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Real name: Sarah Clooney
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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
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12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: SesJay Signed
Date: 11/09/04 Title: None

I want to find out what Fred and George do next! One tiny thing a britpick. Letterboxes don't hold anything. They're slots in our front doors nothing like the mail boxes you have. No need to put on trainers and go out side. The post normally falls to the carpet or mat inside the house.

Author's Response: thanks for the info, i honestly didn't know that. i knew about letter slots, but i thought that they might have boxes too, hmm? oh well, i appreciate the review!

 

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Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: SesJay Signed
Date: 01/30/05 Title: None

I nearly stopped reading after the second sentence. Downtown London! Apartment block, saying second story but really meaning first floor. Sorry I'll take my Britpicking hat off now. Apart from that I enjoyed it, I liked the pace and want to find out what happens next

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