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Avenged Sevenfold by SecretKeeper
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 363]

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The innocence Ive lost
The blood it's cost
Leaves unhealed scars within.
But I will not abate,
I will employ the hate
That has been planted deep inside.
I will not falter
Valor will not tire,
And I will survive
This trial by fire.


Many things are different now. Potions class is the least of the trio's worries. Battling dragons would be a welcome alternative to what it is they're attempting to battle now. The Order of the Phoenix is hallow without its leading member. And when someone close to Harry is stolen, Dumbledore's rhetoric of love, hope, and faith is challenged. Harry's strength and resolve are pushed to their limits. Loyalties are tested and new leaders emerge while Harry and Hermione struggle to balance new emotions and uncharted territory. Yet while this time after sixth year proves to be drastically unlike anything Harry's ever experienced, some truths remain, and some affections stand solid.

A novel-type story that explores the engimas of Snape, Horcruxes, war, and above all, the puzzle of love. HBP compliant. HHr.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 63389 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
11/29/05 Updated: 04/16/07


Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 12: Inhale

*sigh* and the pain gets ever more burdensome... Boy this fic has a way of knocking your breath away... all the time! its so well done.

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 13: And Embers Rise

See i disagree with the flamers. I think the decision to have Hermione kiss Ron was a good idea if not expected. I knew, based on how closely you chose to stay with cannon, that something was bound to happen between R and Hr. It wouldnt have made sence if she just said "oh and btw, I love Harry now." What kind of plot would that have been??
As far as Hermione being OOC, i think that is completely invalid. I dont care how smart or organized or put together someone might be... when love is involved, everything else is thrown out the window! I think your writing of her being confused is a completely acurate and realistic view of someone in that situation. I sure know i would be messed up if i were in her shoes!
I am not a H/Hr shipper and i MUST applaud you on the writing of this story! It is written in such a way as to have non-shippers appreciate (and in some casses enjoy) Hermione falling in love with Harry. It is not the usual "and randomly Hermione and Harry love each other and... oh look... now they are together-the end" story. Very well thought out and superbly realistic. Well done!

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 14: Loopholes

brilliant... i absolutely cant wait until the continuation of this. As far as Snape goes i think it was right one with the exception of one part (Ya i know i am nit picking, but at least i am honest): The part where he leans back against the wall and crosses one foot over the other... i dont think this is exactly the uncomfortably rigid character that Snape continually possesses... imo at least! it is the only thing that really stood out in the whole scene. Other than that, i think it was shot on!! Well done!!

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Trial by Fire

wow! Thats intense. Dark too.. whew

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/15/06 Title: Chapter 3: Avenged Sevenfold

brilliant!...

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/15/06 Title: Chapter 5: The Suffering

this is so well written... but i sometimes can follow some parts.. hmmm. It is moving so fast.

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/15/06 Title: Chapter 6: Unholy Confessions

whoa.... that was some of the deepest and most inner delving writingi have ever read. I LOVE how they are not realizing what is happening. I am NOT a H/Hr shipper, but i have to admit, when you write it this way, i could be persuaded. I just catn get over how deep Harry is. He is so powerful, just in being. whew! That was a really amazing scene. I wish it could have been caried on forever... so powerful! Well done.

 

One Step by JaimeHP
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: A stolen moment between Ron and Hermione. A very, very short outtake taking place in the final chapter of HBP.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1077 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/29/05 Updated: 11/29/05


Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 03/08/06 Title: Chapter 1: One Step

yes that was fantastic. You couldnt have made them act any more human. I knew exactly the was Ron felt as he looked at her while she was crying, and i know exactly the way Hermione felt after he kissed her. It was perfect. It was beautiful. It is what I hope happened to Ron and Hermione during the book when we were with Harry and Scrimgeour. Perfect 10/10. Superb!

 

Right Here by FirstDaysofSummer
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: A night at the Burrow could change everything. A moment of time, standing still, just him and her together. Not thinking about what could or will happen with Voldemort, but just being there with each other.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1090 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/03/05 Updated: 12/03/05


Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Right Here

very nice. Small, simple, but beautiful.

