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02/28/06




all for the love of the trio.
Harry/Ginny
Ron/Hermione

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Tears, Comfort and Clean T-Shirts by newquillnt

Rated:81 Reviews
Summary: Hermione is confused about how Ron feels about her. Will a trip to The Burrow help?
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/09/06 Title: Chapter 5: Heart to Heart

that was a well written ending. too many times i have seen the "never been kissed" turn into the "im going to suck your face off' so fast that the "butterflies" as you put it are never allowed to start flapping around. you took your time with this however, and that was the key. really great story. Well done!



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Frustrated Thoughts

looks good so far!



Muggle City Skylines by Auror81692

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 53 Reviews
Summary: Before the Horcrux journey, Harry, Ron and Hermione are at the Burrow for Bill and Fluer's wedding. Emotions are running high for everyone, but mostly for a tall red-headed boy and a bushy-haired girl. Will a walk to a Muggle city skyline sort out their feelings?

This is my most popular one-shot story!!!! Thanks for making it so!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Cliff

very cute

Author's Response: thanks



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Cliff

very cute

Author's Response: thaks cool name



Mothers Know Best by Lil Malfoy

Rated:26 Reviews
Summary: Whenever Ronald Weasley brings a girl home to meet his mother, his mother makes up a random reason to why she doesn't like her. It's about time Ron figured out why exactly she keeps making these reasons up, and who she's really wants her son to be with. Turns out she's been hinting off all along... Please R&R!
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mothers Know Best

For your first one-shat, that was really good, especially the ending. The kiss might have been a bit rushed, but besides that, the whole "they sat and talked after ever girl" premis was a great idea. I know there wouldnt be mnuch to write about, but i would love to see what happens that next night. Well done!!!



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mothers Know Best

For your first one-shat, that was really good, especially the ending. The kiss might have been a bit rushed, but besides that, the whole "they sat and talked after ever girl" premis was a great idea. I know there wouldnt be mnuch to write about, but i would love to see what happens that next night. Well done!!!



Wintertime At Hogwarts by Romione

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 110 Reviews
Summary: It is the students sixth year at Hogwarts, and it's wintertime again. A time that Hermione and Ginny think to be the most romantic time of year. Harry and Ron, however, can't seem to work up the courage to ask the ones they love to the Winter Ball. This ball will set the future of the rest of the term at Hogwarts. Will everyone get the one they love?
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 09/09/06 Title: Chapter 10: The New Year

very cute. I enjoyed reading this very much.



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 09/09/06 Title: Chapter 1: Love all around

hmm good start.



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 09/09/06 Title: Chapter 6: Before the ball

i love the levicorpus part!

Author's Response: Haha thanks!



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 09/09/06 Title: Chapter 7: The Ball

very pretty



Drops of Crimson by Kachi

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 22 Reviews
Summary: One-shot. Hermione Granger isn't perfect - no one is. But perfection is expected of the very best and it isn't only the weak who crack under pressure and strain...
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 03/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Drops of Crimson

oh wow. Well that was unblieveable. it is one of those stories you dont forget. it sticks with you when you are not even thinking about it. This deserves a 10/10 for the sole purpose that it is painfull. Only you will truly understand its significance. We readers can only read in awe and ponder what it really means to you. One of the best stories i've read! Amazing.



Listen To Your Heart by wrtter0flife037

Rated:18 Reviews
Summary: Ginny is deeply in love with Harry but he is in love with someone else. What can she do to survive each day?
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 03/01/06 Title: Chapter 1: Song Fic

Wow... ... That was unbelieveable. Especially the ending. The note in her hand... I dont know if there is anything on earth that could have destroyed a person like that note. That was phenomenal writing. Sad to the fullest extent, but phenomenal.



Avenged Sevenfold by SecretKeeper

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 364 Reviews
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UPDATE: Guys, I'm back!

