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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
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12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: GryffindorGoddess711 Signed
Date: 03/11/06 Title: None

awwww this is so cute and sweet! you've really captured the characters' personalities ... well in my opinion anyway! i read your first version of this some time ago (cant rememver when lol!) and i agree that it has definately improved! The story line is beautiful. I liked James loyalty to his friends, and I thought you brought that out well, especially when he gets a bit angry at Lily. I especially LOVED the way you brought out Lily's feelings, and how its just so sudden that it all happens. I mean, at the time, she doesn't know, and she's confused ... all that! I think that was really nice! And of course Sirius! omgg funiii ... a very nice ending (Sirius' last line!)! Anyway, I think this review is growing and growing so I better stop now! Keep writing (and do another chapter if u can!!!!) xXx

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