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Real name: Hanni
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Heya! I'm Hanni!

My interests include (but are not limited to): Reading, Writing, Singing, Track, and Volleyball.

I belong to the forums and all that fun stuff. I am a Gamma in the BA, and I am also in the SBBC! I LOVE being a Gryffindor! *huggles Gryffies*

I have a couple things I'd lurve to share with you.


Alise-This one is going great! I am currently writing the chappies and they will be up shortly.
Angel - FIN! WOOT! It was really only three chapters, but I finished it!

I'll be around!

--Hanni
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Don't Tell! by butter_beer_drinker
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 79]

Summary:

Draco is apprehended by members of the Order and held for questioning. While Harry and Ron search for Horcruxes, Hermione has to stay behind and is asked to tend to their ‘guest’. After two months of confinement, a beaten down Draco and a frustrated Hermione start a tentative friendship, based entirely on loneliness. Draco is set free after agreeing to help the Order, but when Harry and Hermione are captured by Death Eaters, he has to decide whom he will betray, his master, or the girl he can’t stop thinking about.

I have made a few minor changes to chapter 9, I changed the direction of the end of the story so it was neccassary.  Chapter 10 is in the que now.

"Friendship is the hardest thing in the world to explain. It's not something you learn in school. But if you haven't learned the meaning of friendship, you really haven't learned anything."

-Muhammad Ali



Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 15915 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
08/28/07 Updated: 10/26/11


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 03/27/08 Title: Chapter 5: Waiting

Kristy, this is such a wonderful start to this fic! It's got me hooked so far!

One of the wonderful things about this fic is that you don't just jump right into the plot. Some writers just take and make the second chapter the start of the plot, but you just ease into it, setting the scene slowly. This is really going to make for a better fic; keep it up!


Also, I love Hermione's parents. Wherever did you come up with the name Raleigh? I love that city in North Carolina, it's really pretty.

You have a wonderful writing style, and I've loved everything you've written. Keep it up, dear!

--Hanni

Author's Response: Thank you Hanni.  I researched British names and just looked until I found one that I thought fit his character description that I had created.  It was fun since there is no real description of her parents anywhere.  I hope you read the rest of it and thank you for the review.

 

To the Future by FlightofthePhoenix
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Andromeda attends the funeral for her husband, daughter and son-in-law with her grandson Teddy Lupin and is visited by someone unexpected later that day.



This is the first one-shot in the Teddy Lupin Files.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1591 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/06/07 Updated: 09/09/07


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: We Stand in Remembrance

So sad.

Tonks is my all time favorite character, and it tore me apart when she died. I wore black for awhile. I was a depressed girl.

This story really puts it all in perspective, and I'm glad you wrote it; it was beautiful! Thank you!

--Hanni

Author's Response: Thanks a lot Hanni. I\'m glad I wrote it as well :D It was one of the many bouncing plot bunnies that hopped into my head after reading DH :) ~Nicole

 

Summary: Of love and luck and pain and death and Hope.



In dying, the bleeding pearl whispers aloud and secrets revealed, will change everything.



Written for the Autumn Ode Challenge by crazy_purple_hp_freak of Slytherin

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 513 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/13/07 Updated: 10/17/07


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 11/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: In dying, the bleeding pearl whispers aloud

Suzie! I red this fic when I made teh banner, and meant to review later!

This was really wonderful! Your word choice is wonderful!

--Hanni

Author's Response: thank you hon!! ily! :D

 

Holey by wewillmissyou
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: There is more than one hole in George Weasley, other than the one of the side of his head. Ever since Fred died he'd been different, so his often neglected fiance Angelina suggests he adopts a child for two weeks to see how he would fare as a father. George does just that, and adopts Holley, who had also lost a twin. They both expected nothing of the experience, but soon learn truly what love is. And how to heal that hole in both their hearts.


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Mental Disorders

Word count: 1505 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
10/25/07 Updated: 10/26/07


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 10/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Earrie Coincidences

Aww please update soon!



Author's Response: Thank you and I\'ll be sure to!

 

The Plan by joybelle423
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: Sirius was just trying to help his best mate. It wasn't supposed to be like this. Inspired by Imogen Heap's The Walk. Sirius/Lily.

Written for Nikki/FanficWriterNikki for the hprare_exchange of fall 2007 on LiveJournal.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 4234 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/05/07 Updated: 11/08/07


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 11/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Plan

I am now officially a Lily/Sirius shipper. You need to make this a chaptered fic. LOL

 

All the King's Horses by Mem_Marie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: Draco Malfoy is broken. Life has dealt him many a cruel hand, and he is not strong enough to take fate’s blows. But he thought he somehow still had a chance – a chance in the form of a Gryffindor girl with dirty blood.

He must have been wrong. It seems that nothing – not all the king’s horses, nor all the king’s men - can put Draco back together again.

[One-sided, Draco-centric, DHr romance set after DH]


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1490 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/11/07 Updated: 12/16/07


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 12/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is very well done, dear! I love how you told it in second-person. It is a nice change, but it also really helps you gain a greater understanding of the character. You provided a wonderful insight into Draco Malfoy's mind. And the way that Hermione doesn't talk as much really also adds to it, because it focuses your attention onto Draco and on his emotions. =)

A little typo, I believe:

simply starring


Self-delusionment had always been easy for you.

Another beautiful line, here. I love it! It really captures Draco's life in only a few words. How true it is, and the way it is written just...*sighs*

Her voice doesn’t sound very happy at all, and she is looking at you like she is begging for something.

