I am no longer an active member/moderator of MNFF. I will pop up now and then since I do plan to finish DTB but as far as new stories go, this is it for me. Thank you.
omg! wonderful!!!! I haven't commented on your other chapters because I was so engrossed in the story. I discovered it only yesterday and can't seem to stop reading it. It's just great...the way Sirius is confused about what love is, I really do hope that you keep Elsie in Sirius' life... You're doing such a great job. I cannot wait until the next chapter!
omg...sorry...i mispelled elise...lol.
lmao. great story! i love how you brought it all back to Harry and his friends. It was quite amusing at the end to re-read the stuff they did in the other books and I had forgotten. lol. Sirius would be proud I assume! lol. And as a teacher myself...I must say that we do keep stuff like that around as a reminder of our most "favorite" students of years past! Kudos!
You made me cry! How could you?!
The wait was worth it, dear!
I love your story.
I really like your story. It's well written and has a good mix of humor, friendships, mystery, love, romance, hate, drama, etc. Your characterization of the four time travelers is well done. I was skeptical at first about Draco being their buddy now but I like how you write him as part of the group as well as being outside the group. I have an uncanny feeling (from your reading) that you're going for a Draco/Hermoine ship. =] But I guess I'll wait and see what happens. Kudos and good luck with school and writing.
I like how you describe the Harry of the future...sounds very handsome. lol.
I knew it! I love Draco and Hermione. And you're doing such a great job with your entire story...omg! It was so worth the long wait for you to update. This was my far the most exciting chapter.
Awww...I felt so bad for Ron!
But yay for Draco and Hermione!!!
I really liked your story, and the overall characterization of Draco and Hermione as a couple.
I was particularly thrilled to see Draco characterized as something more than cruel. Giving him the concerned, and caring single father image worked splendidly for this review.
I also liked how you kept us all thrilled and at bay regarding the owl correspondence.
My only pet peeve is that you could have delved much deeper into their shared background on helping each other raise Louisa. You did a good job, though, on showing how Draco eventually got over his prejudices - especially with a half-blood daughter.
Overall, well written and wonderful!
how disgustingly cute! i loved it.
well...I must say...I find this story quite hilarious and sad at the same time. You've done a wonderful job of capturing the fears and mentality of young children...but also maintaining Harry's personality all his own...and showing his vulnerability...great!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am so glad you enjoyed it and hope you might consider the sequel too. Thank you again.
You can't leave us at this cliffie!
I love your story so much, I practically -squeed- with excitement when I got the update. >.>
Seriously. I can't wait until you update again!XD
Ok..well I don't believe I've reviewed for your story yet. BUT I think it's really cute. Perhaps cute isn't what you're going for...but it is. You're not rushing their love at all, they're still that hatred there...but at least you've managed to make them civil towards each other and even developed a budding friendship there. I love it. Like I said...cute...and not so much fluff that it drains the senses.
The bathroom scene at the beginning was just hilarious! I was cracking up so hard I couldn't stop.
The mood ring is so funny. I love Jinx. It's a totally weird character to put in...but it works for the commentary what can I say.
The Valentines' Day getting drunk was funny. Draco was sure taking care of her...in a sweet kind of way.
This last chapter is great. I love the fact that you left us in a cliffhanger where Draco is hellbent on keeping Hermione safe from harm once they fell from the broom. Love it! I cant wait until you update again.
Author's Response: Hello first-time reviewer! Thanks for taking the time to review TUP. Nah, cute’s perfectly fine. I\'m perfectly all right with TUP being cute. Plus, you kinda did justify why you called it cute, so I\'m cool. And yup, you\'re right, I\'m not looking to rush into things with the two, but I do want things to develop gradually. “cute...and not so much fluff that it drains the senses.”----> Hahaha, for some reason, I lov e the way you put that. The bathroom scene is one of my favourites too. I loved writing it because it was really fun. Jinx too was a character I created because I personally would have thought it lovely if I had a mood ring who could talk. I know she’s kinda weird, and a pain sometimes, but I do love her. Valentine’s Day was another event that was a ball to write. I wanted to show a kinda sweet reluctance (if that makes ANY sense at all) on the part of Draco and I do that was portrayed. And yes, the last chapter, with the evil cliffhanger. I\'m sooo glad you liked the fact that I left it with a cliffhanger, because I know it was kinda evil. So yay for that! I\'m back from exams, so I will update soon. Thank you for the wonderful review as well, mgle_teahcer! =D
Omg! I love you! >.>
And your story too, of course! Yay! You had them unconsciously planning out their futures. That's so...cute! Awww!
I can't wait until your next chapter. You've done such a good job of building up their "love"
Omg! I just love your story so much! I seriously thought it was Dumbledore who had saved or cushioned them but the Love Knot was a much better twist.
Once again, I love how you're making Draco and Hermione fall in love ever so slowly it's almost disgusting. lol.
I must give you kudos on how you're taking them through phases of loathing each other, dealing with each other, being civil with each other, and to a mutual understanding...I'm assuming you're moving towards friendship next and then crushes and love?! I don't know but whatever you do...I'm sure it'll be great.
Update soon or I'll be one of those torch bearers outside your home! lol.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Hahaha, yes I was pretty certain that most of you guys out there would have thought it to be Dumbledore who saved them. But I thought why not surprise you guys a little? ;)
Lol… I love the way you said “I love how you\'re making Draco and Hermione fall in love ever so slowly it\'s almost disgusting.” ---> it sooo funny!/
Yes, you\'re right on me wanting to take their relationship into different phases for sure. But things are going to speed up now I would think. Because another 30 chapters are just not viable! Haah…
*gulp* I\'m working on the next chapter, so I’ll try to update as soon as I can!
I LOVE your story!
I can't wait for the next chapter. It's so worth the wait of a couple of weeks/months for this. It's so well-written. I love all the 'cute' parts between Draco and Hermione.
The scene with the portraits and them being alone was so sweet. XD
Keep writing - I look forward to it.
omg...I just had a thought pop into my head...I've read this story once, and re-read several chapters but I just thought...they have a love knot that is tied between them on their wrists...so...how does that whole dressing and undressing deal work?! wouldn't the lvoe knot get in the way?
Author's Response: Hahaha… you have no idea how many times I\'ve had this question posed to me. Maybe it’s about time I write a little paragraph about it in one of my chapters. The Love-Knot passes through inanimate objects like clothes, and that is why things like scissors won’t have an effect on it. So , the Love-Knot will not pose a hindrance to when the two change their clothes.
lol. You're going to get Lily expelled.
That was quite intriguing. And who is this new guy? Is he going to be Anne's new love interest? I'm quite intrigued.
Author's Response: Well, Endymion is.... a special person, obviously! lol It took so long to give him the proper name and looks and character! I hope everyone likes his name because I certainly do.