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Voldy Therapy by PadfootBaby
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 30]

Summary: A psychiatrist unexpectedly shows up on Voldemort’s doorstep one day and claims to be his therapist. A series of frightening and quite disturbing subjects are soon covered, including sunbathing, treacherous followers, unicorns, names, the hippie era, evil bunny rabbits, and hair. After each session, work becomes increasingly frustrating for Voldemort, until he realizes that the therapy has taken away his love for killing things. He angrily attempts to return to the life he used to have, but torturing Harry Potter and his dorky little friends doesn’t seem quite as fun as it used to...
Culminates in the final... er... battle? between Lord Voldemort and Harry.
Nominated for the 2007 Quicksilver Quills! R&R - and have fun!!!


Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4725 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
02/20/07 Updated: 04/30/07


Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 05/01/07 Title: Chapter 2: A Day in the Life

I seriously love this story.

Author's Response: =:D Thanks! *huggles*

 

Red for Love and Loss by Lalalalatina
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: The radiant red of the sky
Before darkness will begin.

The dusty red of the freckles
On her fair skin.


A sad poem. The summary is basically the title. Please read and review, this is the first poem I'm posting. ^_^

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 262 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/17/07 Updated: 03/20/07


Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 05/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is sad, but not really distressing. i get what you said in your profile about not usually being depressing. i can try to write something happy, but it is still very morid.

Author's Response: Yeah, makes me sad. Happy things are not easy to write. I can write something all dark, but tell me to write something happy and funny and I\'ll get all frusterated and give up after the first few lines. Thanks for the review!

 

Wizarding Tales for Bedtime by Roxy Black
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhen Ron and Hermione expect their first child, Ron searches for his childhood book of fairy tales.
This story is a collection of the finest Muggle fairytales, lovingly rewritten and retold to appeal to Wizarding children world-wide. Please note these tales were written before the release of Deathly Hallows. As such, the idea of Wizarding Fairy Tales was original at the time of writing. I must say that I was extremely excited to find Jo writing her own in the new book. (Though it was my idea first ;p )

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2651 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
05/05/07 Updated: 05/06/07


Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 05/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

update, please? pretty please?

 

Yellow by Vindictus Viridian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: In the sixth book, "... Harry skimmed through his copy of Advanced Potion-Making and found a heavily corrected Half-Blood Prince's version of "An Elixer to Induce Euphoria..." (p. 474). In those corrections lies another story.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Mental Disorders, Substance Abuse

Word count: 2876 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/12/07 Updated: 07/12/07


Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 03/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: -----

*wipes eyes*

You captured Snape's pain and feeling of betrayal so beautifully, I can't stop crying. His dependence on the euphoria potion is so desperate, it makes me want to give him a hug. Not that he would appreciate it.

 

Summary: This fanfiction writer laments the loss of her favourite dark lord in a re-donk-ulous poem.

This is not very complimentary to Volders, so don't tell him about it if you see him around, okay?

Deathly Hallows spoilers.

Four times nominated for Best Poem in the Quicksilver Quills Awards!

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 307 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/02/07 Updated: 08/03/07


Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One and Only!

i love it. 'ear, 'ear!

Author's Response: Hooray! I\'m so glad you like it!

 

Little Witches by shewhoguards
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: “Much less interesting that way.” Sirius retorted cheerfully. He took a deep breath, and then began, “Narcissa’s crying in her room, Bellatrix is threatening to curse her hair into falling out if she ever dares to speak of You-Know-Who like that again, and to curse whoever you’re seeing with the pox. Your parents are despairing of all three of you, and Mother says that you’re a disgrace and a waste of every opportunity you’ve ever been given. Oh, and Regulus is howling.” He grinned at his cousin, face so bright that it was hard to resist laughing. “Merry Christmas?”


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 8534 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
10/14/07 Updated: 10/19/07


Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 05/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

update? please.

 

Summary: Sadie Murray is your typical American girl, stuck in the middle of her family. Sadie has an older sister who is popular, talented at everything she does, and lavishes in the respect she garners. Sadie's younger sister is pretty, adorable, cute, and uses these characteristics to cover up the fact that she's a nasty little brat. But Sadie's luck just might change when she receives a letter saying she has been accepted to The Salem Institute of Magical Learning.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 60522 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
11/14/07 Updated: 08/07/08


Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 07/25/08 Title: Chapter 9: How To Write With A Quill

Excellent story so far, but I did see a few typos or odd sentences I'd like to point out.

"Sadie was almost ran into a girl who was hustling up the steps with a wizard hat in hand as she ran to the upper dorms."

The 'was seems unnecessary, or perhaps a 'by' should be inserted after 'into'?

"He was about halfway up to the girl's underclassmen rooms when without warning, the entire staircase slipped away beneath both Timothy and Sadie, becoming a smooth chute, almost like a slide."

Perhaps a comma before 'without warning', and maybe removing 'beneath both Timothy and Sadie' as we know they are both on the stairs and the next sentence describes Sadie falling.