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Right Here

very nice. Small, simple, but beautiful.

 

First Kisses by Ravensgryff
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 121]

Summary: Hermione and Ron have gotten closer since the end of their sixth year and finally reach the point of sharing their first kiss. But who said that first kisses are as wonderful as we all would hope? Can theirs survive awkwardness and feelings of inadequacy, or will they regress to the usual bickering and never make it to the second kiss? And if they do make it

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 3239 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/08/05 Updated: 12/08/05


Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 05/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: First Kisses

Woooo fluff! But thats ok. i wouldnt have read it if i didnt think it was tastefull. And it was. Im sure we all get into situations like They were in at least once in our life. Well written!

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 05/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: First Kisses

Woooo fluff! But thats ok. i wouldnt have read it if i didnt think it was tastefull. And it was. Im sure we all get into situations like They were in at least once in our life. Well written!

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: First Kisses

Really very beautiful. I liked your characterization of Hermione. I thouhg it was spot on! I do think they might have moved a bit fast for a "first kiss," but i suppose it is the fantacy of most boys and girls at that age. Very good story! Well done!

 

A Fairy Tale by Fairy-Light by Mudblood428
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 105]

Summary: There's no better Christmas gift than a first kiss. A special Ron/Hermione Christmas one-shot to keep you warm - no misteltoe required. Special Christmas Update 12/25/05: "Ron's Secret" - a special illustration by yours truly!

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4004 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/08/05 Updated: 12/25/05


Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 03/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

That was really very beautiful. I especially adored the story Ron told Hermione, it was great. It was not too overboard, and, in my opinion, there was no fluf at all. Just two people finally realizing there feelings for each other. And by the way, the artwork was fantastic. Well done Well done!!

 

Summary: Ron and Hermione will find love early on, but will it last? And what about Harry and Ginny? They might come back together--if Ginny has anything to say about it, but what about how Harry feels?



Warning: Rating has changed because of a couple Very Sensitive Topics!!

Completed.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 12774 Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/10/05 Updated: 08/15/06


Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Rather Loud Confession

oh crap! Well at least Hermione know now right...! (good first chapter)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! =) --RP

Author's Response: Thanks so much! =) --RP

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 2: Hermione's Secret

ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THey are in deep s**t !!!!! Oh i cant imagine the Row that this is going to create! Well done!!!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks so much! Keep on reading and reviewing! lol =) --RP

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 3: A Test Run and a Talk

oh boy...pregnant Ginny. I know this is going to only get worse before it gets better...

Author's Response: A smart reader, you are. =)

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 4: A Memory and Secrets Told

wheres this going to go.......

Author's Response: Read on to find out, my friend. =) Thanks for reviewing! =) --RP

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 7: The Potion and a Slip

I did lie to you.

She knew that would make him stop. As he turned around, she saw the injured look in his eyes and it pushed her to tears."

>>> Ok, i was crying after this... Amazing ! You sure have a way with words. Fantastic!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I\'m glad it impacted a reader, as it is one of my favourite lines too! =) Thanks so much! =) --RP

 
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/17/06 Title: Chapter 8: The Beginning

ooh wow that was ...breathtaking! You are def a first rate writer and i look forward to reading more of your stories. Very few times do i feel this emotionally involved in a story... usually they are just fun or full of fluf. But this had it all. Im not a big fan of pregnancy stories, but i have to make an exception for this one. It was written with the utmost respect and beauty for the gift of life, even though Ginny lost the baby. The emotion you instill in this story is enough to have anyone coming back for fourth and fifth readings. Defenitly one of my favorite shorter fics of all time! Well Done!!!

Author's Response: Omg, I\'m crying now. This is one of the nicest reviews I\'ve ever recieved! And you totally saw what I was going for. Thank you SOO much! ~Kate *teary smile sent your way*

 
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