Penname: Vorona [Contact]
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I have been writing original fiction for several years. I seem to be particularly talented at starting novels and then not finishing them. Despite that, at this point I have four finished novels, several poems, and a few shorter stories.

I entered the world of fan fiction due to a post-HBP speculation I had about Regulus Black, Severus Snape, and the potion in the cave, which led to the one-shot story The Secret Papers of Regulus Black.

That story has inspired a sequel (still in progress) and two prequels, Damage Control and Loyaulte me lie.

As for challenges, I am occasionally inspired. The Prodigal Son is my response to the June 2007 One Shot Challenge, and features Percy seeking to reconcile with his family.

I also participated in the Summer 2006 Gauntlet challenge, with The Labyrinth of Lost Souls. Part of that story involved a riddle, which sparked my other posted one shot, The Logic Problem.

Both The Labyrinth of Lost Souls and The Prodigal Son won second place in their respective challenges.

I'm currently working on a long, self-indulgent work that's based on another fan fiction (and thus, will never be available for public viewing), the sequel to The Secret Papers of Regulus Black, and two Year 7/Post-Hogwarts stories that are very different from each other.

Due to my tendency to abandon works, I have decided not to upload any chapters of a given story until the entire story is complete.

The Papers Series (in chronological order based on plot):

The Secret Papers of Regulus Black - what started it all.

Damage Control

Loyaulte me lie (secretly my favorite) - second prequel (i.e. it happens after the events in Damage Control)




Stories not part of the Papers Series:

Labyrinth of Lost Souls - my second favorite.

The Prodigal Son

The Logic Problem


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Summary: Snape has just thrown Harry out of his office, after catching him nosing into Snape's past.(OotP, chapter 28) Snape now has to put back these three terrible memories into his own head and relive these three events that have played a major part in shaping him into the man that he has ultimately become. This is a story of love and loyalty, friendship and betrayal, and death and desperation.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7806 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/24/04 Updated: 11/24/04


Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 05/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Worse Memories

This was wonderful! I'm so glad I'm not the only one to have conceived of a friendship between Regulus and Snape. And I love the idea of him having fallen for a Ravenclaw. Very well done.

 

Lacrima Serpentis by Insecurity
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 311]

Summary: This story is set in the dystopian society of Wizarding England under the control of Voldemort. Fifteen years after leaving Hogwarts, Harry Potter is in hiding; he fears the words of the Prophecy and has lost the will to fight. This story tells the tale of an adult Hermione who sacrifices everything: her family, her moral beliefs and eventually her dignity, in order to save the Wizarding world. She becomes a Death Eater under the recommendation of someone she barely trusts. She struggles to find the courage and strength, but with every choice she makes she gets deeper and deeper into danger.




Chapter 33 is finally up. Thank you for your support and patience..

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 117014 Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/27/04 Updated: 09/08/06


Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh, this was a powerful chapter. I'm so sad that I'm nearing the end...

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh! The letter was perfect. And the cliff-hanger evil. I'm so glad I'm reading when this has all been written.

I adore this story.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/23/07 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh! This is... Oh! God...

She killed him. This is so powerful. So amazing.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/24/07 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

I cried through this entire chapter. Oh, you are evil, you are so deliciously evil. This was a remarkable work. I'm so glad I read it.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/05/07 Title: Chapter 13: Unlucky Chapter 13

Oh, dear... brilliant... shoot.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/17/07 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh my... It's such a delicious thing to return to this story...

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/06/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh, drat it all, you made me cry again...

Not to worry, that was a good cry (shoot, I don't understand myself anymore). I loved this chapter. It's so perfect. Especially Snape's talk of trust directly preceding Harry and Ron's reactions.

God. Just... brilliant.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/19/07 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I loved this chapter and what you did with her family. The fact that he wouldn't let her speak to her son was really powerful. Of course, as always, I look forward to more Snape!

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/19/07 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

"I will summarise my criticisms in much fewer but sharper words."

Ha! That's perfect. And the story as a whole is still excellent.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well.

As you might remember, the sole reason I had for not reading this when I was active before was that it wasn't finished.

And so, now I'm reading. Wonderful. The line "Yes, as low as me" is absolutely perfect. It took my breath away.

Fantastic (the whole chapter, not just that one sentence :) ).

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, this is wonderful. I love her inner struggle and her decision to go through with it. Very powerful.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Gorgeous. You do emotion so well... I love her defiance, too. I wish I could write this well.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

No, definitely not too OOC or strange... Still better than ever.