"enough so the culprit who ran up the stairs could hear"

Perhaps change 'so' to 'that'?

"Sadie was happy to see that most of the people entering the Central Hall were wearing either their uniforms, their school robes, or clothes Muggle clothes."

Maybe delete the first 'clothes'

"Kelsey almost choked the eggs she had taken with a laugh."

Not sure what is meant here, did she almost choke on the eggs by laughing?

"let Kelsey take a letter off its leg."

Off his leg, as you already called the owl a he

"taken to reading books in a tree on the east side of The Lawn,"

Is he actually in the tree, or under it?

"people like the daring and nerves in the people who play it."

Perhaps 'in those who play it'?

"Sorry, Professor! I guess I studied read too far ahead in the book. Let me put that back,"

This is just a confusing sentence to me.

"needed to learn in this new world she entered, "

Perhaps 'she had entered'

"spinning clockwise in a circle why petting his broom's handle."

'While petting his broom's handle.'?

"Others, such as Nakin, Amna, and over three-fourths of the Noctowls, though Tiffany Chan, Raven Fox, and Alaa Jasim did it splendidly."

I believe part of this sentence is missing.

Really, it is a wonderful story and these are just suggestions to make it an easier read. Please don't be offended.

Author's Response: Not offending at all! Thanks for the suggestions; it's much appreciated. :] Thanks for reading as well - I'm glad you enjoy the story so far.

 

Challah and Pumpkin Juice by Calico
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 119]

Summary: Tzipporah Stein, a Jew living in Vienna, Austria on the eve of WWII, is shocked when she gets a letter telling her she is a witch. The volatile state of Europe as it waits for both a muggle and a wizarding war to begin has prompted Hogwarts to take in students from many countries. How will Tzipporah handle magic, mischief, and even a little romance while trying to be true to her religion and culture at the same time?

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 32994 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/24/08 Updated: 07/26/08


Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven: The Detention

March 13, 1938- Nazi union with Austria. Although it was more like Austria being seized by the Nazis.

Author's Response: Yay! I\'m so glad somebody got it! Now anyone who reads these reviews (and I imagine very few people do, besides me) will know what coming up next...

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 07/27/08 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Woah. This story was just so amazing, especially this chapter. I cannot tell you how very much it has touched me.

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 05/23/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Chanukah Revelations

I'm so glad that Tzipporah can be herself with her friends. I also have an inkling that a certain young Potter might be finding out soon. Give us an update soon as you can, please.

~Bella

 

Shining Through Blackness by luinrina
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 49]

Summary: Past Featured StoryIsla was born into a well-known and respected family: the Blacks. She grew up with their traditions and was proud to be who she was – until she met someone who showed her that what she knew was not the only world.

Follow a young witch through her teenage years and discover how a traditional one will change and rebel against what she believed was the only truth.

~ * ~


Due to plot development in chapters nine and ten I've changed the warning from "None" to "Sexual Situations" for the rest of the story. In some chapters there are still punishments which do not qualify as “Abuse”; those are meant as reprimands for bad behaviour, a common method in the middle of the nineteenth century. If you can’t stand children being smacked by parents or others as well as any sexual situation occuring, do not read that story. You have been warned…


Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 75406 Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Published:
05/14/08 Updated: 05/22/10


Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten - ... Sixteen

This chapter was definitately worth the wait. You described the conflicting feelings of Savaric and Atreus beutifully, and their duel was vivid in my mind. I really appreciate the hard work you put into the chapter, and am quite glad you battled through until you were satisfied with it instead of submitting it beforehand. I can't wait for the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you for having a lot of patience with me. *huggles loyal reader* And know that chapter eleven is as good as written; it just needs another paragraph and some polishing up after chapter ten turned a slightly different route than it had been originally intended, and it should be with my beta at the beginning of next week at the latest. Thanks for not letting me down and for reviewing.

~Bine

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine - Sweet...

Solaris the cat, Solaris the Hufflepuff....I like the Hufflepuff better. Although, he seems to be a bit stalkerish (is that a word?) around Isa in this chapter. Not that I blame him. The problem being, of course, that Savaric was only pretending to be kind and I think he's not; yet Isla doesn't realize that he is a fake.

Another great chapter and I hope you get through the writer's block soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for another review, and I\'m working on chapter ten. I have ideas again, but currently paralelly write for a challenge which is a little bit more urgent in my eyes because of a deadline. But I try to not let my STB readers down. In three weeks I\'m on working holiday and will then have time to dedicate myself some more to STB.

Robert isn\'t stalking Isla, they just run into each other quite regularly considering the fact that both live and learn in the same castle. Funny though he seems to have only eyes for Isla...

Ah, and Savaric... I admit, I\'ve grown attached to him and don\'t want to present him in a too bad light, but it\'s hard - very hard - to stay true to my story. I\'m tinkering with another unthought of plot twist, so watch out for how the story will continue.

