hilarious! best chapter yet! and still more holes!
Author's Response: Yes, and it\'s a wonder no one has noticed them before now.
cool. i can't wait for the next ch.!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the review!
i always loved these chapters.....
Author's Response: I\'m glad!
Author's Response: I\'m glad to hear it!
Yay! You updated!
Author's Response: Yes, I know\'s it been a long while. I\'ve been distracted and stressed, but I have but one thing to say: I\'m back! Back...until other things distract me. Quote: \"I was on my way to conquer the world, when I got distracted by something shiny.\"
Author's Response: Looking back, I see very bad language. My first response says: I know\'s it been, but should be: I know it\'s been
It's a good chapter but you might want to go over it for some grammer issues.
Thank you for updating quickly.
Author's Response: Grammer has always been a killer...for me, at least. I\'ll proofread my other chapters, but don\'t be surprised if I miss things. I\'m only human, after all!
Author's Response: Thank you. I feared that it would be disturbing.
you know, i kind-of guessed the sprinkles used to be humans...
Author's Response: Where else would the human souls in Heaven have gone? Your guess was a good one!
Author's Response: Yes, his presence was very unexpected. Plus...he can sort of zap people. Anyway, let\'s hope things turn out well.
and so, the confrontation begins.....GO TEAM DUMBY!!!!
Author's Response: Chapter 12 is when the confrontation gets worse...
hmm....yes, of course i see no underlying message whatsoever.......well update so we can all appriecate not seeing and what the non-exsistent underlying message.
Author's Response: :D Thanks for reviewing. I will update soon, but first I need to wait for the first chapter of my SHINY AND NEW fic.
once again, a chapter almost equal to the brilliance of jkr herself. i really enjoyed the exploding pumpkins, and finding out how the feud between snape and the mauraders. i just got my first fanfic up, would you review it?
Author's Response: Of course I\'ll review! Now, I\'m going to do the modest thing and deny that it is almost equal to JKR. But it\'s so lovely to hear that, even if I don\'t really believe it! Thank you! Thank you so much! :D:D
wow. that was probably the best chapter so far. sirius really did need to do some growing up soon.
Author's Response: Yes, i think so too.I\'m glad you really liked it, because I spent ages writing that one ... Lol, thanks for your review!
other than a few spelling mistakes, it was really good. can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah, I do try and sort out the spelling errors, but, hey, a lot slip through, even when I painstakingly check it (Also, since I\'m english, some spellings are slightly different. Colour/color or grey/gray) But I\'m glad you liked it!
wow! this is a really great story! keep at it, i cant wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks, hopefully chapter 3 will be accepted soon ... Any day now (in theory) ... Thanks for your review!
its good. but when sirius was first thinking about the map, i dont think you meant him to want to ask himself.
Author's Response: Right, thanks for pointing that out. I\'ve changed it to Remus, I must of got mixed up ... Thanks!
Author's Response: Hey, you\'re my 60th reviewer! You get the wonderful prize of ... *thinks* some handy oxygen! (The next breath you take has been delivered with thanks from me, enjoy!)
the suspense continues.
Author's Response: Indeedy it does!
oh! now sirius is dead! thats not a good thing, but he's with lola. YAY! (i'm just making myself feel better)
Author's Response: Good idea. Keep thinking that. Thank you for reviewing!
*cannot believe she didn't review the last chapter when it came out*
Other than that, I was just popping in to tell you that I was voting for this story in the RQSQ. This was the first Marauder Era story I read, and one of the first in general. It's been on my favorites list since I first read it, oh years ago. It's still my favorite Sirius fic, and gives me a warm-fuzzy feeling (between the laughter and sobs) with each reread. And there have been several. You're an excellent author and definitely deserve the prize.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, that's so sweet, and I'm really glad people still seem to like this, even though I thought I'd given up on it ages ago ... maybe it's not as bad as I thought. Thanks very much anyway ... I get warm and fuzzy feelings from reviews like this!
i knew it had to come, but....
:"( i hate the parts where people die.
Author's Response: Me too ... But it\'s just so unavoidable ...