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Life Happens by ColorOfAngels
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2754]


Life Is What Happens When You Are Busy Making Plans.

This is the story of Harry J. Potter and Ginny M. Weasley, their lives, friendships, realtionships and everything in between. Life doesn't always take the road they expect or want, but they soon learn that no matter what they do or how hard they try, the world stops for no man and that simply put, Life Happens.

Primarily Harry/Ginny but with Ron/Hermione background. Picks up after the end of book 5 and continues into Post-Hogwarts.


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 118251 Chapters: 34 Completed: No
04/11/05 Updated: 11/08/06

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 09/26/06 Title: Chapter 18: Families

" still jumping on the bed, her red curls bouncing up and down in the early morning light."

As soon as i read this i knew exactly where this was going!! What an amazing hint at where Ginny wants her relationship to go. I was wondering if Harry was going to catch that or not!! So very very clever! Brilliant!

Author's Response: i personally love this scene.....and it will be revisted


Taking Control... by the_bartender713
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 52]

Summary: One Shot: "...I can no longer handle this. Why did my life have to turn out this way? Iím young, after all, and I know that it is hopeless. Either way, I shall die, so what is the point?"
A boy turns to desperate measures to avoid his pre-determined fate.
"...Iíll end it all, before he has a chance to."

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Suicide, Sexual Situations

Word count: 3603 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
04/11/05 Updated: 04/11/05

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/12/06 Title: Chapter 1: Taking Control...

... wow... I had to stop halfwy though to read it again. I wasnt sure who it was youw ere talking about. Honestly, from the beginning i though you were talking about Draco, but when you talked about going to get dumbledore, i had to start over again... I suppose thats what makes this such a fantastic story! It is because you can interchange both Harry and Draco throughouth the entire thing. For a while there i though it was Harry!
Really amazing idea, and not to far fetched actually. I would never want to be in the position that Draco was in. It does seem in the books that he is just supposed to follow in his fathers footsteps, but he never seemed to have a chioce... until the end of book 6...
Very well written. I look forward to reading your other fics!

Author's Response: Hey! Great hearing from you again, and I\'m so glad that you liked it- all while seeing it for what it is. Draco really IS in a tough situation, and I cannot WAIT to see how JK works it out! Thanks again for reading!


Healing Harry by pandafan81
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 507]

Summary: A rose, a new bedroom, a Pensieve, and a new home. Harry finds comfort in his friends and family. Will he find more?

Story is now complete!

Earlier chapters are going through a clean-up and final edit. Chapters 1-4 complete.

Half Blood Prince and Deathly Hallows Disregarded

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 59634 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
05/12/05 Updated: 09/15/07

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: The Pensieve

hey now i am not a lengthy reviewer, but i must say a few things after this chapter. 1- I LOVE the idea of a garden at Grimmauld place. It is a really neat idea... that im sure will come in tremendously handy. 2- i waqs worried about the "will" as being like most "will" stories i have read in the past... but i must say you wrote this brilliantly!! Sirius being able to talk to everyone individually made it so much more personal. 3- I must say i teated up in the end. especially the part about how he left memories in the pensieve for Harry to check out. Not a dry eye at the table... or reading! Also.. the subtlety of the two holding hands at the end... perfect. just enough to know it is starting. Honestly one of the best starts to a fiction i have ever read!! Can not wait to read on!!!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: Inheritances

wow. I really love the thoroughness with which you tie all the parts of this story together. The part about Harry showing everyone his room and talking animatedly with everyone really stuck with me. it is such a pleasant cahnge from what I am used to. it might be a bit out of character... but i really like that. It is really the way i wish Harry could be. Or rather the way he deserves to be. (does that make sence?)

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Adventures in Diagon Alley

Now this is really nice and all... but it is too fast for me... now it is your story and written to perfection, so i am not complainning about that, but i am just not a fan of them getting together that fast. ok, enough soap box. (Well done nonetheless!!)


