Heya! I'm Hanni!
My interests include (but are not limited to): Reading, Writing, Singing, Track, and Volleyball.
I belong to the forums and all that fun stuff. I am a Gamma in the BA, and I am also in the SBBC! I LOVE being a Gryffindor! *huggles Gryffies*
I have a couple things I'd lurve to share with you.
Alise-This one is going great! I am currently writing the chappies and they will be up shortly.
Angel - FIN! WOOT! It was really only three chapters, but I finished it!
I'll be around!
This is very well done, dear! I love how you told it in second-person. It is a nice change, but it also really helps you gain a greater understanding of the character. You provided a wonderful insight into Draco Malfoy's mind. And the way that Hermione doesn't talk as much really also adds to it, because it focuses your attention onto Draco and on his emotions. =)
A little typo, I believe:
Self-delusionment had always been easy for you.
Another beautiful line, here. I love it! It really captures Draco's life in only a few words. How true it is, and the way it is written just...*sighs*
Her voice doesn’t sound very happy at all, and she is looking at you like she is begging for something.
This part confuses me a bit, however. What is she begging? I know you are making it vague, and you don't have to state it directly, but just give a bit more of a hint.
I love Draco's reaction to her engagement. I can just feel how he feels, and how he just runs away. He's furious with himself for letting himself fall in love, and then he just shuts it all out after it fails him again.
but you feel the shards of your heart splinter all over again.
This really fits Draco's character. =)
This is a beautifully breathtaking piece, and I LOVE it. Dramione is only good when people really capture the character and emotion, and I believe you have done so. =)
Author's Response: Well, I fixed that little \"starring\" blooper. Thanks for the catch! And I really do appreciate all your kind compliments on the story. I\'m thrilled you enjoyed it, and that you liked the second-person -- I know some people don\'t like it at times.
Also, I apologize if you found the \"Her voice...\" paragraph to be confusing. I was vague, but it was supposed to convey that she knew --in a way-- how her engagement would hit Malfoy and knew he wouldn\'t be pleased. Or something.
Anywayz, thank for the review and Happy New Years!!! 8D
Do you know how good this is? I sat here, gaping like a total idiot.
This is LIKE OMG AWESOME!!!!!
Probably one of the best poems I've read on here. I can't give you any more meat, I'm sorry, because it's just so totally awesome!!!
Author's Response: Thankyou! See, this is why authors love reviews... Well, all i can say is thank you. A Lot.
This is a really really good fic. Please keep updating!
This is one of my favorite fics ever, I have to tell you. I've been hanging on to the updates for a long time. And speaking of Bellatrix, I'm listening to Helena Bonham Carter and Johnny Depp on my iPod. XD
Like I said before, I love your characterisation of Tonks. I really enjoyed her sarcastic comments and being annoying in general.
And Bellatrix, I liked your portrayal of her too. Especially the hair. I love the hair, XD. She was a bit more compassionate here, and I like it. XD
I love your writing in general, dear, so keep on with your fics! =)
Thanks for writing such a great fic!
Author's Response: Thank you ever so much, Hanni! I do love your reviews-- it\'s nice to see something constructive. I\'m really glad you like this fic-- it means a lot :) And thank you for writng such a great review!
I love how you characterize Tonks, with all the parentheses. Your image of her is great! You seem to have a grasp on her. I love all the afterthoughts. XD
Keep on writing this!
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much, Hanni! Your review made me smile. And yes, there\'s more of Tonks to come! :)
I rather like this story a lot. The whole plot was in-character, if you can say that.
You just feel so bad for the both of them, and they can't make it work. They're driven insane by it. It's not too happy-making.
But, I have a question. What made you decide to make Draco so different in this fic? What drove him to this point?
I really loved it, a LOT!
Author's Response: I think there are only two ways for Draco\'s character to progress. One is for him to become stronger, beat his cowardly Slytherin side and stand taller. The other is going the opposite, perhaps trying to do those things but failing. In this scenario he truly has no courage and inner strength and once the pressure gets to him, he snaps. Can\'t deal. I wanted to show this vision of Draco, as the one in TMLWKY is obviously turning into the former.
\r\nI get so tired of fluff sometimes, I just have to write something super-angsty to balance it out. I have a hard time doing in between stuff...
\r\nThanks for reviewing! I\'m glad you enjoyed it, and that you found them to be in character. I was worried about that because I took those sides of them to the extemes, but if they were still IC, that\'s great! Thank you very much!