Hope you all loved Deathly Hallows as much as I did. Despite the fact that my stories are now in a parrallel universe, I will be continueing them but I doubt I can make them last very long as a result. You'll see! Thank you so much for being patient with me. I know I should have done this a long time ago but better late than never, right? (Percy's sentiments)
Yay! I’m in Gryffindor! I was not expecting to be… I was sure to be a Hufflepuff or Ravenclaw!
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Yay! That was really good! Your surprise of an Epilogue was great! If only JK Rowling would do the same thing with her series. Well done!
What a beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Well done for your achievements.
Also, 'Dumbledore used to really like breakfast' - I love that line :)
Really great chapter! The tension and dangerous vibes (or radiation from the computer maybe) was certainly there! I applaude you.
That was great! Finally Lily admits it! Well done and write more soon please!
I loved that chapter! Write again soon please!
Author's Response: Hey! Ooh, I'm glad you liked the chapter! I just submitted chapter twenty, so it should be up sometime soon. Thanks for reviewing!
I really liked that chapter!
Author's Response: Heheh, hi there! I'm really glad you liked the chapter! It's always great to hear such nice feedback! Thanks for reviewing!
I really enjoyed that! Update soon again please!!
Author's Response: Heheh, I'm flattered that you enjoyed it! I'll try to update as soon as I can! Thanks a bunch!
That was GREAT! Your one of my favourite stories if not my favourite! 10/10
Author's Response: Hi! Oh, wow, thank-you! I'm glad you like the story so far! Thanks once again!
That was a really great chapter....I could feel myself have the shock of Sirius dispite me havibng read the books. Also, your way of writing Snape was spot on - I really felt dislike towards him. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I dislike Snape myself, so that part was actually rather fun. He\'s so snarky (not that I know exactly what that means, but I like it). Thanks lots!
I really liked the emotion put into it. Really well written. Update again soon please :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try!
Sweet! It flowed well!
Author's Response: Thanks! Fluidity was what I was aiming for!
That was a great chapter! The fighting between Lily and James was really well done and Julie *shudders*! Write more soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, there is more Julie to come. I'll try to update soon!
That was so sweet! I like the way it all connects. eg. when you explain why lupin is teaching peter how to transform the quill!! Continue soon please :)
Author's Response: Thanks. =D
I reviewed the third chapter not knowing that the fourth was written already! I got so excited when I saw it but as it was the middle of the night here I had to go to bed! I really like this chapter, it has something JKRowlinf-esque to it. Mystery person??!! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Wow, *smiles proudly* thank you so much!! I love mystery stories but whenever I try to write them they turn out... weird. Chapter five has been in queue since *checks date* the 16th. Thanks again for the awesome review!
Author's Response: Wow, I read my response and it sounded very odd. What I meant was that I love reaing mystery stories and that always makes me want to put that type of stuff in my stories. But whenever I try to, my stories turn out boring and predictable. So if there is anything in my story that is even slightly mysterious, it is probably completely by accident. =D. Anyway, hope I didn't confuse you to much...
That was so great!! I really liked it and think that you did stick to the characters well! Somehow, Lily reminded me a bit of Harry and since people always compare him to James, it was a clever thing (even if you may not have meant it!) Just something small: for one paragraph I think it goes to the third person (when Ashley asks Lily to see her puppy) and throughout the rest of the story it was from Lily's point of view. Really, there are no more criticisms for me to make because it was creative and original! 10/10 for sure!
Author's Response: wow thanks i'm hoping to get the second chapter ASAP i just submited it but it got rejected oh well i just need to work on my grammer according to the mods... but no i didn't mean to have lily like harry but if she is oh well... but wow everyone thinks this is really original...i'm surprised...Thanks again...
That was so sweet :) I love relationship between Lily and Remus and I can imagine that actually happening! Loved it, thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Hopefully soon! I\'ve had some time for college work recently to work on it. :-)
I love the cliffhanger...and the idea of remus/lily is really good because JKR said that he had feelings for her (I think!) Really enjoyed it...update soon
Author's Response: Yes, I like that too. I'm trying very hard to write it so we don't see Lily hurt Remus. That he has feelings for her, but he doesn't mind that she and James end up together. I'm getting ready to submit chapter three!
I really liked the way you portrayed the characters - especially Lily. Really very good. Well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like Lily. Since we don't know a lot about her I have been enjoying creating her as I see her and loving it. :-)
Great start. I like it....as I am new to this I would have loved it if when Sirius shouted "Bacon!" that him and James should have banged heads....explaining a lo. I liked it though...continue soon please
Author's Response: Yeah, that would have been funny. I'll keep in mind ideas like that. Thanks for reviewing!
That was a good second chapter! I hope Hermione figures out her feelings. We haven't seen much of Ron's pov maybe we will later though. Thanks for updating, update again soon spease :)
Author's Response: It's mainly in Hermione and Tonk's pov's, but you'll figure out what Ron is thinking later on. I'm really glad you liked it!!!!!!!!!!!