasm; their first fight as a married couple is quite hilarious yet heart-breaking at the same time.

You did a great job! It was well-written, great characterization, and just wonderful!
Give yourself a pat on the back!

~Ritta/mgle_teacher/mugglemathdork