Power of the Prophecy by the_bartender713
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 877]

Summary: Year six begins in the_bartender's crazy concoction that is the life of Harry Potter. Add one part Harry, two parts prophecy, a mixture of Ron and Hermione, a dash of Ginny, a splash of Dumbledore (and garnish with a certain new knightly character to add a little mystery!)...

Pour over the ice in Lord Voldemort's heart and voila!

You've got yourself a Power of the Prophecy Cocktail, sure to mess you up, spin you around, make you question your motives and turn your wizarding world up-side down.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 103157 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
05/12/05 Updated: 06/28/06

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 20: Return to Love's Hollow

i figured they had to be more then just a cat and a bee... I loved the part about him catching up to her... The ceremony was Beautiful!!!!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 21: Padfoot Returns

wow... now that was something!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/21/06 Title: Chapter 29: Conceptions of Reality

that was absolutely beautiful... but i dont like it. I dont like it at all... especially the ending witht eh "True love is to die for the person" and how Harry "knew what he had to do." I dont like were that could lead him...

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 6: Hermione's Birthday

that was awesome! Had me crying at one point there! (And that is quite a feat!)

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 7: The First Altercation- A Good, Old-Fashioned Muggle Duel

whew! that was serious. I am quite supprise dthat Harry didnt use any of his wandless magic though... wether or not he was out of control. I cant wait to see what Dumbledore has to say.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 8: Ron's Realization

wow this is absolutely fantastic! It is getting to be one of the best stories i have read on MNFF. I dont recomend many, but i might just have to start recomending this one!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 9: Draco's Detour

brilliant... and i keeps getting better... how can it keep getting better??

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 10: The Second Meeting

... wow

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 11: Albus' Secret

wow! that was absolutely the most amazing chcapter i have ever read. I can not believe the amout of thought that you put into this story, as well as the amout of research and imagination that it took to think of a plot so utterly fantastic! This is now THE GREATEST fic i have read! i can understand why people would put you in the top ten! Because you definitely deserve to be there. Look... i am saying all these things and i still have 24 chapters to go! Very soon im not going to be able to leave any more reviews because i dont think words are going to be able to successfully satisfy how i feel about this.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/24/06 Title: Chapter 30: The Space Between Black and White

... hmmm.. i dont know about that one. thats a bit far reaching... hmmm. it does make sence.... but still...

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/24/06 Title: Chapter 32: The Fourth Altercation- Phoenix Song

now that was well written! I was crying the whole time but it was perfect. every part of it. for the "thank you... Dad." part to Ron punching Harry. Perfect!!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/24/06 Title: Chapter 34: Mind Over Matter

oh good lord that was absolutely fantastic!!!. the tears are still running down my face! I could not think of a better and more beautiful way to end a story then with that. I cant get over some of the writers on here! I dont know how you guys can think of such fantastic ways to connect different plots from the story. It is absolutely brilliant! Every time I read a story like this, i feel like... oh this cant get any better... And then it does! it astounds me! Absolutely wonderful and i cant wait to read the sequel!!!! Thank you for sharing your tallent with us!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 12: Detention with Draco

wow... although i am going to say that Draco was a bit too much OOC for me. It was a great plotline and idea... but it stretched a bit here and there... And im not sure if i like the Phoenix name yet.. (I need to learn the correct pronunciation!)

Author's Response: Hehehe-- it is pronounced \"san-jew-een\", although some might argue for \"san-gew-een\". I learned about it in my Psych class- is was the one body make up in ancient greek society that was considered useful.... and it also means blood, so JKR used it for the name of her Vampire in HBP. You have no idea how much that shocked me, b/c I had come up with the name MONTHS before HBP came out!!!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 13: The Third Meeting

whoa now that was serious.... i dont know abotut his one. It is starting to get into territory that is very sensitive... hmmm

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell Signed
Date: 10/17/06 Title: Chapter 14: A Plan of Action

what an AMAZING plot seed! Wow! And the whole thing with Harry and the defence part! whew.... talk about some AWESOME writting... sone of the best i have ever read! oh PLEASE keep it up!

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