Thanks again for being a dedicated reader - and repetitive reviewer. Your words make my day! Cheers.

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 05/20/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two - Silver Fir

Is the legend foreshadowing? I hope so. I love daydreamers, and for some reason Isla puts me in mind of a certain blond Ravenclaw. I wonder what truth Isla will be looking for; maybe the truth about who she is?

Author's Response: Of course it is, why else would I put it in, then? ;p And maybe... stay tuned to find out. Thank your for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 05/25/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five - Stanton Drew

Oh, I don't like Savaric. Shooting glass daggers at someone, even Gryffindors, is appalling! I understand why Isla was disappointed about not finding out what the girl in the legend was searching for. I think if she found out know it would give her a huge clue into her own life and its just to early for that. As for the betrothal ceremony, I love how you gave the Circles of Stanton Drew their own powerful magic. I love the idea that relics that are baffling to us Muggles are of great import in the Wizarding World. Please update with chapter six soon because I really want to see what Isla decides to say.

Off topic but that was my first ever mention in an author's note!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for your steady reviews, clabbert2101. I\'m happy that you liked the scene with the Circles of Stanton Drew; I had to look for a while until I found a site that served my purposes.

Chapter 6 is currently with my beta (again, there were parts that needed rewriting due to understanding issues). But I\'ll hurry with another update.

By the way, what did you mean with your last sentence? (You can answer me that in a PM when going to my bio-site. Thanks in advance.)

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 06/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six - Solaris Stella

Yes, a Hufflepuff. I knew he had to show up eventually. And we finally get down to Isla's search for truth, or at least its beginning. All from the mouth of a second year Muggleborn. Who would have guessed? I really like the scene where they both discover the information needed to complete their project, and I especially like Hitchens comparison of Isla to the Cheshire Cat. Alice and Wonderland is one of my favorites. And how Hitchens sent Isla a book of fairy tales to Isla for Christmas? Genius. I hope it becomes her favorite book. This is probably my favorite chapter so far! Keep up the good work and take as long as you need on the updates,

~Bella

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I\'m glad you liked the chapter. The scene with Robert\'s comparison wasn\'t planned, it just came in while writing the paragraphs, as did the scene with the Christmas present. I\'m hoping to update around the weekend, so stay tuned - it\'s going to get even more interesting as it is even now.

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 05/20/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Slytherin

Hmm....Slytherin, is it? The hat is right this shall indeed be interesting. Even a hat can provide a good hint, and now I want to know the truth even more than Isla.

Author's Response: Thank your for sticking. Chapter four is going into the queue right away.

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven - Halloween

AH! AN UPDATE! *squishes*

Other than that, I feel so bad for Isla and Robert. I can tell that Isla feels trapped, and Robert is trying to help. I just hope it works out.

Author's Response: *squishes back* I'm happy that you liked it. Thanks for the review. And chapter twelve is in the queue.

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 11/08/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve - Search

I was wondering when the silver fir would show up. Is Isla's wand made from the first silver fir? How intriguing. We see a return to Isla the Dreamer in this chapter, and I'm quite glad because I've been missing the daydreaming Black. I feel like the main plot is being set in motion, and this is quite possibly my favorite chapter.

I do have a few nitpicks, though.

wounds its way across the firmament

'winds' would be much more appropriate here.


wide-awake yet from the sleep still stinging eyes

The phrasing here is awkward. It would read better if you eliminated 'from the sleep'


another time that night the dream’s images

I think in this instance 'for the last time' would work much better.


Thanks so much for another great chapter! *huggles*

Author's Response: *huggles back* Thanks, Bella! And I'll have a look at the sentences you nitpicked. I'm afraid though another update will have to wait. Sorry. I see what I can do with writing. One day I'll finish the story for sure.

~Bine

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 06/18/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight - Seeing Beyond

Who will come out on top, Savaric or Isla? Hmm...quite difficult to guess. The trust that has grown between Isla and her mother is a wonderful touch and I'm glad you've included it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your comment, and I\'m glad I took on the idea when it hopped into my mind the first time. I somehow had the urge to show the readers more about the relationships within the family.

As for who will come out on top: read on and find out.

 
Reviewer: clabbert2101 Signed
Date: 06/09/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven - Surprises

I knew Savaric was no good. I'm quite glad Isla has finally wised up to that fact. The continuance of Robert worked out very well. His is and Isla's relationship has become more strained, but I'm sure they'll pull through, especially with Isla's mother's advice. "You are at first you." Take that to heart, and Isla will be better off than most people, even though it probably won't seem that way at first.

Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughts. I\'m happy that you\'re still reading and continuously reviewing. And although I\'m bursting to tell you how this story goes on, I\'m afraid you (and all other readers) will have to wait ;p

My beta\'s computer is up and running again, and I\'ve got back chapter eight around an hour ago. So hopefully it won\'t be too much longer until it\'s going online.

 
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