Summary: Post Hogwarts: Ron and Harry are sent to America for Auror training. Ron spends his last night in England with Hermione, and after returning two years later, he finds Hermione with a fifteen-month-old baby ...
oh good lord cliffie!
i love it
oooh cliffe! ;o)
it is beautiful... but so fast. I dont know about this one. Ron changes hands so fast, whether or not he has been secretely yearning for Hermione or not. I dunno.. (its not lkike i could think of a better way to write it either! This was very challenging.
Wonderful wonderful story. You definitely deserve the award. Ill be honest, i was sceptical at the beginning. I actually read the first chapter and stopped. I didnt like the whole pregnancy thing. I know, im a stoog, i shouldn't have judged the entier story on the first chapter... but it kind of turned me off. When i saw that you got top romance, i knew i hhad to go back and read the entier thing. I do feel really bad about prejudging you.
This really is wonderfully written! There were certain part (which i cant remember right now ;o) that just stood out. I said to myself "wow, that was written perfectly! I could think of no better way to say that!" And there were parts that were so characteristic of the characters that i almost though i was reading JK again.
Again, wonderful job! This is definitely going in my favorites for all to read. Thank you again for sharing your talents with us and i hope to read your writing again soon!
Summary: Harry comes back from serving detention with Ron and finds Ginny and Dean in a rather compromising position. A strange and confusing set of new feelings erupts... like wanting to punch Dean Thomas senseless. But what's confusing Harry most of all is that Ginny no longer seems to be just Ron's little sister... she's a beautiful girl, standing right under his nose-- exactly where he hadn't been looking.
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hey that was great. I love the end when Ginny comes back. I felt like i was watching a movie in my brain. I saw the whole scene unrafle before my eyes. You have a fantastic way of decescribing exactly what happens to both of them. Its great. Cant wait to read on!
well i think that was really great. I thought Ron was a bit over the top at first, but i grew to really like it as the conversation continued. Def a stressful, but fun chapter to read!
great. im bummed that nothing came out of harry taking her trunk upstairs though. I liked how harry tried to think of other things though!
i love this so much!!!
that was downright brilliant! The way Ginny was able to take on oll her brothers and succeed, and then be completely stopped my her mother was so realistic, so completey characteristic of the Ginny i can picture, its amazing! This is one of the best fics i have ever read!!!!
this just keeps getting better and better, honestly
well i havent given up on you at all. I think this story is fantastic. I cant wait to continue. Best of luck on exams!
fantastic! I absolutely love the way this story is going. I love how you are moving as slow as you are. Everyone likes to see them get together, but the longer it takes the better he anticipation. Very enjoyable so far! Cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: :) Thanks for reading and reveiwing, Adelfore Flamell!
i was sacared at what you first wrote, but it wasnt that bad. It might not have been fluffy, but it was beautiful nonetheless. I might have liked it even more then the others.
Author's Response: Oh, yes it was. It was terrible. Last night I went and looked back at the first chapter and couldn\'t even finish it, I was cringing so badly. Thanks for reading and reviewing, though!
very nice. But boy do i dislike malfoy! keep it up!
Author's Response: So do a lot of people. ;)
Summary: A continuation of "The Mystery Letter", Harry's summer presses forward with a few more surprise guests (although some unwanted), and his relationship with Ginny begins to grow.
Rated "R" for later chapters, but it's all innocent at the beginning... haha, famous last words.
I can't stress enough that you might want to read "The Mystery Letter" before continuing on to this fic. You should be able to follow without it- but it will certainly clear up some things in the process. Thanks for reading!!
wow! That was a twist! Awesome... cant wait to see what that was about
whew hoooweee! wow that was somwthing... that opens up a whole new perspective on all this. turning into a really really awesome fic... one of the best infact!
wow that was deep! this just keeps getting better
oh holy crap tha was amazing... I have been waiting for SOO LONG for someone to come along and break through Snape... I LOVE IT!!! And to top it all off... getting Harry a Phoenix... well thats just insane. Brilliant brilliant!!!! cant wait to see who happens with them in school now!