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Wow. It's been a while. But I'm still alive, and now that I've finally got the net in the apt., I read all those wonderful reviews that have been left for me since May and before!
I adore all of the HP world. It really makes me want to buckle down and keep writing on my real novel. As per usual, I will make sure that this site (after my live journal) is the first to know once I get a publishing deal. Because I would be so flattered if since you spent so many hours and gigabytes supporting me online if you'd spend fifteen or so of your hard earned dollars (and a few more of your hours!) to read my real 'no pen-name required' novel.
Feel free to keep up with me via live journal (user name bartender713), but I will warn you- I am a 23 year old graduate student. Contents of my personal life may very well be not suitable for children, so read at your disgression. If you want to know whether you're old enough to read about my personal life, well... if you have to ask, you're probably not :-)
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Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 01/13/05 Title: None

i really like your story! it's very detailed and descriptive, and that makes it even better! ... i wish I had a nightie like that. it sounded beautiful! :-)

Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 02/11/05 Title: None

hahah- i thought about not submitting another review seeing as mine was the last one- but I can't help myself. i really hope you'll update soon!!!

Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 02/02/05 Title: None

cant wait to read more!!! plz update soon!!!! i'm excited to see how much thinking you'vr put into these ceremonies and etc. hope to read soon!

Descent by Seren

Rated: Professors • 61 Reviews
Summary: His happiness nourishes me. He surrounds me, swallows me, tears me apart and puts me back together, and makes me feel more alive. He is my fire. I am his, to the last breath. Nothing exists without her. She is my infatuation, my fetish, my fixation, and my drive. I cannot let anyone else have her. Harry and Hermione slowly descend.
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 12/02/04 Title: Chapter 1: Descent (One-Shot)

only one word really, and that is: damn. nice work. keep it up!

The American Revolution by Sparkling Star

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 133 Reviews
Summary: Melody Chancelle, an American-born girl who had lived in France for the last five years, has just been transferred from Beauxbaton to Hogwarts. How will she adjust?

Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 01/13/05 Title: Chapter 6: Lonely Mistakes

seriously laugh out loud--- hahhaha Seamus. too funny. i'mr eally interested! I'm glad that the story was already done when i found it! makes less waiting! great job so far- and now, i go back to reading! i'll comment again later on!

Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 01/13/05 Title: Chapter 21: Leaving Home

that's IT!?!??! rar...

Author's Response: Actually, The Last Line is the sequel to this one. I'm glad you likes The American Revolution.

Who Thrice Defies by TwinSuns

Rated:152 Reviews
Summary: Voldemort is after Harry Potter, a boy "...born to those who thrice defied him...". But ever wonder what Lily and James did to defy him thus? This is a story about passion, both love and hatred. Follow James and Lily through their 7th year as they unite as Head Boy and Girl, ultimatly fall in love, and deal with the rising Dark Forces and the feared Dark Lord. Final chapter up!
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 12/07/04 Title: Chapter 9: Light in the Gathering Darkness

awwwww!!! I loved it!! I cant wait to hear more!! Please update soon!! You make it seem as if we really KNOW them now, and thats why i like it so much!

Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 12/04/04 Title: Chapter 8: Homecoming

cant wait for an update!!! i really like how you werent afraid to hit on some touchy subjects!! post again soon!

Author's Response: thanks! This busy week is FINALLY over, so more chapters should be coming soon.

Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 12/01/04 Title: Chapter 7: Better off Together

I really liked the ending! Definately not too fluffly. Sweet, I agree. Update soon!!!

Always Stick Together by hattiepotter

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 346 Reviews
Summary: 6th year. Harry and Ginny's friendship quickly turns into something more and they have to struggle through the Second War together. Trials and tribulations, drama, cuteness, excitement and a chunk of mystery.
Now completed with over 6000 reads! Thank you!
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 01/07/05 Title: Chapter 5: The Only One

i really liked it. I'm glad you're writing more, and thanks for reviewing to my story!! cheers!

Author's Response: :-) Thank you for bothering to read my story too!


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 12/18/04 Title: None

hey now... be kind! WHERES OUR CHAPTER!!!????? happy writing!

Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 12/08/04 Title: None

lucky review number seven.... you know, it makes sense really. The whole Snape thing. Maybe he and Harry can do some late night vampire bonding.... hhahaaeeeewwwwww. I would definately like to see more!


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 01/08/05 Title: None

wow. i stayed up till 3 am trying to read it all in one shot... not successful, but hey, i tried!! i REALLY like it, and i hope you'll update soon!!!!


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 01/26/05 Title: None

wow. you've really made harry a MUCH more developed/complex character. I was really surprised at how.... well, "cheeky" he's gotten, and also bitter. but then again- he has EVERY REASON to be, and so it just all makes sense. you know... i'm thinking about becoming a writer as well, although I don't know if i have the talet to make up my own alternate universe. wow. kudos to you- and i would DEFINATELY read your original work. best of luck!! ... back to reading- i just HAD to post and tell u what a spectacular job you're doing! and a SEQUEL!?!? even better!

Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 02/02/05 Title: None

i absolutely adore what you're doing! please update soon! i check every day to see if you have!

Author's Response: I'm not updating here anymore, you'll have to go to fanfiction.net to read the rest of it. I'm dbzdragonlanceman on fanfiction.

The Second War Begins by OhISee

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 465 Reviews
Summary: Post-OOTP Harry and his friends have much more to worry about than classes and homework. They face the constant threat of Death Eaters and Lord Voldemort as the Second War takes hold. As teenagers, their roles in the war are expected to be minimal. However, Harry soon finds he and his friends must play a larger role than they ever imagined. The story will also involve the beginnings of H/G and R/Hr. Chapter 28 submitted! :)
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 03/21/05 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Hermione's Surprise

awwww... that was absolutely precious. It was perfectly in charater, too, and that made it even better. nicely done- and don't we all wish that we could have something as sweet as that in real life??

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. Indeed, we would all be so lucky to have someone spoil us like that! Thanks for reviewing!

And In Your Loving Memory by Seren

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 25 Reviews
Summary: Memories of those gone are slowly fading into the hustle and bustle of everyday life. Lives that were given for others are pushed aside and forgotten by the world at large. A few students decide that it's time to honour the fallen, so that no one may forget the sacrifices made by the ones who came before them.
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 01/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

it brought tears to my eyes. thanks.

The Worthy by Seren

Rated:26 Reviews
Summary: The Last Battle has begun, and the Last Stand is pitched in the Ministry of Magic. After Remus Lupin is felled, Harry and his closest friends defeat Voldemort, and Prophecy is fulfilled. But it is not the end; the Veil stands as Judge, Jury, and Executioner, and only the worthy may survive. Not a Sirius returns from the Veil fiction.
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 01/20/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Worthy (One-Shot)

you know, i must say that yours is by far the best theory as to what goes on beyond that veil. well done.

Meant to Be by annie

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 528 Reviews
Summary: It is their final year at Hogwarts, and Hermione and Draco start it off burdened by confusion and mixed feelings after catching a glimpse of the near future. This is a fic about the two students as they deal with their fate and the knowledge of what is to come with the aid of a magical window into the future. (Rated PG-13 for mild violence in later chapters)

Chapter 19 has been posted. This fic is finished. Thank you to everyone who read and reviewed!

This fic is now available in Chinese, thanks to Levy. Link: http://post.baidu.com/f?kz=261897233
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 03/14/05 Title: Chapter 19: Meant to Be

the ending, i must say, was pure pulchritude. Nicely done, and I can only hope that the books end so "happily bittersweet." enjoy them, when they come out. I know I will.


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: the_bartender713 Signed
Date: 04/03/05 Title: None

as per chapter 4- i've often thought about where tom riddle could have learned/got his taste for 'dark magic'. I wonder if it was through Dumbledore, or, more realistically, DD's PENSIEVE> it's possible TMR stumbled upon the battle btwn. DD and Grindelwald and learned it from there... anyway... reading on. Nicely done so far, btw. :-)

Author's Response: thankies XD if not for Red Hen Publications I would never thought of a possible way to explain where he learnt all the dark arts XD the battle between Dumbledore and Grindelwald is after his seventh year I believe, and I think avada kedavra isn't that easy to accomplish even for a genious like him