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03/04/06




I am no longer an active member/moderator of MNFF. I will pop up now and then since I do plan to finish DTB but as far as new stories go, this is it for me. Thank you.


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All's Well That Ends Well? by Shock

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 529 Reviews
Summary: James and Lily-their seventh year. We all know what happens in the end, but what about the beginning? In their last year at Hogwarts, mysteries unravel, friends are betrayed, and, of course, couples destined to be fall in love.

Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/22/06 Title: Chapter 19: Prongs, Thoughts, and McGonagall: Part II: Endymion Lucent.

omg...the question is rhetorical right?!
Sirius hands down!

Author's Response: ANOTHER pro-Sirius fan! Dear lord, he is the popular one isn\'t he?! lol



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/07/06 Title: Chapter 16: Reunion

i love your story! you really know how to keep your reader well umm...reading!! lol. I love all the plot development and twists. It builds up a lot of suspense, drama, and excitement into the story. I know you're going somehwere with Remus and Anne right?! They have to get together at some point...otherwise you'll have al ot of disappointed readers. lol. j/k. And what's this Sirius and Alice thing that is evolving?!

Author's Response: he he he...Anne and Remus...hmmm... and Alice and Sirius. Well, after the next two chapters, Anne is going to have some more focus and that's all I can say for now. And Alice IS with Frank, as seen in chapter 2, but... well, keep reading to find out!



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/06/06 Title: Chapter 6: Tutors and Scammers

ohh...very good plot development/twist. i loved it! sneaky sneaky sneaky...

Author's Response: heheheheh! I'm glad you liked it! Sneaky is good, very good!



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/06/06 Title: Chapter 7: The Startings of the S.M.S.O.B.

hmm..by the looks of your story. it appears you are foreshadowing another happy couple? whichI want to take a guess at: Master Wu and Moony! Tell me I'm wrong!

Author's Response: Hmmm... I don't know... hee hee



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/06/06 Title: Chapter 9: Shadows

oh wow... for a minute or two I thought that they voices belonged to Sirius and Alice...but now I'm in suspense...you've got my attention and aren't letting go any time soon. As for the voices...I believe they must be nymphs/elves, some sort of magical creature that lives in the Forbidden Forest

Author's Response: I'm so glad that I tricked so many people into thinking the voices were the SMSOB! Well, read on to see if your hypothesis is correct!



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/07/06 Title: Chapter 17: Confusion

I thought I'd let you know taht I've added your story to my favorites! lol. Good intense plot. I can see the foreshadowing you are doing. It's wonderful!!! And as I read from the other reviews and comments you left...Anne apparenlty used dark magic right?! Was she forced to make one of those pacts in which if you don't complete your side of it you die?! I am assuming that her pact would consist of not saying that Bellatrix practiced dark magic. Hmm... Well we'll see how you develop the story! Update soon. You're doing an awesome job!

Author's Response: Yay for foreshadowing! As for the whole Unbreakable Vow with Anne...well, all that I'm willing to say is that I try to be as original as possible! I've put A LOT of hints here and there in the chapters so that people can speculate, but...well, keep reading and find out!! he he he



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/07/06 Title: Chapter 18: Prongs, Thoughts, and McGonagall: Part I.

ok ok.... again! wonderful! i love the fluff throughout your story. lol. man i wish i could write like you do...but since I can't I rejoice in reading yours. I hope the next chapter comes out soon. I can hardly wait! Oh...and I see now that James and Lily didn't actually get together after the Forest incident...but they're hanging out and being friends now?! lol. Cool! Love it! Oh and as a teacher...I love all the vocabulary you use...it really does enrich the story! Props!

Author's Response: Yay for lexicon! All this vocab. is actually a result of my SAT-prep school. So anyone in the states that is going to take their SATs, reading my story will help a lot! Thank you for all of your wonderful reviews mgle_teacher! I luv them all! Next chapter is in the queue! It's been six days since it's been in there. It's probably rotting and growing mold by the time the mods actually get to it *sigh*



Events Foretold by deeh

Rated:22 Reviews
Summary: One-shot: A thousand years into the future and still the story of their love lives on. The mere fairytale of a love that had been found and renowned throughout the ages between a couple that defied all reason. But is it true?
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Events Foretold

beautiful.



A Thousand Words by annie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 1741 Reviews
Summary: For the rest of the Ministry, the interdepartmental challenge was merely a failed attempt to restore trust between workers. But for Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger, it was the catalyst for an unexpected relationship built on passionate letters, concealed identities, and secret meetings Ė and the beginning of an end that neither of them could ever have imagined possible, not even in their wildest dreams.

Post-war. Based somewhat on the story of the Phantom of the Opera. Also contains R/Hr, so don't read if you can't stomach that ship.

Status: Complete. Thanks for reading, everyone!
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 09/14/06 Title: Chapter 19: Nothing But a Man

You're doing a really good job w/this. I love your story. =]
Thirty five chapters sounds exciting...can't wait to keepon reading...as you develop this fanfic relationship.
=]



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 07/14/06 Title: Chapter 13: Backwards Glances

I like how you're building up the story here.
You're obviously making them dependent on each other for communication or to rant about their daily lives. I like it.
I don't remember if I've commented before but great job!



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 27: The Prison of His Mind

Wow! That was rather intriguing!



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Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 05/04/06 Title: None

Awwww.how cute...a surprise party...which I'm assuming was the idea of Draco Malfoy. He's kind of ooc but it's all right! lol.