 

A Day in the Life by Ginger Hair
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 207]

Summary: A Potions assignment gone wrong sends Harry and Ginny into the past while Lily and James are sent into the future. How will Ginny and Harry cope with the Marauders? Better yet, how will Lily and James cope with Ron and Hermione? Will they ever get back to their rightful eras? Read on to find out. Please read and review. From what my fans say, its funny. You decide for yourself.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15704 Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/02/05 Updated: 02/01/05


Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 06/06/06 Title: Chapter 1: Accidental Apparation

Ooh, this is a really interesting start. I can't wait to see all the havoc that ensues. The parts with James and Lily are going to be particularly amusing, I expect!

 

The Clipped Wings of Love by Magical Maeve
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: A little study of what Snape's parents' marriage might have been like.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse

Word count: 2400 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/17/05 Updated: 05/23/05


Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 04/18/06 Title: Chapter 1: The Clipped Wings of Love

This was excellent! Your use of metaphor is amazing: the make-up being a mask for her fear, the love getting caught in her throat, etc. But, did you have to clip the ravens' wings? Actually, that was a very vivid moment.

I also thought you did a really good job with the thoughts she has about Kentigern. It seems very realistic.

 

Summary: Patrick Thatcher’s older brother teases him, his mother worries about him, and his father defends him. His family sounds very much like any other, but somehow Patrick’s is far from average. In Patrick’s world, adults disappear into thin air, owls deliver mail, and the most popular sport in the country is played on broomsticks. Not to mention that every member of his family is, and always has been, a wizard. When your grandfather is a famous American veteran, being a Thatcher isn’t the easiest life to live. When his acceptance letter to the most prestigious American school of magic arrives addressed to another student, Patrick’s position in his former world begins to take a tumble—right along with the newly elected President of Magic’s approval ratings. With the Wizarding world’s eyes shifting toward a new wizard, can Patrick figure out just why his first year is off to a rocky start? Inspired by J.K. Rowling’s wondrous Harry Potter Series, Patrick Thatcher’s adventures of wizardry in the United States is a tale all its own while still respecting its English origins. Readers are sure to find that the magic across the pond is just as unforgettable.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 90184 Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/08/05 Updated: 09/04/06


Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 01/04/07 Title: Chapter 17: The Secret of the Compass

I enjoyed reading this, though I think you stuck a little too close to the original. I would have liked a little more contrast. Also, I figured out that Sumpton was the bad guy as soon as everyone (and him) kept saying to go to him if Snerkin did anything. I'd either make someone else the bad guy or be less adamant on the "Trust Sumptom!" front.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 05/17/06 Title: Chapter 2: Grandpa Thatcher's Gift

Wow - so far, this is really fascinating. The Mysterious Mr. Quinn and the unknown box... You really have a knack about making people interested. Thanks for pointing me to it!

Author's Response: You\'re welcome. The plot should be the driving force over everything, which is what I\'ve strived for. I notice a lot of fics in this genre focus so much on showcasing their idea of the American wizard school that the plot is greatly lacking in places. So, I haven\'t exaggerated the school to the point of ridiculousness, but enough so that the story has a suitable backdrop for its setting.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 05/17/06 Title: Chapter 3: Agnomon Square

I really like what you've done with Agnomon Square: the fact that it's really a circle, the dark shadowy parts: it's clearly wizarding, but also definitely *not* Diagon Alley and Knockturn Alley. I also like the way the wizarding government of America parallels the Muggle government, and I like the existence of Quodpot! All around, this is very creative and imaginative!

Author's Response: This is the kind of thing that helps make this seem as though it\'s American. We know the MoM parallels the Muggle Ministry so I figured I\'d just the same concept there, and the Republic of Magic as well as the President will have a huge effect on the overall story. It is hard to talk about American and not mention its government. Agnomon Square was the kind of thing that hit me over the hit instantly and came out just the way I wanted it. There are more adventures in store for the Square.

 
Reviewer: Vorona Signed
Date: 05/17/06 Title: Chapter 4: Onward to Wentwater

Ha! The Muggles think that witches and wizards look like goths! Great idea. I'm not entirely sure about the train, but I do like the broken elevator. Still... that's one of the things I've been having trouble with: how to get the students to the school. Everyone seems to use a train, which makes sense, although perhaps something like a plane or flying object would be more American.

In one of the stories I'm working on, there's a character from Beauxbatons, and I have them using the flying horse-drawn carriages for the students going to school. The guy is really surprised that he's using such a mundane means of transportation to get to Hogwarts.

Anyway, that's not really a criticism, since I don't really see anything wrong with a train, just a personal opinion. I'm still very much enjoying the story!

Author's Response: Yes, that was the next difficult task...I figured there would have to be a uniform way for students to get to the school that would have been indicative of when the school was setup as opposed to modern day travel. Instead, since there are students coming from all over the country I decided to make the journey to the train station the thing that is substantial. Patrick takes a portkey, but there are certainly other methods that will be introduced later...

 
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