Harry Potter, The Boy Who Lived
With the help of an ancient spell, his friends, and love, Harry embarks on his mission to destroy Voldemort. What will happen on the way? With Ginny, Ron, and Hermione by his side, will Harry find the solution? And where do Neville and Luna fit in all this?
Her Other Half, An Evil Most Insidious
Sequel to Harry Potter, The Boy Who Lived
It's up!!! Finally, eh?
Follow our favorite heroes continue their lives after the defeat of Voldemort. Someone wants revenge and will stop at nothing to get it. Is this a battle they can win or will they lose what is most precious to them?
I did get a chance to finish chapter 6 this weekend, and a good portion of chapter seven, which should make everyone a teensy bit happy... I hope. Don't throw rotten fruit, okay. Please?!?
I am going to see how the moderating process is going here, since it's been a long time since I've been posting on this site. If things get hectic, you can always try the story at WattPad, which might be posted faster. :)
Both of the stories are excellent! I check everyday to see if there are updates! Thank you for sharing your work.
This was fabulous! I love the twist at the end!!
Very interesting. The characterizations of each of the Weasley's seems well thought out. I felt for Errol. Good job!
Great start. Keep writing!!
I found your story and I was intrigued. I was not let down once I started to read it. I love the plot and character development. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
After finishing this chapter, I read the A/N at the top and was crushed to find out that you aren't continuing this fic. I know that it's AU now, after HBP and all, but it is a great start to what could be a fabulous fic.
The depth you bring to your characters, along with the detailed descriptions make it easy to get lost in the writing.
Ron's attitude was dead on. Harry and Hermione felt right on too.
Dumbledore seemed to be really affected by the war, which I wouldn't have thought too much of, until I read his thoughts. Now I wonder just how deeply the war affected those around Harry. In almost every fic we see how the war affects Harry, Ron, Hermione, and sometimes Ginny. It's not very often that we see the teachers' point of view either.
That would be a great idea for a one-shot. How each of the teachers feels about the war and the closing/opening of Hogwarts.
Enough babbling... I can't wait to go check out more of your stories.
I am hooked on Maeve! I love these stories.
This made me giggle. For quite a while. Thank you, I needed that, even if it has been quite a while since you posted it.
Author's Response: I\'m glad that you enjoyed it. At the time of writing, it was something that I needed a lot too!
Perfect. Like usual. Like veryone else, I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. Yours is the first I fell in love with, and the one I read when I need inspiration! I just thought everyone should know!
Author's Response: Thanks Khrys. I love your story too!
Excellent. I am looking forward to the conclusion. It took me a moment to re-read the oprevious chapters before I got the goblin issue at the end of this chapter. I catch on so quick. You do know how to use the smallest details. I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you Khrys. I'm catching the little details of your story too. Keep writing.
The ending made me cry. It was perfect. I couldn't imagine a better way to end. Of course, like everyone else, I am looking forward to a sequel should you choose to write it. Rock on!
Author's Response: That is what love stories are suppose to do, right. Okay, I'm starting to think of some plot bunnies. T
What wonderful story. Hermione as a young girl is something I have not seen before. I enjoyed seeing Kingsley portrayed as someone other than a stiff Auror. Your descriptions are setailed and wonderful. Thank you for sharing this!
Excellent beginning, I think I'm hooked. I loved the part about changing his path. It was described perfectly. Definitely made me think!
Another excellent chapter. Keep posting, as if I could stop you!
Written as a Term Challenge: Holidays Abroad submission for Slytherin.
Ohhh. I can't wait to see how Tom reacts. If he is acting this way without the potion, I wonder how he will react to the pregnancy. I think it is hysterical that Merope thinks that coffee could solve her love problems. She also seems to think (or have tricked herself into thinking) that Tom might really be able to love her. Your story is incredible, portraying all of the depth and emotion (or lack thereof) between Tom and Merope.
Author's Response: Aww, thanks. And, actually, I added in the coffee thing because I know a lot of people who like it a lot and it sort of was just humorus for them. Thanks for the review!
Oooh. What a jerk. Leaving in the middle of the night after trying to break Merope's spirit. not that I think Merope was justified in giving him the love potion inthe first place, mind you. What a cad. Your style of writing is so amazing and realistic. I can't get over how upset Tom's actions have made me, and how great your writing is to be able to describe them that well. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I\'m glad you\'re liking it.
How horrible for Merope. To be in a place she had once called home without any help or support. Aside from the lack of magic and money she could have gotten for it, I wonder if she regretted breaking her wand as it distanced her from the wizarding world. Then again, I wonder if she ever truly felt like she belonged.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you\'re getting that back-and-forth feeling, as that\'s what I wanted to give off. Thanks for the review!
Ah. The infamous locket. I wondered when she would venture home. I love the idea of Tom being with Sara and "throwing" money at Merope, as if she were a common street urchin and not the woman carrying his baby. This has been such a wonderful story. I'm sad that it ended, but I love all the insight it provided into the life of the mother of Voldemort. Excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ve always been intrigued by the story of Tom and Merope, and I\'m glad you liked this telling of it. Thanks for the reviews!
This is a fabulous prologue. You hage really captured the thoughts and feeling behing Merope and Tom as they embark onthe love potion adventure. I had honestly wondered how she had manged to slip him the potion, being so far removed from his world. You did an excelllent job of making it believable and real. I can't wait to get to the first chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the great comments.
This is amazingly realistic. The way you capture Tom and his behavious in the morning before he'd had his dose of the potion is like something straight out of the wizarding world. Merope seems to have resigned herself to a life of unpleasant mornings and false nights. I wonder how long she will be able to keep it up before the strain gets to her. You are writing both er and Tom's emotions so well, that it makes me wonder how she will react when she decides to stop giving him the potion.
Author's Response: Thanks, I love writing my characters. Tom and Merope are some of my favourite.