The innocence Iíve lost
The blood it's cost
Leaves unhealed scars within.
But I will not abate,
I will employ the hate
That has been planted deep inside.
I will not falter
Valor will not tire,
And I will survive
This trial by fire.


Many things are different now. Potions class is the least of the trio's worries. Battling dragons would be a welcome alternative to what it is they're attempting to battle now. The Order of the Phoenix is hallow without its leading member. And when someone close to Harry is stolen, Dumbledore's rhetoric of love, hope, and faith is challenged. Harry's strength and resolve are pushed to their limits. Loyalties are tested and new leaders emerge while Harry and Hermione struggle to balance new emotions and uncharted territory. Yet while this time after sixth year proves to be drastically unlike anything Harry's ever experienced, some truths remain, and some affections stand solid.

A novel-type story that explores the engimas of Snape, Horcruxes, war, and above all, the puzzle of love. HBP compliant. HHr.
Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/15/06 Title: Chapter 7: Radiant Eclipse

oh good lord! THis cant possibly end well!



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/15/06 Title: Chapter 8: Fall From Grace

wow that might have been t he most emotionally exhausting chapter i have ever read!!! i dont know what to say. It was brilliant. I never knew a story to hold so much in the balance the entier time. It was like a meager stick holding me precariously over a cliffe! Unbelieveable. I feel like i might have to go take a nap! whew...



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/15/06 Title: Chapter 9: End of an Era

whoa... now that was a top notch first kiss. Props to you. i think the best part about it was the circumstances... They were both so internally distraught. I cant imagine what that must have been like... What does one feel like after a kiss that is brought about by so much chaos and unimaginable emotion?



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/15/06 Title: Chapter 10: Tragedy and Travesty

wow.. I dont even know where to start... whooooooooooo! the depths of emotion you are reaching can not really be possible! This is the most intense story i have ever read!! I never though i could be converted to a H/Hr... but this would be how to do it. Because it is so real!!!!! It is real pain that Harry is feeling. He has fallen for Hermione and it is killing him, because (like all the non H/Hr shippers vehimently believe) it is just NOT RIGHT to him. What an amazingly simple, yet marvelously perfect way to write this plotline! This story is absolutely brilliant! BRILLIANT! It is just SO GOOD, AAAH i cant get over it!!!



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 11: Debacle and Disclosure

ive been away for a while, but im back!! And it is as good as i can remember it! Im interesed to see what is going tohappen with Hermiones decisions! Things are really getting complicated!!!



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 12: Inhale

*sigh* and the pain gets ever more burdensome... Boy this fic has a way of knocking your breath away... all the time! its so well done.



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 13: And Embers Rise

See i disagree with the flamers. I think the decision to have Hermione kiss Ron was a good idea if not expected. I knew, based on how closely you chose to stay with cannon, that something was bound to happen between R and Hr. It wouldnt have made sence if she just said "oh and btw, I love Harry now." What kind of plot would that have been??
As far as Hermione being OOC, i think that is completely invalid. I dont care how smart or organized or put together someone might be... when love is involved, everything else is thrown out the window! I think your writing of her being confused is a completely acurate and realistic view of someone in that situation. I sure know i would be messed up if i were in her shoes!
I am not a H/Hr shipper and i MUST applaud you on the writing of this story! It is written in such a way as to have non-shippers appreciate (and in some casses enjoy) Hermione falling in love with Harry. It is not the usual "and randomly Hermione and Harry love each other and... oh look... now they are together-the end" story. Very well thought out and superbly realistic. Well done!



Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 11/26/06 Title: Chapter 14: Loopholes

brilliant... i absolutely cant wait until the continuation of this. As far as Snape goes i think it was right one with the exception of one part (Ya i know i am nit picking, but at least i am honest): The part where he leans back against the wall and crosses one foot over the other... i dont think this is exactly the uncomfortably rigid character that Snape continually possesses... imo at least! it is the only thing that really stood out in the whole scene. Other than that, i think it was shot on!! Well done!!