This part confuses me a bit, however. What is she begging? I know you are making it vague, and you don't have to state it directly, but just give a bit more of a hint.


I love Draco's reaction to her engagement. I can just feel how he feels, and how he just runs away. He's furious with himself for letting himself fall in love, and then he just shuts it all out after it fails him again.


but you feel the shards of your heart splinter all over again.

This really fits Draco's character. =)


This is a beautifully breathtaking piece, and I LOVE it. Dramione is only good when people really capture the character and emotion, and I believe you have done so. =)

--Hanni






Author's Response: Well, I fixed that little \"starring\" blooper. Thanks for the catch! And I really do appreciate all your kind compliments on the story. I\'m thrilled you enjoyed it, and that you liked the second-person -- I know some people don\'t like it at times.

Also, I apologize if you found the \"Her voice...\" paragraph to be confusing. I was vague, but it was supposed to convey that she knew --in a way-- how her engagement would hit Malfoy and knew he wouldn\'t be pleased. Or something.

Anywayz, thank for the review and Happy New Years!!! 8D

 

Open and Close by lilyevans489
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: The feud between Slytherin and Gryffindor has broken many friendships. But only two have changed wizarding history.


Godric and Salazar.


Lily and Severus.


Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 213 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/21/07 Updated: 12/24/07


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 12/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Open and Close

>.<


Do you know how good this is? I sat here, gaping like a total idiot.

This is LIKE OMG AWESOME!!!!!

Probably one of the best poems I've read on here. I can't give you any more meat, I'm sorry, because it's just so totally awesome!!!


!!!

O_O


--Hanni

Author's Response: Thankyou! See, this is why authors love reviews... Well, all i can say is thank you. A Lot.

 

Good Things by Cinderella Angelina
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: It's Lily Evan's sixth year. She's pretty busy with school, prefect duties, and spying. You see, she doesn't believe that Regulus Black is as bad as Potter and Sirius say he is. She's determined to find out for herself.

Things get out of hand....

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10342 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/30/08 Updated: 02/05/08


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 02/16/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2, for lack of a better title

This is a really really good fic. Please keep updating!

--Hanni

 

Summary: Fresh in the Order of the Phoenix, young Nymphadora Tonks is sent on a mission to help change the course of history. Accompanied by only a Time-Turner and other small objects, Tonks must save a woman’s life to help a certain Chosen One in the future. Will she succeed, or only fall helplessly into the clutches of her enemies? Danger, thrill, and unexpected guidance and friendship are to come.



I am PadfootnPeeves of Gryffindor for the Gauntlet.



Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 9422 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/17/08 Updated: 02/22/08


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 02/23/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is one of my favorite fics ever, I have to tell you. I've been hanging on to the updates for a long time. And speaking of Bellatrix, I'm listening to Helena Bonham Carter and Johnny Depp on my iPod. XD


Like I said before, I love your characterisation of Tonks. I really enjoyed her sarcastic comments and being annoying in general.

And Bellatrix, I liked your portrayal of her too. Especially the hair. I love the hair, XD. She was a bit more compassionate here, and I like it. XD

I love your writing in general, dear, so keep on with your fics! =)

Thanks for writing such a great fic!

--Hanni

Author's Response: Thank you ever so much, Hanni! I do love your reviews-- it\'s nice to see something constructive. I\'m really glad you like this fic-- it means a lot :) And thank you for writng such a great review!

 
Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 02/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh! Cliffie!

I love how you characterize Tonks, with all the parentheses. Your image of her is great! You seem to have a grasp on her. I love all the afterthoughts. XD

Keep on writing this!

--Hanni

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much, Hanni! Your review made me smile. And yes, there\'s more of Tonks to come! :)

 

Pushit by MaiaMadness
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 6]

Summary:

“Saw that gap again today as you were begging me to stay. Managed to push myself away, and you as well, my dear. You still love me and you push it on me. And I’m slipping back into the gap again. I feel alive when you touch me. I feel alive when you hold me down. If, when I say I might fade like a sigh if I stay, you minimise my movement anyway, I must persuade you another way. Pushing and shoving and pushing me… There’s no love in fear!”

This wasn’t the way it was meant to be, staring at each other over pieces of broken glass, the air heavy with the echo of angry words and endless regret. This wasn’t how it was meant to be…

Harry/Draco

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Book 7 Disregarded, Slash, Violence

Word count: 2110 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/21/08 Updated: 04/26/08


Reviewer: Hansolohpfrk Signed
Date: 04/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Pushit

I rather like this story a lot. The whole plot was in-character, if you can say that.

You just feel so bad for the both of them, and they can't make it work. They're driven insane by it. It's not too happy-making.

But, I have a question. What made you decide to make Draco so different in this fic? What drove him to this point?

I really loved it, a LOT!

Author's Response: I think there are only two ways for Draco\'s character to progress. One is for him to become stronger, beat his cowardly Slytherin side and stand taller. The other is going the opposite, perhaps trying to do those things but failing. In this scenario he truly has no courage and inner strength and once the pressure gets to him, he snaps. Can\'t deal. I wanted to show this vision of Draco, as the one in TMLWKY is obviously turning into the former.
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\r\nI get so tired of fluff sometimes, I just have to write something super-angsty to balance it out. I have a hard time doing in between stuff...
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\r\nThanks for reviewing! I\'m glad you enjoyed it, and that you found them to be in character. I was worried about that because I took those sides of them to the extemes, but if they were still IC, that\'s great! Thank you very much!

 
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