Summary: A continuation of "The Mystery Letter", Harry's summer presses forward with a few more surprise guests (although some unwanted), and his relationship with Ginny begins to grow.
Rated "R" for later chapters, but it's all innocent at the beginning... haha, famous last words.
I can't stress enough that you might want to read "The Mystery Letter" before continuing on to this fic. You should be able to follow without it- but it will certainly clear up some things in the process. Thanks for reading!!
boy you have a handle on characterization! Especially for Dumbledore!!
woo hoo!!! awesome awesome story... cant wait to read the sequal. Fantastic Writing! love it!
loved the Mrs. Weasly part. I wondered if she was going to be med or if she was going to just join in. Good choice ;o)
i do have to say that that was an odd owl scheme. I figured Hermione would do a lot better then that... i mean 16 owls are great and all, but i figured she would be perfect in almost everything. I dont know, perhaps im just hung up on conon way to much. I really lik eht estory though. Cant wait to read on!!
that was neat! The part about Harry calling Mrs. Weasley "mum" especially had me smilling! Well done
now that was really cool! Madame Amanda was a great character and i love the little shop... It reminds me of "Needful Things" the shop in one of Stepen Kings famous novels (Only this one is good, and not bad like that one)
awww that was so cute!!!! So what is the deal with Harry and knowing all this stuff... to many people are commenting on it... what new and secret power does Harry have now?
Summary: Ron and Hermione sort out their feelings after Ron kisses Hermione during a ball and she leaves. R/Hr with hints of H/G. One-shot.
yay very cute :o)
Summary: *Last Chapter up!!! It's been awesome everyone!!! Over 4000 reads and 300 reviews!!! You guys are amazing!!!* It is summer before sixth year and everyone has gotten together to celebrate Harry's Birthday when something goes terribly wrong for Ron and Hermione. How will everyone handle this terrible event and how will everything turn out?! *~*this fic is written pre HBP (see a/n on my pro for more info)*~*
looks good so far! I like the thoughts of each back and fourth.
Author's Response: good good =)
cant a guy miss his pillow! wow i laughed out loud at that one. I could just see ron saying something like that as well
Great story so far. Can't wait to read on.
Author's Response: read on! read on! lol =)
wow, this is getting interesting... I'm intreagued to find out what this stuff is...
Author's Response: intreagued aye? i like that =)
the clothes! (i hope i didnt just spoil something!)
Author's Response: lol =)
im enjoying this story very much
Author's Response: im glad =D
for crying out loud....(hehe)
Author's Response: ;oP
oh, thats not what i though it was... oh well...
Author's Response: lol, i like it better when i can\'t guess =oP
that was interesting
Author's Response: lol
I love when Dumbledore is included in stories!
Author's Response: u can\'t have a harry potter story w/o dumbles! =)
i saw write more, but not about what she saw. I dont want to see anyone else die...but thats just my oppinion
Author's Response: yeah i dont wanna see anyone else die either but unfortunately it has to happen thanks for taking the time to review all the chapters, its really awesome of you! =)
Summary: It's done! Thank you everyone who has helped. Keep reading and writing! Ron and Hermione are starting their sixth year, but something just doesn't seem right between them. Sure, they are still fighting like mad and some accidents happen between the two that may trigger something in their brain about each other, but....well....I don't want to give away the story! Read and Review please!
i believe the first chapter was your strongest. It seemed the most thought out. Besides a few awkward passages here and thee, the story was overall enjoyable to read. Parts jumped around a bit here and there. This is a good first. I think you will grow into a great fic writer with a bit more practice. Best of luck!