Casualties of Heart by Perselus

Rated: Professors • 210 Reviews
Summary: A passion one can't control, an addictive affair... to what lengths desire and love can take a person?
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 08/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

How sneaky!
I love storie with twists like this...and so very well written!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)



Promises to Keep by Gemmika

Rated: Professors • 677 Reviews
Summary: It's been six years since Harry and Ginny have come face to face. Different career oprions led them in different paths than they had hoped but now at the wedding of Ron and Hermione they are forced back together. Will their fragile love survive the troubles that haunt their pasts? Rated "R" for Sexual scenes, Teen Pregnancy and Spousal Abuse in this story.
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/31/06 Title: Chapter 6: Reconnecting

Love your story! Can't wait until you update again. I'm finding a lot of stories where Ginny and Harry have a "love" child and the child is kept a secret from Harry...but yours is by far one of the better ones.



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home

One question...how come here in this chapter you write from Ron's POV regarding Ginny and Harry (right at the beginning) and mention a "Padma" as having pulled him away from his relationship with friends? But then Ron is later getting married to Hermione. What gives? Or were you talking about Harry and "Padma" or maybe I didn't read it right. lol.



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/31/06 Title: Chapter 3: "it's like dancing..."

=] maybe I'm a retard but...this is the second time I'm reading this story...and I'm confused by the timeline....is this supposed to take place the summer before Ginny's 7th year? So that means that Harry already defeated Voldemort and what not right? lol. It's sad really...I'm a math teacher but can't follow a story. lol.



Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 03/31/06 Title: Chapter 5: Confessions

Yo...me again! lol. Sorry...but may I suggest something? Maybe you already have it planned out so never mind me...or just ignore this completely....but I know I would love to hear Ron and Hermione's love story in regards to this one here... give us snippets of their romance or write a story about them? I don't know...either way. I love your story!!!



A Grandmother's Tale by Magical Maeve

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 40 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: A little character exploration. How did Neville's Gran take the news of her son's torture and what does she really think of her grandson?
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 07/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Grandmother's Tale

Wow. I almost cried at the end.
I really liked the originality put into this story, Jan.
For example: filipendula sponge cake, snapdragon scones, sugarsnap thins, golden goose eggs, and herb farms to name a few are creative names. I'm not even going to pretend to know anything about cooking but the cookies/cake sound believeable to me.
Your descriptions were great, I almost felt like I was there having tea, and watching Neville at his cot. It was so well put together. And it was great to address the feelings of Neville's grandma regarding Neville and his parents.
I think that you have her persona down. Like I said, I almost felt like an old grandmotherly type woman was telling me the story, and I was sitting there like a dork, wide eyed and staring.
I have to say it:
You have talent!

Courtesy of the Naughty Penguin Society

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. This was one of those stories that wrote itself. Augusta popped into my head and wouldn\'t leave until I wrote the story.



Taints and Stains by musiclily88

Rated: Professors • 16 Reviews
Summary: Just because Pansy is named after a flower and wears pink does not mean she is a simpering twit. She was, after all, sorted into Slytherin. Sheís always been stronger than she looks. Draco may be spoiled and rich, but heís also volatile and cruel. He may hide behind his image, but he has his image for a reason. This is story of revenge. Third and last chapter in queue.
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 06/13/07 Title: Chapter 2: Draco's Reciprocation

Hello!
I read all three chapters and I must say that the beginning is quite disturbing what with Pansy trying to obliterate Draco from the face of the universe. And chapter 2 was quite interesting - I'll go ahead and say that I liked the ending, but it felt rushed at the same time.

The resolution could have been extended out and elaborated upon. I had no idea why a newspaper article would create such reactions from Draco or Pansy. Even though, you did a good job at humanizing them in the end. They're so wrapped in revenge, anger, and hate that they're like monsters - Death Eaters in their own accord.

However, like I stated before, I felt you could have elaborated upon this story and really delved into the psyche of each character more. Nonetheless, great job!

As for this chapter, I rather liked it the best. I was amused at the gory relationship you paint of this most infamous Slytherin couple since Rodolphus/Bellatrix and Lucius/Narcissa.

This paragraph in particular really caught my attention:
They lied when the other annoyed them. They lied to be cruel. They lied to inflict damage. They lied to save themselves. They lied to give way to their own pleasure. They lied to gain power. With each lie, they would silently tense and loosen their muscles to keep from attacking something, each sensing the otherís alleged ignorance. They were gifted liars, to the point where Pansy thought Draco was a blithering dolt and Draco assumed Pansy was a simpering twit.

You really capture the personalities that JKR seems to have written into them but also put in a flare of your own. I like how you have them banter back and forth so evilly.

This line is pure genius:
The banter continued because Draco and Pansy not only wanted to submit the other to physical pain, they also wanted to torture the spirit of the other.


I think you did a splendid job or not falling into a cliche romance of Draco/Pansy, not that you were going for one, and did them justice as individuals and as a couple. Kudos, my fellow author. XD

~Ritta/mugglemathdork/mgle_teacher



Love Is Pain by PhoenixCGandAC

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 95 Reviews
Summary: ONE SHOT - Love is a delicate thing not to be meddled with. When it is, hearts end up torn, ripped apart and abandoned. Draco Malfoy and Hermione Granger share a love indescribable. Thatís why it was destined to end. And it ended too soon. For both of them.
"Hermione, I love you and I would do anything for you," Draco whispered.

"Then do me a favor. Don't break my heart. You've already shattered it beyond anyone's repair but your own. I need you to stay and fix it for me. I need you. How am I going to survive without you there with me?" Hermione sobbed.

NOTE: The suicide warning on this story is only for a mention of an attempted suicide. There is quite a bit of fluff and emotion included so you are forewarned.
Reviewer: mgle_teacher Signed
Date: 04/25/06 Title: Chapter 1: Love is Pain

oh how sad...I almost cried.

Author's Response: I know, it is sad. I cried while writing it, but do not dismay! Check out the sequal. More angsty I\'d say than this one but centered around our wonderful pairing: Draco and Hermione!